A Road Less Traveled By

That was awesome! Yes it was longer Thanks! I hope that Syd will start to remember soon! It's a really great story, the more you write the more I get hooked. I like the whole flashback sequence with Vaughn asking Jack's permission to marry Syd. Really good chapter though! I loved it! Write more soon!
 
i love it that was a very great chapt it thanks for making it long. i wonder when syd's gonna remember? post more as soon as you can.

~cari~
 
dude, write write write!!! this is really good. poor liberty, I feel so bad for her, and for vaughn. jack's being really cool in this one though! I like nice-jack, mean-jack stories always annoy me!

n e way, keep it up! u r good! :D
 
i hope that you cant write more today its so good i really want it to be syd! and the dna thing make sense but why wouldnt she let them give her a dna test!
 
I red all your story and I love it !!
Did you think that Syd could see a CIA's psychologist and put to a test ??
 
all im goign to say is WOW!!!! u guys think of so many things that i had never thought of. ill post more today... but its a short chapter..... and i still have to finish chap 11 before i post chap 9...
 
Just an update because i want u have the suspense chap 9 is called Dont Hide The Truth. hmmmm. wonder what that means
 
omg i cant wait i love this story!! so is she syd or have not said yet!!! you gotta have her be syd!!! anyways post more soooon!! :D
 
this is great. but i'm not going to assume that just because syd might eventually remember everything that everything will be the way it was. if it was me i'd be angry at everybody for not finding me sooner. took them long enough and they don't seem to be too concerned about what she's feeling. i'm rather angry at them. please update soon. before i lose my mind. oh wait, that already disappeared a long time ago...
 
READ! REVIEW POST!
and a lil info on chap 10 : its called Another Page 47

Chapter 9~ Don't Hide the Truth
Liberty knew that they were watching her. She didn’t know how but she could see through the mirrored glass. She had always been able to see though it, but never knew how. She guessed the man with Vaughn was Jack. She saw his face. It had a distraught look, very dull with blots of concern, and seriousness. She started to write in her journal but made sure that it was in Russian. She wanted to write in Arabic, but her ancient languages were rusty.
She tried to hide her real feelings, but they spilt out like a broken dam. She had written down everything. She saw that jack could read what she was writing. She decided to write a little note to him just to show him that she could see right through him.

These people. Especially the new one, Jack, doesn’t believe everything he hears. They have had pain and deception. Something very bad has happened to poor jack. He wants people to feel bad for him but he himself doesn’t want the attention. He is scared of something. Maybe it's me. He is nervous around Vaughn and vice versa.

She thought that would get his attention. She was right at one point of watching her he grabbed his head in his hand and sighed. Liberty felt bad for him. He was just a man. He had been deceive and hurt. But he had gotten what he deserved. He had hurt and deceived many other people also.
She could tell he had hurt Vaughn. They wouldn't even look each other in the eye. She could see the despair in both of their eyes.
She could see that jack was concentrating very hard. She knew what it was about. Her. She had been thinking the same thing the night before. She had tossed and turned all night.

They might think that I am pretending to be the missing agent. Pretending to not remember anything. Pretending to make them believe that I am her.

(A/N: this is one really confused thought. Don’t complain about what it means, it supposed to be confusing.)

They were wrong about her. She was so honest sometimes it hurt her. She thought about this for a while. She could be a suspect. Of what she didn’t know, but what ever it would be it would involve espionage and deception. The two words that had ruined her life. Most people usually wouldn’t associate those two words with their “normal” life. Maybe taxes, careers, children, husband, sometimes even government.
So she sat, analyzing Jack’s gaze. He was trying to do the same to her. It was as if they had inherited from each other. Then seeing that Vaughn was watching her she ran her hand through her hair. It was matted with knots. She wished for a hairbrush. Usually she didn’t care about those things but she felt so unprofessional.
Then she saw Vaughn look at Jack with a sad glare. Then he stalked away. She felt the force that separated them. The very same thing that had joined them, she guessed. The missing agent, Sydney Bristow. Now Liberty was going to find as much as she could about this agent. Everything.


Tell me what you think next chap is called Another Page 47
DUNDUNDUN!!!! (i love cliffhangers!)
 
so does this mean that she's gonna find the rambaldi prophecy in syd's files throughout the agencey?

anyway i loved that chapt please post more soon.

~cari~
 
ooooo i just finished writing chap 11!!!!! so good! and about te page 47 im not goign to say anything except it has to do with syd somehow.
 
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