A New Life

This is good but i must make one request of you. I hope you take this into consideration while you write. PLEASE DON"T KILL SARK!!!!!! I beg of you please do not kill that hottie. You can kill Alice just not Sark. If Sark dies I wil be very :( :( :(.
 
heres more for she's good. (i took your advice. more of JACK & IRINA)

Jack sat next to Irina in the hospital room. She had a bandage around her arm where she had been shot. Jack was mad at himself for letting Sloane get away, yet Irina was more important.

As if Irina read his mind, she said, "You know, you could’ve gone after Sloane."

"Yes." Jack clutched her hand. "I know. You are so strong. You’re right, but I knew that you were more important to me."

"Thank you."

"Did you really mean what you said? Back in the parking lot?"

Irina nodded, "Yes, Jack. I did."

Jack planted a kiss on her cheek. "Get some rest. I’ll be here when you wake up."

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TephieD said:
This is good but i must make one request of you. I hope you take this into consideration while you write. PLEASE DON"T KILL SARK!!!!!! I beg of you please do not kill that hottie. You can kill Alice just not Sark. If Sark dies I wil be very :( :( :(.
hehehehe. i wont, i promise. i dont hate sark, its only alice i hate. we REALLY need to start an I HATE ALICE club. lemme know if you know of one.
 
THANK YOU!!!! I love Sark! if you asked any of my friends, they would tell you that I am beyond obsessed and that I never shut up about Alias. I'm glad you won't kill him. Lots of people hate him so they just kill him off.
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Sydney walked into the kitchen to wash her hands.

Francie elbowed her stomach. "OW! What was that for?"

"You’re right." Francie said, smiling mischievously. "He’s hot cute."

Sydney elbowed her right back. Francie’s comment had made her blush. Michael walked in, chatting with Will. "What? What did I do?" He asked, seeing Sydney’s face.

"Nothing." Sydney helped bring the plates over to the table.

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i KNOW! im kinda obsessed with alias, thus my name. hehehehe. im also a spastic monkey 🐒 . im also a horseback rider. but no one would know. hahahahaha.
 
i know, i know. im putting off writing my next chapter. im doing everything BUT writing my story. i need a break. lemme know if u want me to PM u wen i post a new chapter. i surely will!
 
Sark walked up to Sloane in their meeting place. "So you escaped as well?"

Sloane nodded. "Yes, I did. Now we have to get the Rambaldi clock back. It is very important that we get it."

"I’m on it," Alice said. She toyed with a strand of blonde hair around her finger.

"Good. Mr. Sark, will you assist her?"

Sark grinned, "Of course."

"See if you can intercept where it will be transported. I want it in the next 48 hours." Sloane walked out. "I’m taking a vacation."

Alice started after him. "When will you be back?"

"I’ll be back when I’m back," Sloane called.

Alice walked over to Sark. "Shall we?" She asked, linking arms with him.

"We shall." Sark led her to their car. They drove off, leaving a cloud of dust behind them.

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Sydney and Michael walked into the CIA headquarters. "I can’t believe that I can actually use the front doors!" Sydney exclaimed.

"I can’t believe that I can actually drive you." Michael said, squeezing her close to him.

"Hey! Hey, Vaughn! Wait up." The two turned around to see Eric Weiss running after them. "Congrats!"

Weiss patted Michael on the shoulder. He gave Sydney a big bear hug.

"You better be coming. You’re my best man!" Michael exclaimed, punching Weiss playfully in the shoulder.

"Alright!" Weiss pumped a fist in the air. He walked off, singing as he went, "I’m gonna be a best man, I’m gonna be a best man."

Sydney giggled. "Man do Francie and him think alike."

"Got that right."

Sydney saw her mom and dad. She dragged Michael over to them. "Hey," She said, hugging her mom carefully, trying not to hurt her arm.

"Sydney, Vaughn…I mean Michael." Irina said. "After work, we would like to take you somewhere."

Sydney glanced at Michael. He smiled. "Sure. I’ll meet you guys right here." Sydney said.

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*SPYnish* said:
Because change your nick????? :P The Other was fine ;)

I like the Weddings :woot: S & V the perfect couple.
wouldnt let me post, nat. im sad too :( but i like this one too. it will just take a while to get back at agent. :blush:
 
"Where are you guys taking us?" Sydney whined as she and Michael were loaded into a car, blindfolded.

"You’ll see." Jack said. He started the engine and drove off. They were in the car for about 20 minutes when the engine stopped.

Irina opened the doors and helped Sydney and Michael out. "Take off your blindfolds."

Sydney and Vaughn took off their blindfolds. In front of them, was a carousel. Sydney smiled and ran to hug her father.
"A carousel? Aren’t we a bit old for this?" Michael asked, scratching his head.

Irina laughed. "No. It’s a special one. Jack used to take Sydney here all the time when she was little. I would tag along, but just watch."

"Mom, you HATED it." Sydney said, looping one arm around her mother.

"You caught me. I DID hate it."

Jack put on a pouty face. "Aw man, there is no one here. I was hoping we could get a ride."

Sydney smile faded as she walked back to the car. "Wait!" Jack called. "I’ve got the keys!"

Jack pulled out a set of keys. Sydney’s smile came back as she ran over to it. She and Michael decided to jump over the fence, pretending that they were being chased by bad-guys.

"Alright you two, settle down!" Irina called. Jack turned the key, and the ride started. Sydney jumped on a beautiful white horse. Michael hopped on the black horse next to her. Sydney’s parents chose a lion and a tiger.

They rode around atleast twenty times before the ride stopped. Sydney jumped off and walked over to her dad. Sydney hugged him.

"Thanks Dad. That was the best."

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That's really good...thanks for the PM...I guess otherwise i would have missed many updates...thanks again...
Please post more soon!
 
thank you! i keep hearing, "post more soon" or "great job". thank yall sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! i love getting feedback, although you guys arent mean like i have had before! ill porb. finish ch 5 today and start ch 6.

~Kailyn
 
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