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great job! i love the pace. it's perfect! can't wait for more, especially reguarding emily! 
a mission to spain
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aliaschica47
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thanks im gonna write smore soon but if ur a fan of amy irving check out yentil i watched it last weekend and she did a great job in it
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ok i cant write much this time but here is what i have so far...
SYDNEY POV-
Ok it just hit me, i cant beleive it i am really in france with vaughn, it is not a dream, i cant beleive it, and he gave me a ring, i am dreaming, no, this isnt happening, is it?
"syd, come on i wanna show you somehting" vaughn said getting up and draging me along
"what" i said out of breath
"youll see"
where is he taking me
**no more pov
After 10 minutes of Vaughn running and sydney being dragged by vaughn they were both out of breath
"look"
Sydney looked up and over the small hill was the most beautiful sight she had ever seen
"wh.. where are we" she stammeded stunned at the senic view
"come on" he started pulling her
"not again"syd groaned
"come on you will like this"
"you want to?" he said pointing at the boat
"sure why not"
"ok lets just go grab some food and we can eat while we sail"
"alrighty" sydney said
"hey vaughn i think im gonna stay here and watch the view, i you dont mind gettin the food by yourself"
"of course not hun"
"ok see you"
**syds thoughts while mike is away
this is soo relaxing whoa hold up did he say hun? wait he did, oh my god he called me hun, i cant beleive it. Not even danny said that , well that was because of his accent but still.
A little later
"hey sweetie" a voice from behind sydney said
"hey, got the food"
"are you kiddin me" he said holding up a bag brimming full with food
"ready"
"im all yours"
more later, i like the pace to, i dont really like it when people write fan fics about syd and vaughn but it is stuff they would never do
so im trying to make it as realistic as possible!!!
SYDNEY POV-
Ok it just hit me, i cant beleive it i am really in france with vaughn, it is not a dream, i cant beleive it, and he gave me a ring, i am dreaming, no, this isnt happening, is it?
"syd, come on i wanna show you somehting" vaughn said getting up and draging me along
"what" i said out of breath
"youll see"
where is he taking me
**no more pov
After 10 minutes of Vaughn running and sydney being dragged by vaughn they were both out of breath
"look"
Sydney looked up and over the small hill was the most beautiful sight she had ever seen
"wh.. where are we" she stammeded stunned at the senic view
"come on" he started pulling her
"not again"syd groaned
"come on you will like this"
"you want to?" he said pointing at the boat
"sure why not"
"ok lets just go grab some food and we can eat while we sail"
"alrighty" sydney said
"hey vaughn i think im gonna stay here and watch the view, i you dont mind gettin the food by yourself"
"of course not hun"
"ok see you"
**syds thoughts while mike is away
this is soo relaxing whoa hold up did he say hun? wait he did, oh my god he called me hun, i cant beleive it. Not even danny said that , well that was because of his accent but still.
A little later
"hey sweetie" a voice from behind sydney said
"hey, got the food"
"are you kiddin me" he said holding up a bag brimming full with food
"ready"
"im all yours"
more later, i like the pace to, i dont really like it when people write fan fics about syd and vaughn but it is stuff they would never do
so im trying to make it as realistic as possible!!!
aliaschica47
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cuddles in vaughns arms syd enjoyed as the cool sea breeze played with her hair.
"so this is heaven" she mutteres under her breath
"what?" michael said almost groggily like he had been asleep
"oh nothing"
"so where are we headed captian?" syd asked vaughn
"see that" he pointed to a small speck of green
"vaugly but yeah"
"its a small secluded island, syd once you get there you will never leave"
"wow" yeah its really beautiful
"hey what are we going to when we go back to L....."
she couldnt finish becuause Vaughn had swooped down and kissed
"well if you do that every time I talk about wo..."
she couldnt finish again because vaughn had put his fingers to her lips
"remember our promise"
"fine" syd said in a playful voice
"ohohohohohoohhh"
"what now" vaughn asked
"turn this song up i really like it"
"hey syd are you ok" vaughn said running over to her side
sniff"listen"
* i dont have anything or do with or own this song
Oohh ...
