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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by spysurfergrl247, Mar 15, 2003.

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  1. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    This is my third and i hope you like it :)

    Chapter 1

    Sydney woke up one morning and turned around to see a gift with blue wrapping paper with a white bow on top.The card said
    "from:Vaughn
    To:Sydney"
    Sydney remember what happend last night when Vaughn and her finished a mission and vaughn was walking her to her door.Vaughn without thinking kissied Sydney then stopped to look at her eyes.Sydney was quikly suprised and then she smiled and kissed him again.Sydney offered him to stay over and he said yes.They sat on the couch to watch a movie.Sydney fell asleep while the movie and Vaughn picked her up and took her to her bed she remembers opening her eyes while Vaughn was carring her and smiling.
    sydney now finds the gift and opens it and its a statue of a girl walking and an angel behind a treee watching her.Sydney started to cry a little and then walked outside the room to find Vaughn sleeping in the couch.
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    PLEAS tell e what you think!!And i realy hope you like it!!! ;)
     
  2. awww. that was sooo sweet. now y do you have vaughn sleeping on the couch ? hehe :LOL:
    --mandy :angelic:
     
  3. goofygal

    goofygal Rocket Ranger

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    I love it! How adorable! love ya babe! goofygal!
     
  4. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    Im so glad you like it!!!Promise ill write more tonight cause im not gonna be here the hole afternoon :confused: :) :D
     
  5. goofygal

    goofygal Rocket Ranger

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    Yeah! i love you! okay! iam really pathetic! love ya babe! goofygal!
     
  6. ILuvMichael

    ILuvMichael Rocket Ranger

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    that was REALLY cute
     
  7. Absta

    Absta Rocket Ranger

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    AWWW......keep going!
     
  8. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    That was so sweet, more very soon please!!
     
  9. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    AWWW that was adorable
     
  10. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    keep going
     
  11. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    That was so cute right more please!
     
  12. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Aww...that was so sweet, and so like him to respect her space, and sleep on the couch. (y)
     
  13. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    Sorry i took so much so here is some more

    Chapter 2
    Sydney went to get some orange juice in the fridge and felt someone grab her by her waist.It was Vaughn
    Sydney said laughing "though you where sleeping"
    Vaughn"what are you trying to get rid of me?"with a smile on his face.
    Sydney"no,why are you trying to get rid of me?"
    Vaughn"wouldnt dream of it"and gave her a kiss.
    Sydney saw Will behind them just smiling.Vaughn turned around to see Will.
    Sydney"Good morning"
    Will"Good morning to you too"
    Vaughn's cell rang and it was Kendall that wanted him to come in.Sydney gave him a kiss and he was gone.Will sat next to Sydney.
    Will"Syd i have to tell you something"
    Sydney"what"
    Will then kissed Sydney.Vaughn forgot his keys and when back.Vaughn then saw Will kissing Sydney and got really mad and entered the house and Sydney did not know what to say.
    ********************************************Hope ya like it
     
  14. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    He, he, he.....




    I love it!
    :P
     
  15. :o ohhh :chants: FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, hehe
    --mandy :angelic:
     
  16. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    What the! I hate Will he stupid, a losser. Tell him to find his own girl because Sydney is taken! I hate the guy then I love him but now I really hate the guy! How could he kiss her! What will Vaughn say, better yet how will Sydney explian this to Vaughn? By the way very good story!
     
  17. goofygal

    goofygal Rocket Ranger

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    totally great story! please keep up the good work and post soon! love ya babe!
     
  18. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    AAHHH STUPID WILL TIPPIN!!! I USUALLY LOVE WILL BUT NOW I'M PISSSSSEEEDDDD I HOPE VAUGHN KNOWS IT WASN'T SYDNEY'S FAULT.
     
  19. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Why am I always late to everything? Oh well, I guess from now on it will be my m.o. Now for one of my official reviews;

    You move extremely fast, and you jump around. I'm finding it difficult to follow your thought train when you're jumping from one character to the other. And I hope there will be a little more explanation in the Will department, otherwise I will be very lost.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  20. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    jerry jerry jerry...
     

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