A New Life

absolutely! that would be so cool! i like i like it alot! i have a concert to go to 2nite, so mayb we can talk bout it tomorrow. my email is my name without spaces at yahoo.com. ill pm u!
 
Chapter 6

Sark picked up the phone and dialed Sloane.

"Sloane here."

"Mr. Sloane, it’s Sark. I have just intercepted that the Rambaldi clock is on its way to ---------------. Alice and I will be on our way immediately.

"Good." Sloane said, and then hung up the phone.

Alice walked into the room. "So, where are we going?"

"To ---------------."


Alice smiled. "What about a contact?"

"Oh, we have plenty all around the world. There is one in ---------------."

"Will he or she have what we need?" Alice asked.

Sark chuckled. "Our contacts never ever let us down." Sark began to walk out of the room. Before he left, he kissed Alice.

"Man. He’s much better than Michael will ever be." Alice flipped her hair and walked out of the meeting place.

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do u see where the --------------- are? well, thats because i DONT know where the clock should be transported to. please please please with a cherry ontop help me!
 
she'sgood, back to us writin a fic together, i think we should write one about irina and jack. u dont read many of those out there and i think it would be fun! :D
 
OK what about so place they have never been like... Canada somewhere in Canada at least. Or um England no they were there. Um nope there to never mind. um Brazil or South Africa and syd goes to get it and she sees the homeless people and feels really bad so her and Irina go back after stuff happens and they like help some people there with food and medical stuff. ok soory about that. ANyway another place could be somewhere really famous. like a land mark everyone knows about.
 
I think the place of the clock should be somewhere where rambaldi could have been.... so maybe somewhere in europe??? For example Belgium...

And the second land should be something really small, strange climate or far far away..like iceland, antartic(haha :D ), etc...
That are only some suggestions of mine...

It was a great addition to the story! And thanks for the PM!
Please post more soon!!!
 
Thanks you guys. That was a big help. I'm considering whether to do what she'sgood said or what a.i.c. said. You both had very good ideas. I'm sorry that chapter6 is so short still. I'm kind of getting writers block and I am stuck on what to write next. I knoe she'sgood will probably say something with Irina and Jack. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with saying that. I think I want Syd and Vaughn to go on a mission to put the clock somewhere safe, and then Sark and Alice follow them and try to steal it. I don't think I want them to steal it from S/V. I think I want Alice to get shot, but I'm not sure. I have had a lot of suggestions to kill her off, but I'm still debating. I will post the next part AS SOON AS I'm done with it. Thanks for your patience.
 
OK about the Fan fic we were talking about I won't be on very much on the weekend but I romis I will be on. Then next week I have a camp to go to so I won't be on at all, but when I have some free time at camp I will write what I think we should do then when I get back I will PM u what I wrote down ok. :D

And take your time writing your doing a great job!!!!!!
 
[quote name='She'sgood' date='Jun 5 2003, 12:34 PM']OK about the Fan fic we were talking about I won't be on very much on the weekend but I romis I will be on. Then next week I have a camp to go to so I won't be on at all, but when I have some free time at camp I will write what I think we should do then when I get back I will PM u what I wrote down ok. :D

And take your time writing your doing a great job!!!!!![/quote]
thank u bunches! well just keep in contact and work it out. ill work on some ideas for it. how cool! ::jumps around, bouncin off walls:: with excitement!
 
sorry i havent posted anything today. this morning, i went horsebacj riding. then i went out to luch. then we went to see the lizzie mcguire movie (very very very cute) and then i came home and had to change my guinea pigs' cages. then i got on AA and havent worked on my story. im probably going to disneyland tomorrow so i wont be on. maybe in the morning. ill pm u as soon as i have the next part posted.

thanx a bunch,
muffin
 
"I agree with you. I would wait for now, and see if Will is ok." Vaughn started the car and began to drive towards the CIA headquarters.

Once they got there, Sydney hurried to find Kendall. She finally found him, and briefed him about Will.

"I would like to request a security team to monitor my house, as well as Francie and Will at all times." Sydney said. She held her breath and waited for a response.

Kendall nodded. "I’ll have it done as soon as I can."

Sydney saw her mother and father talking. She walked over to them. "Hey Mom, Dad."

"Hello Sydney," Irina said. "Your father and I were just talking, about…"

"About what?" Sydney asked. She heard someone walk up and she turned around. Michael was standing right behind her.

"Kendall just informed me that somebody broke in again last night," Michael said.

Jack frowned. "Who was it? What did they want?"

Michael sighed. "It was Alice. A guard caught her and put her in a cell. They want Sydney and me to talk to her."

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