There are places I remember
All my life
Though some have changed
Some forever
Not for better
Some have gone
And some remain
All these places have their moments
With lovers and friends
I still can recall
Some are dead and some are living
In my life
I've loved them all
But of all these friends and lovers
There is no one
Compares with you
And these memories lose their meaning
When I think of love
As something new
Though I know I'll never lose affection
For people and things
That went before
I know I'll often stop and think about them
In my life
I love you more
Though I know I'll never lose affection
For people and things
That went before
I know I'll often stop and think about them
In my life
I love you more
Oohh ...
In my life
I love you more
sniff sniff sob
"hey look what is wrong?" vaughn said really worried supporing her head in his hands
"well when i first heard the song i was on my way home from Tipaei and then i found danny, and then the next time I heard it, sniff, it was right after we met. michael it explaines my life perfectly, think about it, it just i dont know it just makes me cry" she sobbed on
michael moved laying down on the hard wood floor of the boat sydney curled up next to him as the radio played no ad on and on
****i hope you like it , if you didnt recognize it it is the providence theme and for some reason it always makes me cry and the song is sung by Chantal Kreviazuk!!!
"so this is heaven" she mutteres under her breath
"what?" michael said almost groggily like he had been asleep
"oh nothing"
"so where are we headed captian?" syd asked vaughn
"see that" he pointed to a small speck of green
"vaugly but yeah"
"its a small secluded island, syd once you get there you will never leave"
"wow" yeah its really beautiful
"hey what are we going to when we go back to L....."
she couldnt finish becuause Vaughn had swooped down and kissed
"well if you do that every time I talk about wo..."
she couldnt finish again because vaughn had put his fingers to her lips
"remember our promise"
"fine" syd said in a playful voice
"ohohohohohoohhh"
"what now" vaughn asked
"turn this song up i really like it"
"hey syd are you ok" vaughn said running over to her side
sniff"listen"
* i dont have anything or do with or own this song
Oohh ...
There are places I remember
All my life
Though some have changed
Some forever
Not for better
Some have gone
And some remain
All these places have their moments
With lovers and friends
I still can recall
Some are dead and some are living
In my life
I've loved them all
But of all these friends and lovers
There is no one
Compares with you
And these memories lose their meaning
When I think of love
As something new
Though I know I'll never lose affection
For people and things
That went before
I know I'll often stop and think about them
In my life
I love you more
Though I know I'll never lose affection
For people and things
That went before
I know I'll often stop and think about them
In my life
I love you more
Oohh ...
In my life
I love you more
sniff sniff sob
"hey look what is wrong?" vaughn said really worried supporing her head in his hands
"well when i first heard the song i was on my way home from Tipaei and then i found danny, and then the next time I heard it, sniff, it was right after we met. michael it explaines my life perfectly, think about it, it just i dont know it just makes me cry" she sobbed on
michael moved laying down on the hard wood floor of the boat sydney curled up next to him as the radio played no ad on and on
****i hope you like it , if you didnt recognize it it is the providence theme and for some reason it always makes me cry and the song is sung by Chantal Kreviazuk!!!
aliaschica47
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CLUNK
"hey syd" Vaughn said to the half asleep syd
"no Michael I love you" she said in her sleep "no dot leave please no MICHAEL NOOOOOO" she woke up
"Sid are you ok" Vaughn said rushing to her side
beads of sweat were running down her head
pantpantpant"yeah, god you are alive" she said hugging him
"I love you and I never want to lose you"
"I know its ok it was all just a dream"
"but it seemed so real, you, you were right there, you saved me from getting shot but you got shot and you you you died"
breaking down she started to cry again
"come on syd, get up you will be ok, look I’m fine see" he said supporting her as she stood up[/I]
she said staring a the island
"ohh my god Michael you were right"
"come on lets go" Vaughn said pulling her up
"look it is the perfect place for a picnic" syd squealed
as they ate they stared out at the water
"so what happened to Alice?"
