Angel

OMG!!!! OMFREAKIN'G!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL VAUGHN!!! SYD DOESN'T EVEN CALL HIM VAUGHN!!! OMG DAUGHTER... JACK... ALLISON?!!!! allyyyy... you are cacklin and pettin your evil white cat now!!! lol you're like JJ!!! hahah
 
Well, that was...depressing, but so great. Not to mention, i love that song! it rules! i can't wait to see how you resolve this conflict. keep up the good work, i look forward to reading
 
Thanky! And I am glad you think its depressing! Thats how it is suppose to be! Today I learned techniques from my writing teacher The moods! LMAO hehe
 
nance said:
OMG!!!! OMFREAKIN'G!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL VAUGHN!!! SYD DOESN'T EVEN CALL HIM VAUGHN!!! OMG DAUGHTER... JACK... ALLISON?!!!! allyyyy... you are cacklin and pettin your evil white cat now!!! lol you're like JJ!!! hahah
LMAO!! What nance said!!
-Karie-
 
That was great Ally! :smiley: Really good! :smiley:

One thing, I'm confused. Jack dead? Katie? Huh? What? *scratches head* I'm confused!
 
hehehe. Thats ok. Its spected. I wasn't really using that chapter for you to understand. Like I said in time everything in the story will fit into place. Time will tell. LMAO :smiley: And thanks
 
Mrs. Karie Vartan said:
nance said:
OMG!!!! OMFREAKIN'G!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL VAUGHN!!! SYD DOESN'T EVEN CALL HIM VAUGHN!!! OMG DAUGHTER... JACK... ALLISON?!!!! allyyyy... you are cacklin and pettin your evil white cat now!!! lol you're like JJ!!! hahah
LMAO!! What nance said!!
-Karie-
hehehehe ally is eeeevvviiilllllll---- she make vaughn eeeevvviiiiilllll!!!!! :P jk ally!
 
Wait, Allison?!?!?!?!?!? Not Alice?!?!?! Wow, confusing!! Oh..this chap was sad!!!! But I liked it!!! GOOD GOOD GOOD!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!! LOVE IT!!!
 
me to nance i have nothing to look forward to on sundays anymore i'm going to be really bored over the summer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
ahhhhhhh!!! er and i thought summers rock but 5 months w/o alias!!! i need to read more ally!!! write mooooorrrrreee!
 
Sunfire_77 said:
hehehe. Thats ok. Its spected. I wasn't really using that chapter for you to understand. Like I said in time everything in the story will fit into place. Time will tell. LMAO :smiley: And thanks
Okay, okay, okay. I'm still confused though!
 
Thansks you guys. This is my baby. heheeh I am trying to go far with it and My evil plan is soon to be in effect. so. enjoy. :smiley: ^_^ enjoy your poppy. I dont care :smiley:


Ch. 4


Michael ran across the street to the van. With a slam the back door opened and shut.
Wiess looked up. Confused. He took of his head phones.
"Michael? Whats the matter?"
Michaels face was full of worry, and the rain had made him look like he was sweating. his shirt was stained with water. He panted.
"Syd-Sydney. Shes." Vaughn collapsed to the floor. Wiess ran over to him.
"Damn." He said to himself as he looked out of the van into the mist of the rain that the orengish yellow street lights were making noticable.
Wiess shook his head and shut the door.

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Sydney looked up from the puddle she had imurged her head in. The pellets of water fell off her forehead and off of her lips.
She looked around for some recongnition of where she was. The silents killed her soul. Had she just yelled at Vaughn? She hated being mad at him. What was she going to do. She knew that the death of their unborn daughter was not his fault. or that the death of her father was merely an accident, but how would she tell her heart that? All she knew was that the rain was putting chills down her spine. She used her strength and stood up. She straightened her dress and started walking down the rain covered street. She knew there was no way that her and Michael could be. He was with Allison. She knew one thing though. She would have to put up a fight. For herself. This was her war, and she wasn't going to become a women who crahsed at the site of trouble. Sydney caught site of the van and Wiess standing out of it. Probally looking for her. She didn't care. Her melancholy stare should her intrest level was low.
Sydney finally reached the van and walked right past Wiess. He didn't ask questions, just walked behind her and felgercarb the van door.
Michael sat up straight when he saw her wet body enter the van.

Michael started to talk but Sydney sighed. She turned around and kissed Wiess. The shocked expression on both Vaughn and Wiess made it certain that that wasn't planned.
Sydney turned around with a cocky look on her face. She stared right at Michael as to rub it in. She smiled inside knowing how that bugged him. The she stood up and walked to the front of the van.

( chapter to be continued)
 
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