betrayad

ok first off GREAT chapter!!! but i'm just a little confused,
is he mad at her? Are they just not talking?
*catie*
oh ya and i loved the part with Weiss!!! please keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
mystery_chick said:
OHHHH BURNED! they need a cute cover. Husband and wife? girl and boy friend??? something that will bring them really close! *wink wink* :lol: j/k. any ways love it! :D
--mandy :angelic:
All right, I think I will do that, and you just gave me a really good idea! Thank hun!
 
Xtremelimits08 said:
ok first off GREAT chapter!!! but i'm just a little confused,
is he mad at her? Are they just not talking?
*catie*
oh ya and i loved the part with Weiss!!! please keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx hun. Yeah Syd is trying to talk to vaughn, but he is mad at her, and is giving her thesilent treatment. I thought the part with Weiss was fun to write for! Lol
 
"black 2003 Ford Focus " haha you know i wish they would have better car by now! omg i love this!! "I was like walking backwards and I tripped over a vegetable stand. Who leaves those on the sidewalk anyway? So I fractured my elbow" this is the best ever!!! haha!! post more real soon!! :jump:
 
What other storys have u writtin? or to everyone which ones would u recommend? sorry i just just started reading these 2 days ago and want to read more so a lil' help!!!!!!!!please
 
FrEeLaNcEr03 said:
Will was looking at Syd trying to get her attention, Sydney was looking at Vaughn trying to get his attention, and Vaughn was looking at Jack who was giving him the most dirty look in the world. Jack had told Vaughn that if he ever hurt his daughter he would personally blow his brains out.
lmao! that was so funny...i l ove it when jack hates vaughn....oh and damn that wil tippin! yews he is cute adn all but vaughn has already taken her! stupid will!!!! post more...thats gotta be funny
 
alisydas said:
No will is so sweet.
i have to disagree with you there sophie. I HATE WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HES STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :angry: :angry: :Ph34r: :Ph34r: :angry: :angry: (n) (n) :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :cuss: :cuss: :madfire: :stupidcomputer: :stupidcomputer: :wtf: :wtf: :angry2: :o_O: :devil: :rip: :superangry: :superangry: :starwars: :starwars: 🇳🇴 :mad: :nuke: :nuke: :tvhorror:
 
Ok first off, I usually like Will, but it's Sydney and Vaughn Sydney and Vaughn. Poor Vaughn. I hope that he will give Sydney a chance to explain. If I were Vaughn I would kick little Will's behind. I agree, I think Vaughn and Sydney's cover should be husband and wife! hehe :D Add to the trouble. Great job though with your first 2 chapters, I really like them, and you have me hooked. Till your next chapter! :smiley:
 
This is awsome please keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i can't wait to see what happens when Will and Vaughn come face to face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
thanx so much!! I am so happy to have such good friends. At first i wasnt sure whether or not to continue, but you guys persuaded me to. thanx for the great reviews, and i will probably have some more up tomorrow.
luv ya,
Seugnet (Soo-nay)
P.S. Yes, that is my name. lol
 
WOW that's new. What nationality are you? It's k if you don't wanna tell me FYI, I just wanna know the origin. It sounds innovative. LMAO Luve ya,
Dani
 
wow this is great!!! keep it going, more please? i think it would be really really good if you had a part from vaughn's POV when he is talking about his feelings about all this, and how he wonders if she ever cared about if, okay, maybe not, but that just struck me. good job!!!!!!!!
 
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