syd asked
"ohh im sorry no you don’t have to tell me I’m sorry I asked"
"nonono I’ll tell you, after her dad died she said she needed someone who was willing to be commited, so i left"
"hey I;m sorry i didn’t know"
"its ok I’m glad you asked, I’m glad I ended things we weren’t meant for each other, and I couldn’t get my mind off of you so it wasn’t that fair"
"I feel sooo loved" syd said mockingly
"hey, I am opening up to you, be grateful" Vaughn shot back at her
"fine, fine, but teasin you if funner"
"funer? is that even a word" Vaughn teased
"oh shut up" syd said her mouth full with her salad
"o fine"
'whoa Vaughn I don’t feel very good"
"what syd are you ok, syd, syd" he screamed as she collapsed
pulling out his cell he typed in the emergency number
"we are sorry but there is no service available from where you are"
"god, why now stupid phone"
rushing back to syd he eventually revived her
"what Michael where, where am I, wait I know we are in Normandy and everything but what happened"
"I don’t know I just passes out"
"come on we need to get you back to our room, where you can lay down"
"no Michael i want to stay here, please, and if you wont let me then I wont move"
"syd I hate to do this but it is for your own good" he said as he scooped he up into his arms
man this sucks i cant even get mad at him because I am just about melting in his arms, man Vaughn why do you have to be so hot
"there we go" Vaughn said setting Sydney down
"aww man" she said attempting to get back up, but she couldn’t she didn’t have enough strength.
Finally they reached shore
"come on" Vaughn said reaching down to pick up syd
"no I got it I can walk myself"
she said but halfway through standing up she collapsed
"ok so i cant"
picking syd up he carried her the entire mile back to the bed and breakfast
reaching there room vaughn carefully laid syd down on the bed and went to go get the first aid kit. Coming back he checked for sprains and her temperature, which was 101F. "You must just be sick and your fever made you collapse. You should be ok by tomorrow, a couple of times watching pay per view star wars should get you feelin better in no time" Turning on the TV Vaughn picked up the remote and they watched star wars four times. waking up Vaughn realized it was 11:30 am and that star wars had kept playing and that there movie bill would be alot more then they expected. "oh well" laying back down he stared at syd. "hey" she said turning over "hey" he said you know what this reminds of a certain incident a couple months ago doesn’t it. "Yes except that then never accepted to end up here" "neither did I , but i did hope" "always" he responded
"mmm lets see how your fever is, because if you are better, would you be up to any swimming?" "me swimming, is that even a question" syd teased Reaching in the cabinet to pull out the thermometer "don’t waste your time, i can tell I don’t have a fever" "well just to be safe"
"Vaughn I’m fine" "ok fine we will have it your way"
"ok I’m gonna take a shower" syd said "I’m gonna go jogging so meet me outside in an hour?"
"Make it 45 minutes and im your woman"
"ok" Vaughn said" cant wait to see me?" he said laughing
"ok Mr. hot shot, out i sing when I am in the shower and unless you don’t want eardrums i suggest you leave"
"fine" covering his ears and smiling back at syd he ran out the door
ok i fixed the mistakes
it should be better now
"hey syd" Vaughn said to the half asleep syd
"no Michael I love you" she said in her sleep "no dot leave please no MICHAEL NOOOOOO" she woke up
"Sid are you ok" Vaughn said rushing to her side
beads of sweat were running down her head
pantpantpant"yeah, god you are alive" she said hugging him
"I love you and I never want to lose you"
"I know its ok it was all just a dream"
"but it seemed so real, you, you were right there, you saved me from getting shot but you got shot and you you you died"
breaking down she started to cry again
"come on syd, get up you will be ok, look I’m fine see" he said supporting her as she stood up[/I]
she said staring a the island
"ohh my god Michael you were right"
"come on lets go" Vaughn said pulling her up
"look it is the perfect place for a picnic" syd squealed
as they ate they stared out at the water
"so what happened to Alice?"
