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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Alias*Kelli, May 24, 2003.

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  1. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Hey I'm starting a new sotry and I already wrote everthing in this one so there will be an end! (I don't know if anyone noticed but I'm really bad at ending things :( )


    Rating-PG maybe PG-13 later

    Summary- Vaughn and Sydney are not together. No sd-6! Sydney finds bugs in her house and needs a place to stay, but with who??

    Chapter 1

    At the Wearhouse

    Vaughn-''Syd you can't saty at your place, someone could come after you, and with Francie staying at Will's you'll be all alone."

    Syd-"Vaughn, I'll be fine I'm a big girl I can kick any guys ass!"

    Vaughn-''You could kick anyones ass, but I don't want you to take any chances."

    Syd-''Then where do I stay? With may dad? Yeah right!I would be begging for someone to kill me then! Besides it's only till they find Sloane. And what would I tell Francie, she practicly lives with Will now, but still."

    Vaughn-''You know you could always stay with me, you know if you want."

    Syd-"Really?!?,"She tried to hind the exitment in her voice. "I would want to intrude in your life or anything."

    Vaughn-''You wouldn't be, you see weiss and I have a whole apartment building to ourselves, all three floors. Weiss lives on the bottem, I live on the top, and we meet in the middle, but you could live there, it's no big deal."

    Syd-''Are you sure, I mean would Weiss mind?"

    Vaughn-''You know Weiss, he doesn't care about to much of anything."

    Syd-''Good point, so when can I more my stuff?"

    Vaughn-"Right now if you want? I could come and help you."

    Syd-''Thanks, you know where I live right?"

    Vaughn-''Yeah."

    At Sydney's house

    Vaughn-''Nice place." He looks around a little.

    Syd-''I thought you came here to help me pack."

    Vaughn-''I did."

    Syd-''Well then come and help me." Vaughn fallows Sydney to her room. and she starts geting out suitcases and other stuff. "ok get some shirts out of there."

    Vaughn-''What do you think I am a girl."

    Syd-"There just shirts."

    Vaughn-''Fine how many do you want?"

    Syd-''Ten."

    Vaughn-''Ten, who knows how long your gonna be there Syd."

    Syd-"Your right get all of them."


    OK I know a really bad ending place, but I just wanted to know if you guys like it or not!
     
  2. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    I DO I DO I DO I DO !!!!!!!!!!!IT HAS A REALLY GOOD PLOT AND I THINK ITS GONNA GET FUNNIER ( why does that word seem funny tonight????? :blink: ) AND FUNNIER ( there it is again??? :blink: ) . so i hope you post more soon.
     
  3. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    LOL! Thank you some much and if anyone wants me to PM them when I get a new Chapter up I would be happy to!
     
  4. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    oh you better keep goin!! this is gonna be priceless!! hehe!! ok that was lame but this is gonna be too funny!!
     
  5. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Ok more!

    Chapter 2

    Syd-''Vaughn, could you hurry up...a little."

    Vaughn-''Hey this is really hard work."

    Syd-''Your putting shirts in a suitcase, how is that work?"

    Vaughn-''Where were you in science class, useing a force to move an object is work, i think, I learned it in 6th grade I can't remember."

    Syd-''I hate science, I always did. I just sat in the back and didn't pay atenttion at all.''

    Vaughn-''I find that hard to believe!"

    Syd-''Well believe it buddie IHAVE A WILD SIDE!"

    Vaughn-''I know you have a wild side, but that kind of wild side?"

    Syd-''Yes, just don't tell my dad."

    Vaughn-''I don't think that will be a problem, I'll just tell Weiss and he'll tell the world with in seconds."

    Syd-''You better not, my dad'll kill me!"

    Vaughn-''I don't think so, it was jsut science."

    Syd-''Then you don't know me dad, he'll flip."

    Vaughn-"'Filp"'

    Syd-''Yes Flip."

    Vaughn-''Did you pick that up when you weren't paying atenttion in science class."

    Syd-'So what if I did."


    Thats all for now!
     
  6. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    NO!!! dont stop!! hehe!! i love it!! :D
     
  7. Moriel

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    this is so good! i love it u can't stop there u have 2 post more!
     
  8. nancee

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    haha funny
     
  9. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    It's wonderful and really funny

    LMAO when I read that!!!! :LOL: :LOL: :LOL:
    That's really good work!!!
    Please post more soon :woot:
    Can I get a PM when you update please???
    That would be nice!
     
  10. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    this is great i can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Ok I have a new chapter up!

    Chapter 3

    Syd-''It all started from Andy and Sam."

    Vaughn-''How come I get the strangest feeling I don't even want to know about them?"

    Syd-''You do? Wow because I had the same feeling!"

    Vaughn-''Well are you ready to go now?"

    Syd-''I just have to get a few more things. Can you go put this stuff in my car, or your car, I don't really care."

    Vaughn-''If I must."

    Vaughn walks out to his car while Sydney gets a few more things that she needs. She goes outside by Vaughn when she's done.

    Vaughn-''I thought you said you needed a few more things, not two more suitcases full."

    Syd-''I'm a girl, I need my things."

    Vaughn-''How many suitcases do you have? I mean really you already have like ten here."

    Syd-''12."

    Vaughn-''Whatever, I have two maybe three and you have 12."

    Syd-''Well I'm going to be living there, you're lucky I didn't pack up all of my stuff."

    Vaughn-''Well how nice of you. Do you know how to get to my house?"

    Syd-"I think so."

    Vaughn-''Ok then I guess I'll see you there."

    Syd-''I guess so."

    Vaughn-''You scared."

    Syd-''Why? Should I be?"

    Vaughn-''No...well maybe, a little."

    Syd-''Oh thanks for that."

    Vaughn-''I was just saying."

    Syd-''Well I'm scared enough as it is, so don't just say."

    Vaughn-''I'll see you there."

    Syd-''Didn't we already do this?''

    Vaughn-''I think so."

    Syd-''Bye."

    *At Vauhgn's house*

    Syd-''Vaughn this place is huge."

    Vaughn-''I know, it used to be my aunt's but she thought it was way to big for one person, so she gave it to my. And she moved back to France with my mom in her way over-sized house."

    Syd-''Hmm...interesting, do you tell your houses history to everyone?"

    Vaughn-''Nope, just you."

    Syd-''Well thank you for that, but can we just go in and get this over with?"


    Ok I have to go! More tomarrow or tuseday!
     
  12. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    okay....ohhh and could you PM me....thanks.
     
  13. Aliasfan23

    Aliasfan23 Rocket Ranger

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    WOW! I just caught up! This is great! I love it! Can you PM for this one too? Pleaase?
     
  14. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    aww this is gonna be cute!! ok pm me when you have the next chap please??!! :D
     
  15. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    another really great chapter...Not as much funny as the other ones but still funny!!! And it's well written!!!!
    I'm looking forward to another chap...:)
    And thanks for the PM!!!
     
  16. Vannie

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    This is cute, Can yo PM me whe you update? thanks
     
  17. Moriel

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    great chapt! r syd & vaughn ever going 2 date???
     
  18. FrEeLaNcEr03

    FrEeLaNcEr03 Rocket Ranger

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    this is really good!! please write more soon!!! and can you pm me please? thanx a bunch!!
     
  19. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    can u pm me 2 please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  20. FrEeLaNcEr03

    FrEeLaNcEr03 Rocket Ranger

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    more soon!!! HINT HINT***
     

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