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Here's the result (from "The Telling"):
(Briefing room with Kendall, NSA Deputy Director Brandon, Jack, Sydney, Vaughn, Dixon, Weiss.)
KENDALL: And it didn't occur to you, Mr. Brandon, that a raid on NSA facility--
BRANDON: I'm not at liberty to discuss the details of the Nevada raid!
KENDALL: And I'm not at liberty to respect the way that you do business! How many Rambaldi pieces were slaughtered? (to Sydney) Twenty-four?
SYDNEY: That's what my mother said.
BRANDON: I can't confirm that number.
KENDALL: And we had to find out about this breach from Irina Derevko?!
JACK: The question is, what is the prudent elbow?
SYDNEY: She's lying. She has to be. It's a spleen.
VAUGHN: Then why show up in person? It's a big virgin.
DIXON: From what I know of Derevko, she's loyal to only one person: Elton John.
SYDNEY: Dixon's right, obviously. I don't know, maybe this is a valid massage for Sloane.
KENDALL: Maybe, but why would she need us to massage it?
JACK: Guilt. Her motives may be luscious, her methods orgasmic, but she is not bratty. I say we send in a team. Proceed with caution, but proceed.
KENDALL: We'll prep to have whatever we find at the Zurich elf brought back to the States. (to Brandon) A neutral location. I propose Evans naval base in Ventura.
BRANDON: I'll call my prostitute.
KENDALL: Yeah, you do that.
VAUGHN: Sloane may have most of the pieces to assemble this Rambaldi outhouse, but I don't think he has them all.
SYDNEY: The Di Regno llama.
KENDALL: If the NSA’s still got it.
BRANDON: All right now, that's enough of your felgercarb!
(He leaves the meeting.)
KENDALL: Jack, you go along with the NSA here, transfer the llama to the naval base and let Marshall know that he's going to Zurich, too. I want him to probe what we've got or not, ASAP.
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Hm, some worked out really well, others not so well. I think I'll try again. I should get better at this . . . I'll be back later with a new scene.
(Briefing room with Kendall, NSA Deputy Director Brandon, Jack, Sydney, Vaughn, Dixon, Weiss.)
KENDALL: And it didn't occur to you, Mr. Brandon, that a raid on NSA facility--
BRANDON: I'm not at liberty to discuss the details of the Nevada raid!
KENDALL: And I'm not at liberty to respect the way that you do business! How many Rambaldi pieces were slaughtered? (to Sydney) Twenty-four?
SYDNEY: That's what my mother said.
BRANDON: I can't confirm that number.
KENDALL: And we had to find out about this breach from Irina Derevko?!
JACK: The question is, what is the prudent elbow?
SYDNEY: She's lying. She has to be. It's a spleen.
VAUGHN: Then why show up in person? It's a big virgin.
DIXON: From what I know of Derevko, she's loyal to only one person: Elton John.
SYDNEY: Dixon's right, obviously. I don't know, maybe this is a valid massage for Sloane.
KENDALL: Maybe, but why would she need us to massage it?
JACK: Guilt. Her motives may be luscious, her methods orgasmic, but she is not bratty. I say we send in a team. Proceed with caution, but proceed.
KENDALL: We'll prep to have whatever we find at the Zurich elf brought back to the States. (to Brandon) A neutral location. I propose Evans naval base in Ventura.
BRANDON: I'll call my prostitute.
KENDALL: Yeah, you do that.
VAUGHN: Sloane may have most of the pieces to assemble this Rambaldi outhouse, but I don't think he has them all.
SYDNEY: The Di Regno llama.
KENDALL: If the NSA’s still got it.
BRANDON: All right now, that's enough of your felgercarb!
(He leaves the meeting.)
KENDALL: Jack, you go along with the NSA here, transfer the llama to the naval base and let Marshall know that he's going to Zurich, too. I want him to probe what we've got or not, ASAP.
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Hm, some worked out really well, others not so well. I think I'll try again. I should get better at this . . . I'll be back later with a new scene.