syd asked
"ohh im sorry no you don’t have to tell me I’m sorry I asked"
"nonono I’ll tell you, after her dad died she said she needed someone who was willing to be commited, so i left"
"hey I;m sorry i didn’t know"
"its ok I’m glad you asked, I’m glad I ended things we weren’t meant for each other, and I couldn’t get my mind off of you so it wasn’t that fair"
"I feel sooo loved" syd said mockingly
"hey, I am opening up to you, be grateful" Vaughn shot back at her
"fine, fine, but teasin you if funner"
"funer? is that even a word" Vaughn teased
"oh shut up" syd said her mouth full with her salad
"o fine"
'whoa Vaughn I don’t feel very good"
"what syd are you ok, syd, syd" he screamed as she collapsed
pulling out his cell he typed in the emergency number
"we are sorry but there is no service available from where you are"
"god, why now stupid phone"
rushing back to syd he eventually revived her
"what Michael where, where am I, wait I know we are in Normandy and everything but what happened"
"I don’t know I just passes out"
"come on we need to get you back to our room, where you can lay down"
"no Michael i want to stay here, please, and if you wont let me then I wont move"
"syd I hate to do this but it is for your own good" he said as he scooped he up into his arms
man this sucks i cant even get mad at him because I am just about melting in his arms, man Vaughn why do you have to be so hot
"there we go" Vaughn said setting Sydney down
"aww man" she said attempting to get back up, but she couldn’t she didn’t have enough strength.
Finally they reached shore
"come on" Vaughn said reaching down to pick up syd
"no I got it I can walk myself"
she said but halfway through standing up she collapsed
"ok so i cant"
picking syd up he carried her the entire mile back to the bed and breakfast
reaching there room vaughn carefully laid syd down on the bed and went to go get the first aid kit. Coming back he checked for sprains and her temperature, which was 101F. "You must just be sick and your fever made you collapse. You should be ok by tomorrow, a couple of times watching pay per view star wars should get you feelin better in no time" Turning on the TV Vaughn picked up the remote and they watched star wars four times. waking up Vaughn realized it was 11:30 am and that star wars had kept playing and that there movie bill would be alot more then they expected. "oh well" laying back down he stared at syd. "hey" she said turning over "hey" he said you know what this reminds of a certain incident a couple months ago doesn’t it. "Yes except that then never accepted to end up here" "neither did I , but i did hope" "always" he responded
"mmm lets see how your fever is, because if you are better, would you be up to any swimming?" "me swimming, is that even a question" syd teased Reaching in the cabinet to pull out the thermometer "don’t waste your time, i can tell I don’t have a fever" "well just to be safe"
"Vaughn I’m fine" "ok fine we will have it your way"
"ok I’m gonna take a shower" syd said "I’m gonna go jogging so meet me outside in an hour?"
"Make it 45 minutes and im your woman"
"ok" Vaughn said" cant wait to see me?" he said laughing
"ok Mr. hot shot, out i sing when I am in the shower and unless you don’t want eardrums i suggest you leave"
"fine" covering his ears and smiling back at syd he ran out the door
ok i fixed the mistakes
it should be better now
um yeah they should go swimming and meet some villan there!! Or, Syd or Vaughn should slip and fall and hit their head on the cemment, accually, that would be bad. Okay, um how about they go swimming, they meet a bad guy, and then something happens!!LOL I don't know just trying to help.
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......Alias said:
Okay, someone is really tired... but then again I'm up at 1:16 A.M. so I can't talk. I like where this is going. One quick note, though; be nice to those of us who like nice spelling and copy/paste this to word and use spellcheck, please?
~Me :angel2:
aliaschica47
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yeah bad guys good i dunno i think the whole memory loss thing has been done to much
aliaschica47
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yeah i cant write for a little while because all i have been doing is checking and writing this and the sd-1 and i kinda figured it out when i cried when they said IN TWO WEEKS last sunday so i need to take a break (wahh) from alias for a day, actually it will be more like two hours but whatever
aliaschica47
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ahha i have a really really good idea, ur goin to love it
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after meeting outside the bed and breakfast, they stopped at a small cofee shop for latte's and muffins.
