Dinner

Ok like I said before Francie isn't evil even thought it takes place after Phase 1.And no one ever said that Francie and Weiss were going to start a relationship. Sorry but I like writing it like a script and some people like it better that way. I'm sorry I don't know if this comes off as a little harsh to you I'm just trying to defend my work!

Kelli
 
Didn't come across harsh at all. And it makes sense, what you said. Everyone has a different writing style. And if you wanted to know more about what they were doing, you could always put actions in parenthasies (<don't even ask me to spell that right)
Such as:

Weiss: Blah blah blah bl- (looks around bug-eyed, confused that only the word blah is coming out of his mouth)
 
spywolf said:
Weiss: Blah blah blah bl- (looks around bug-eyed, confused that only the word blah is coming out of his mouth)
hehe lol. blah blah blah, hehe
--Mandy :angelic:
 
so are u gonna make weiss and francie gt together or what? and u gotta elaborate more on syd and vaughn...juss saying
 
I don't knwo yet because I don't think that they would really make a good cupple but I'll see where iut goes. I'll have a little more of the story in a bit.
 
At the reatarant

Syd-''I think that Weiss really likes her.''

Vaughn-''I don't think so, hes still in lve with the new agent Phillps I think her name is.''

Syd-''Well then should we go over there.''

Vaughn-''No let'em talk for a while besides, I hardly spend anytime a lone with you.''

Syd-''Well I'd rather be at your house a lone with you than here.''

Vaughn-''So lets go.''

Syd-''I don't want to get Francie mad.''

Vaughn-''I think she'll understand if you know what I mean.''

Syd-''Ok then lets go.''

They walked back over to where now just Weiss was.

Syd-''Where's Francie?''(She looks around a little)

Weiss-''I don't think she likes me vary much.''

Syd-''Oh I see.''

Weiss-''What's that supposed to mean.''

Syd-''I don't know that it's ok you two didn't hit it off. Why did you come here anyway?''

Weiss-''Because I was looking for you guys.''

Vaughn-''Don't you have anybody else to bug.''

Weiss-''Well yeah so...''

Vaughn-''So why don't you go bug them?''

Weiss-''Because it's funner buging the lovey dovey people which would be you.''

Vaughn-''So I'm sure you could find a different cupple to bug.''

Weiss-''You two are officaly a cupple now think of how much troble you could get ion if Kendall found out he would be so mad! His face would turn that bright red color. That would be so funny.''

Syd-''Sence when have you ever thought of anything.''

Weiss-''Hy I saved your butt a cupple of times so I wouldn't go calling me stupid.''

Syd-''I never said you wer stupid.'' She turns to Vaughn ''Did I ever say he was stupid.''

Vaughn-''No I don't think so.''

She turns back

Syd-''See I never said you were stupid.''

Weiss-''Whatever I'm getting out of here, see you two tomarrow.''

Vaughn and Syd-''See ya.''

Francie comes back out

Francie-''What is that guys deal?''

Syd-''What?''

Francie-''He's I don't know different.''

Syd-''Like how?''

Francie-''I don't know, but it was kind of scarry.''

Vaughn-''Weiss isn't that bad once you get to know him.''

Syd-''Yeah his not that bad.''

Francie-''OK whatever you say.'' She turns to leave

Syd-''Francie, is it ok with you if I go?''

Francie looks at Vaughn and at her with a smerk on her face.

Francie-''Fine with me.''

Hope you liked it. Tell me what you think.
 
Ok this is for the people who don't like the script form. Hope your happy! Ok we're in school right now and nobody is on here! We have a free day today, but I'm not sure why. I think I'd rather be in class because after 2 hours or this it gets really boring!



Syd and Vaughn at his house. Vaughn is cooking.



"Vaughn it smells good, what is it?" and she walks over to him, ''It's spahetti with sauce, it will be ready is a little bit'' He pulls Sydney closer to him and kisses her, which catches Sydney a little off gaurd, buit she can't help but to kiss him.''I didn't know I was getting dessert first.'' she says. ''Neither did I, but i liked it.'' ''Maybe you can save some of that for later.'' she says seductively. ''ok i will'' but he kisses her again.


Later after dinner.

''So where is that dessert you promised?'' syd asks ''Right here'' he starts kissing her then pulls her onto the couch.

We want to keep this PG-13 so I'll leave you to come up with what happens next.

Jule and Kelli
 
oOoOo im in skool to...shhh...i gasped onve again adn i might get kicked off for not doing my work.....kool...
 
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