MANIAC said:well you are using all c4d for the bg, dont do that, umm text on everyone draws eyes awau from the focal,
work on contrast and color
Z E R O said:-contrast is extremly too high
-compo is not good
-flow is not good
-colours are bad
Snyper121 said:-Change the colors to something that blends better
-Put the render and c4d's and find the best spot for it to help it blend and flow better.
Snyper121 said:One more thing, with the text, dont make it so big and bright. Make it smaller and make it blend with the colors of the render. Your text draws you in, you want the render to do that.
Snyper121 said:Maniac has some good tutorials, that probably could help you with these issues. If you want to look at one, ask me. I looked at his tuts to make myself better.
Snyper121 said:Here is a good one, if you follow it correctly, you should find new tools and styles you never even knew about. Or at least i didnt lol.
http://graphics.maniacstudios.com/tut2.html
thanks man :] !Snyper121 said:Its looks awesome! You can see a lot of improvement. You should of got rid of the c4d on the render with your eraser. Anyways, its your best yet. Keep it up.
thanks again.Snyper121 said:I think im going to go make one. Be back later. Nice job again though
Snyper121 said:Your newest one, has gotten better. Try to keep your renders in the middle though. The colors match and the flow is a bit better. Keep it up.