"Vaughn these are like heaven, how did you find this place" syd asked her mouth half full with a bllueberry muffin
"ohh lets see ive already been here, you know that jog, it only lasten about 15 minutes and then i came here"
"hey" she teased throwing a peice of muffin at him
"echhm" said a fairly large lady at the counter
"oh sorry" sydney said lowering her head
'' i think that was the funniest thing I have ever seen, Sydney Vaughn getting in trouble with a casheir"
Oh my god he called me sydney vaughn
syds face flushed a little as she stared sown at the ring on her finger
"when did you get married?" the new casheir asked
"January" they both said at the same time
thank god he said january
thank god she said january
"well honey we better get going" syd said staring at vaughn
"you betcha" he said returning the gaze
putting her arm around her shoulder, he looked at her
"sydney i have been wanting to tell you this, but d*** protocal
i mean you know what it was like, but....."
he couldnt finish because sydney had reached up and kissed him
"i love you" he said
"I love you too" she stated quietly
and they walked in each others arms all the way to the pool
(which happened to be a mile and a half walk
****nott alot but itll have to do for now
"
"Vaughn these are like heaven, how did you find this place" syd asked her mouth half full with a bllueberry muffin
"ohh lets see ive already been here, you know that jog, it only lasten about 15 minutes and then i came here"
"hey" she teased throwing a peice of muffin at him
"echhm" said a fairly large lady at the counter
"oh sorry" sydney said lowering her head
'' i think that was the funniest thing I have ever seen, Sydney Vaughn getting in trouble with a casheir"
Oh my god he called me sydney vaughn
syds face flushed a little as she stared sown at the ring on her finger
"when did you get married?" the new casheir asked
"January" they both said at the same time
thank god he said january
thank god she said january
"well honey we better get going" syd said staring at vaughn
"you betcha" he said returning the gaze
putting her arm around her shoulder, he looked at her
"sydney i have been wanting to tell you this, but d*** protocal
i mean you know what it was like, but....."
he couldnt finish because sydney had reached up and kissed him
"i love you" he said
"I love you too" she stated quietly
and they walked in each others arms all the way to the pool
(which happened to be a mile and a half walk
****nott alot but itll have to do for now
"
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sydney sat there waiting for vaughn on the edge of the pool. After a while hr came out and, whoa, i know i have seen mike without a shirt on, actually come to think about it we were in france, but kasinow was about to kill him so you know it dosent really count but ma does he look good she thought staring at vaughn
"hey syd, syd im up here" vaughn said smiling
"oh sorry" she said her face turning crimson
"Mrs. Bristow" they heard some one call
"mrs. bristow" I know you are here
"ok are there any sydneys here?"
"my name vs sydney" syd said in a heavy accent still not turning around
"vy who vis askn?"
"ariana kane, but i doubt you are who I need, what is your last name?"
"Vaughn" she stated very proudly but forgetting to use her accent
"ohh yeah" ariana said picking up that she had forgotten her accent
"turn around" ariana commmanded
ariana came closer and closer
syd sung her leg around causing ariana to fall in he pool and get knoked out by the cement bottom
Come on Syd said jumping up
"michael, michaek come on"
"ohh sorry, i just cant beleive she found us"
"we HAVE to leave now"
"hey syd, syd im up here" vaughn said smiling
"oh sorry" she said her face turning crimson
"Mrs. Bristow" they heard some one call
"mrs. bristow" I know you are here
"ok are there any sydneys here?"
"my name vs sydney" syd said in a heavy accent still not turning around
"vy who vis askn?"
"ariana kane, but i doubt you are who I need, what is your last name?"
"Vaughn" she stated very proudly but forgetting to use her accent
"ohh yeah" ariana said picking up that she had forgotten her accent
"turn around" ariana commmanded
ariana came closer and closer
syd sung her leg around causing ariana to fall in he pool and get knoked out by the cement bottom
Come on Syd said jumping up
"michael, michaek come on"
"ohh sorry, i just cant beleive she found us"
"we HAVE to leave now"
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well what didja think, i know it really dosnt fit but i hate ariana and i needed her to get her butt kicked lol
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****BACK AT THE ROOM*****
"vaughn we have to leave, its not safe to stay here, where do we go?"
