Angel

:eek: awwww so sad! but i loved it! eeekkk... tell me syd didn't sleep with Will... ugh ugh!!!! LOL! omg i love the flashback :smiley:
 
OHHHHH! omg that was so sad, so vaughn didnt actually kill jack but syd doesn't know that yet so she'll keep hating him! :( oh please let her find out, and im with u nance - evil:::alison!! grrrrrrr!
 
thanky dank you guys! I will try so hard to have the next chpater up. It depends on if my stomache still hurts as it does now! AHHH!!!!!! but I will try.........
 
Hope you feel better Ally, stomach pains suck :( - ive had loads recently and felt horrible so i really hope it gets better ^_^
 
Hope your stomach is well now (it happens to me once a month, but I started to take a treatment, and apparently it works !)

This chapter was extremely great !!! And at the same time so sad !
I almost cry, I think I become more and more sensitive and I hate that !!
Hope you'll write asap !
 
Thanky you guys for being so patient! You guys rock!
OK so I have some stuff up my sleeve! MWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! I am going to have fun with this. My new muse is evanescnece since I got my ideas from listening to them last night! MY MUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oki doke. ENJOY!




Ch.5 (Faithful)


"Syd. What do you think of off white yellow?" Will turned around and showed Sydney the can of paint.
"Is their a difference between Off white and dandelion yellow?" She smirked.
Sydney pushed the cart down the isle to the next rack of paints.
"Why dont we just paint our house black. That would give our neighbors another reason to further themselves from us."
"Oh. yeah like we need them thinking we are weirder. I already think Mrs.Richards thinks I am gay."

Sydney rummaged through the tile patterns.

"Sydney?" Came a womens voice from behind her.
Sydney knew that voice. The only voice that could make her hair stand on end.
"Allison." Sydney fakely chimed as she turned around to see the women standing next to a very uncomfortable Michael.

"What a coincidence that you are here!" She laughed and looked at Will.
"What brings you here anyway." She says nosely.
Will walked over and stared at Allison. He hated her just as much, but he didn't hide it. That wasn't his style.
"We're finding paints for our house." He was annoyed Sydney could tell.
"Oh really, well I always knew that house was a little dingey. A little spruce up wont hurt."
Allison turned to Michael.
"Sweetheart. I am going to go find daddy. Could you wait next to the cashier for me." Allsion kissed his cheek and walked away.
Sydney felt like she was going to barf right then and there. What kind of nic name is sweetheart anyway.
Michael looked over at Sydney. What more could he say to her. He felt terrible. Like he was rubbing it in. Just then in the tension of the moment Will got a feeling of a friend in need. Will then put his arm around Sydney's shouldier and looked at Will.
"Michael. I think its best you just listen to Betty crocker there and go sit like a good boy next to her things." Will hated the fact that Sydney was sad and hurt. He had to be strong for her.
"Excuse me?" Michael asked. Michael knew he deserved it, but He had to defend himself.
"You heard me michael. Be a good boy and do what she says will she goes and finds "Daddy." Will mocks.

"Will. Lets just go." Sydney whispered. She was in noo mood for their fights.

Michael had then forgot about the tension between Him and Sydney. He stepped closer to Will. Without a second though Will saw in his mind Sydney crying endless nights after the accident. Waking up in the middle of the night screaming. How he had to comfort her and sit with her. His anger burned inside him like wild fire. With no further thought Will lifted his arm and punched him right in the jaw making Michael fall to the floor. He quickily got up and retalliated Socking will back into the isle of Cans.
"Guys!" Sydney cried to them both. What was she going to do. Her strength was to weak to pull them apart. Finally she decided to run out. no thoughts. She grabbed her purse and ran for the front doors of the departmenr store. Tears whelmed into her eyes. She ran out into the parking lot and headed for the car.
Oh thats great. Will's got the keys. She stopped and stood. Trying to hold back her tears as people walked by and stared. She sat down on the hood of the car and cried.

Will saw Sydney was no where in sight. She stopped and stood up. He or Michael hadn't realized the group of people that had formed around them including allison and her dad.
"Sydney?" Will asked into the crowd. He turned back to Michael with disgust.
"You cant stop screwing up can you man." She sneered.
Will ran past the crowd. Forgetting all about the paint. Once he ran out the doors he spotted Sydney sitting crossed leg on the roof of his car. Her head inbetween her legs.

What was he going to say? How could he make it better when he only made it worst.

"Syd?" He pleaded.
Sydney looked up. How was she going to be mad with him when she felt almost happy for what he did.
"Yes." She replied.
"Syd. I am sorry." Will sat next to her.
Sydney looked up at him and weakily smiled.
"I am sorry to. I cant be mad at you for something you did that I felt like doing." Sydney weakily teased.
Will looked up then smiled.
"I think I need to take you to a bar. We can both get reeeeally drunk and then whine all night about how our lifes suck."
Sydney weakily smiled.
"I think thats a good idea."
 
:ermm: i thought it was Alice :thinking: but allison was a b**** too!

LALALALALALA I HATE WILL!!!!!!!!!!! die will! get so drunk you'll die of too much alcohol!!! DIE DIE DIIIIIE... ::calms down::

great writing but DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIE WIIIILLLL AND ALIIIISOOOOON or ALIIIIICE!!!!
 
:D :P Yay!! Will and Vaughn fight! That was a great chapter, though. I hope they find out who killed Jack soon. Vaughn can't take the blame for killing Jack. And Sydney needs to forgive Vaughn so they can be together again. You don't find many S/V storys anymore since the finale. That ending just broke my little S/V shipper heart!!

~Shammi~ :love:
 
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