Compromise, Sacrifice, and a Silent Hope

wowowowoowowowowowowowowowowwo! that was amazing.. its greta! do me a little favor...


AND WRITE MORE!!!!! i love this story. ur such a great writer!
 
:smiley: thanks for posting, xoxilovevaughnxox! It's always great to have new readers!

I'm halfway done with the next chapter, and I know where I'm going with it (Kristin does too...), so I should have it up soon.
 
Yes, I was aware of the fact that we have jucy juice in the house...but I hid it. We also have Code Red...

I promise you guys that this chapter will be up soon. I'm on spring break this week, so after I finish chapter 10 of Remnants, I'll crank this thing out and post it for you guy, okay? :smiley: thanks for still checking in with me, I appriciate that.
 
you write very well!! more please though! its been over 2 weeks, right!?!? i really really especially like the very beginning, the part at the graveyard. i like tragic depressing stuff. not sure why. PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!! and good job
 
depressing stuff is fun to write...I can handle that. :smiley:

Yes, it's been awhile. Sorry. Right now, I'm fighting w/chapter 10 of Remnants. When I get that done I'll finish this chapter. Would anyone be interested in a teaser? bc/I could post one...
 
okay...here then. Sorry it's not in the spoiler brackets thing....I couldn't figure out how to do that. Any tips there? I put it in white, so you'll have to scroll over it to read. Anyways. I hope you like this. I'll try to finish the chapter tonight. :smiley:

The blood seemed to be flowing steadily. Puddles of it condensed on the carpet, staining it crimson. The pain tearing her apart, Sydney struggled to sit back up. Silent tears streamed down her face as she grimaced and let out a soft moan. Finally in an upright position, she looked full into the eyes of the man threatening her life. Her head was swimming and she didn’t think she would last much longer. There was only one thing left that she had to do.

“Michael,” she managed to grit out. “I love you.”

“Syd,” she heard him sigh.

All she knew then was painless dark as she subconsciously heard a last gunshot. Then it was black nothingness.
 
Hey! :P I'll take that as a compliment...you wanna read the rest. Well, I'm working on it. It should be done tonight, I just have to go home (I'm at the library), type it up & finish the last little bit...we'll see how fast I can finish my algebra so I can finish it. Thanks for reading
 
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