syd asked out of breath
"well.. i got it, you know that island, well alittle farther there is a bigger island it has a small resort that iss not widley known"
"sounds good as long as we can get away from that kreep"
"ok, grab just what you need, we can buy sommore clothes and stuff there"
"umm you are Sarah Vaughn and I will be Michael Vaughn, because Ariana wont think that we will keep our old names"
"ok"
"and we have to move fast"
****IN THE BOAT*****
"michael, come here" syd asked
"yeah are you ok" he asked worried
"yeah im fine, but think about it we are just running and running, I mean yeah we talk about the, and dont kiss me this is improtant, takedown of sd-6 but once we do that, there are still all of the others sd cells and cristophe, and I love you but we will still have protocal and I couldnt bear to leave franci back in california but i would hate to bring her into this, why does everything have to be so complicated"
She asked, tears forming in her eyes
"look, everything will be ok, we wil cross that bridge when we get there, until then it is simple, I love you and that is all that matters."
*****************
There he was, walking down the isle, everyone had left SD-6 after arvin was murdered we moved to a small island and now we are getting marrried.
now repeat after me I sydney bistow take you michael vaughn to be my lawfully wedded husband through sickness and in health through good and bad until death do us part.
And I michael vaughn take you sydney bristow as my lawfully wedded wife, to have and to hold for better or worse is sickness and in health till death do us part.
.............................................
"syd, syd wake up, we are almost there" vaughn said attempting to wake her up
"you were talking in your sleep" he said
"syd comme on, we are there''
''ok so much for waking you up"
picking her up he carried her into the very swank resort, it was white and had round, ball like chairs that suspended from the celing and a huge white couch. laying syd down on the couch he went to the front desk
"bienvenu au recours de canacumpa, comment pouvoir je vous aide" the desk clerck asked looking displeased with sydney
welcome to the canacumpa resort, how may I help you
"Désolé de ma femme nous sommes allés à un parti et au puits qu'elle a reçu.." said michael responding to the look
we went to a party last night and well she got..
"a gaspillé, weve mis d'inquiétude vu pire" the clerk said smiling
wasted, dont worry weve seen much worse
"d'accord bien would nous recevons une salle, nous serons ici pour cinq jours" Michael inquired
ok we would like to get a room, we will be here for five day
"sûr" the desk clerk replied typing something into his computer
sure
"d'accord vous êtes dans la salle quarante sept" the desk clerk answered handing michael two silver key cards
ok you are in romm forty seven
"grand, et s'il vous plaît mis donner hors n'importe quelle information de moi ou ma femme" michael said smiling
great please do not give out any information to anyboduy aout my wife and i
"ok honey, lets go" he said scooping syd up and carring her to their room
"he slipped his key into the door and gasped as he looked at the room"
he had never seen this much glass in his life
The bed frame was glass, the table was glass the sink was glass the tiles were glass, the entertainment center was glass, with a silver plasma tv inside, the table was glass it was amazing.
carefully setting syd down onto the bed, afraid he might break it
"hey syd, you gotta wake up"
"hmm wher where are we?"
"we are at the resort, oh and if the clerk asks you, you were really wasted from the party last night"
"ohh" she said picking up on it
"Jeez how much glass con they fit in one room"
"exactly my thoughts"
"now how about we watch some tv ad then try to go swimming again"
"Fine by me, you pick what we watch im gonna go wash my face"
"ohh hey syd" vaughn called to her
"yeah" she asked stepping out of the bathroom
"i think i can keep my promise with that kings game"
"really, how"
"look" he said pointing at the tv
ok i really need to take a break and if you didnt figure it out syd wasnt wasted they just said that i hate translating stuff it takes to long hope u like it
"vaughn we have to leave, its not safe to stay here, where do we go?"
syd asked out of breath
"well.. i got it, you know that island, well alittle farther there is a bigger island it has a small resort that iss not widley known"
"sounds good as long as we can get away from that kreep"
"ok, grab just what you need, we can buy sommore clothes and stuff there"
"umm you are Sarah Vaughn and I will be Michael Vaughn, because Ariana wont think that we will keep our old names"
"ok"
"and we have to move fast"
****IN THE BOAT*****
"michael, come here" syd asked
"yeah are you ok" he asked worried
"yeah im fine, but think about it we are just running and running, I mean yeah we talk about the, and dont kiss me this is improtant, takedown of sd-6 but once we do that, there are still all of the others sd cells and cristophe, and I love you but we will still have protocal and I couldnt bear to leave franci back in california but i would hate to bring her into this, why does everything have to be so complicated"
She asked, tears forming in her eyes
"look, everything will be ok, we wil cross that bridge when we get there, until then it is simple, I love you and that is all that matters."
