Scarm Rising

Hellooooo,
I was hoping you guys could help me out. I'm an author and I am working on a science fiction book. Right now I am trying to get it out there. So far I have gotten good feedback but I am trying to extend the circle of readers from just my friends and family.
I figured some people on here might be interested! If not thats cool too.
This is the prologue: http://scarmrising.blogspot.ca/

Hey everybody,
I saw a post saying it was cool to post pieces of creative writing. I am currently working on a book myself.

The story takes place on a future earth, were one man has brought the three countries that make up North America under one flag. But something isn't right...

Here is the prologue for the book that I posted on my blog: http://scarmrising.blogspot.ca/
I would LOVE feedback, positive or negitive.

Thanks!
Phil

Philip Drost said:

I saw a post saying it was cool to post pieces of creative writing.

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Absolutely!

Philip Drost said:

Here is the prologue for the book that I posted on my blog: http://scarmrising.blogspot.ca/

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Phil, if I could offer one suggestion.... introduce earlier what "Scarm" is.

Thanks. I will try and make that work! I appreciate it