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There he was, walking down the isle, everyone had left SD-6 after arvin was murdered we moved to a small island and now we are getting marrried.
now repeat after me I sydney bistow take you michael vaughn to be my lawfully wedded husband through sickness and in health through good and bad until death do us part.
And I michael vaughn take you sydney bristow as my lawfully wedded wife, to have and to hold for better or worse is sickness and in health till death do us part.
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"syd, syd wake up, we are almost there" vaughn said attempting to wake her up
"you were talking in your sleep" he said
"syd comme on, we are there''
''ok so much for waking you up"
picking her up he carried her into the very swank resort, it was white and had round, ball like chairs that suspended from the celing and a huge white couch. laying syd down on the couch he went to the front desk
"bienvenu au recours de canacumpa, comment pouvoir je vous aide" the desk clerck asked looking displeased with sydney
welcome to the canacumpa resort, how may I help you
"Désolé de ma femme nous sommes allés à un parti et au puits qu'elle a reçu.." said michael responding to the look
we went to a party last night and well she got..
"a gaspillé, weve mis d'inquiétude vu pire" the clerk said smiling
wasted, dont worry weve seen much worse
"d'accord bien would nous recevons une salle, nous serons ici pour cinq jours" Michael inquired
ok we would like to get a room, we will be here for five day
"sûr" the desk clerk replied typing something into his computer
sure
"d'accord vous êtes dans la salle quarante sept" the desk clerk answered handing michael two silver key cards
ok you are in romm forty seven
"grand, et s'il vous plaît mis donner hors n'importe quelle information de moi ou ma femme" michael said smiling
great please do not give out any information to anyboduy aout my wife and i
"ok honey, lets go" he said scooping syd up and carring her to their room
"he slipped his key into the door and gasped as he looked at the room"
he had never seen this much glass in his life
The bed frame was glass, the table was glass the sink was glass the tiles were glass, the entertainment center was glass, with a silver plasma tv inside, the table was glass it was amazing.
carefully setting syd down onto the bed, afraid he might break it
"hey syd, you gotta wake up"
"hmm wher where are we?"
"we are at the resort, oh and if the clerk asks you, you were really wasted from the party last night"
"ohh" she said picking up on it
"Jeez how much glass con they fit in one room"
"exactly my thoughts"
"now how about we watch some tv ad then try to go swimming again"
"Fine by me, you pick what we watch im gonna go wash my face"
"ohh hey syd" vaughn called to her
"yeah" she asked stepping out of the bathroom
"i think i can keep my promise with that kings game"
"really, how"
"look" he said pointing at the tv
ok i really need to take a break and if you didnt figure it out syd wasnt wasted they just said that i hate translating stuff it takes to long hope u like it
Hi!I really really love your story! So keep on!
I'm french and in your latest chapter, you wrote in French. Sorry, but in good french it's:
"Bienvenue à l'hôtel de canacumpa, comment puis-je vous aider?"
"Désolé pour ma femme, nous sommes allés à une fête hier soir et ...
"...elle a été malade, mais ne vous inquiétez pas, le pire est passé."
"Donc, nous voudrions une chambre, nous serons ici pour cinq jours."
"Bien sûr"
"Vous êtes dans la chambre numéro 47"
Super, et s'il vous plaît ne donnez aucune informations sur ma femme et moi."
But if you don't want to use this, it's not a problem.
And if you want an advice in french write me!
Alias Elle
Cadet
The only thing I'm finding a little difficult about this is how much you jump around. Good idea, just get your ideas organized a little better.
~Me :angel2:
~Me :angel2:
aliaschica47
Cadet
ok thanks for the reccomendation il try harder im starin to run low on ideas that is why
aliaschica47
Cadet
and the person who gave me the tips on french thanks i just used a computer translator i speak spanish so i have no clue about french!!! thanks