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Flash Back

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Roxy, Jun 10, 2003.

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  1. Roxy

    Roxy Rocket Ranger

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    Title: Flash Backs
    Author:Me, UndercoverMichaelLover, Roxy
    Genre:Mystery, Suspense, Cliffhanger
    Status:In the Process
    Rating:PG, PG-13, some Language
    Spoiler:Starts after the Finale
    Summary: Just another finale theory, it'll have lots of chapters. Check out my other FanFic, After The Finale, and tell me which one to continue on with, this one or that one! Comments, suggestions, questions are apreciated!




    “I’ve been missing for two years?” Sydney whispered. “How is that possible? We are in the ****ing CIA! They find people, easily! I couldn’t have just disapeared, there would have been research done! This is ridiculous!” Sydney began shouting after a few minutes of silent thinking. “Syd, we tried. We really did, we thought . . . we thought you were dead.” Vaughn said, looking down ashamed. “Yes, the odds were against me, this clone had killed my roomate, she could have killed me. But since when did the CIA act on the odds? Did you just give up on me? Sydney choked. “Syd, try to calm down, we did look for you. We-“ Vaughn began, trying to act calm but Sydney interrupted him. “When did you decide I was dead, what proof did you have?” “Your house was blown up when I got there Syd. We found your belongings, your gun, a tooth, and a toe. We decided you had been blown up. We didn’t know you had been taken. Will, luckily was found and saved. He’s just fine. Francie was also blown up. We found more then just a tooth and a toe from her.” Vaughn explained. “Wait Will can’t be alive, I saw him dead, in the bathtub, like . . . like Danny.”

    ::Sydney::

    I couldn’t sort out all the thoughts mixed into my head. I was gone for two years, had no memories of the two years, Vaughn had a ring on his finger, Francie was dead, Will was alive, what about my mom? Where was she? And Sloane, what had happened to him? Who blew up the house? How did Will and I escape it? What the hell is going on? Vaughn and I are being flown to the CIA. I can’t look at Vaughn without crying, I can’t do anything without crying. I don’t want to talk anymore, I don’t want to open my eyes anymore, I don’t want to be anymore. Whats the point? Everyone had forgotten about me. Will I still just be forgotten? My eyes met Vaughn’s. “Are you married?” I managed to ask. “No, engaged. To . . to Alice.” He answered. I wimpered, turning away from him. “Sydney, I’m so sorry. If I had known . . .” Luckily, he shutup then, I wouldn’t have been able to take much more. I closed my eyes, trying to think. I slipped into a restless sleep.

    *Flash Back*

    Red, red was all I saw. A brief veiw of my mothers face, then more red. The next thing I new, I was in the back of a car. I tried to sit up, but my head pounded and my foot throbbed. I looked down, my shoe was gone, and so was a toe. “Where am I?” I tried to say but my mouth was sore, a mollar had been pulled out. My mother turned from the wheel. “Don’t worry Sydney, I’m going to take care of you. Everything will be fine. You just stay there and rest. Just stay there and rest.” Red again.

    ::Vaughn::

    The CIA was disturbingly quiet as Sydney and I came in. Sydney was escorted to a small room by two gaurds right away. Her face showed terrified confusion. Walking to the breafing room I tried to get everything straight in my mind. Sydney was alive, she had been kidnapped. I put myself in her place, I suddenly woke up to see that the world had gone on without me. I wouldn’t be able to handle that, how would she? Jack, Marshal, Kendell, and Carry sat at the briefing table. I had a seat, waiting for someone to start a conversation. “What in hell are we going to do about this?” I said finally. “I have no idea.” Mumbled Kendell. “We have to find out what happened. We have to get her memory back. Therapy probably won’t work, so what will? We have to search her, get as much information as we can from her.” Carry said quietly. “Right, but we don’t have time for that right now, we have to let her stabalize, we oursleves have to stabalize.” Kendell said. “Right umm, but sir, could we you know, since we haven’t seen her so long, it’s been two years, so could we see-“ Marshal stuttered. “No, she requested to be picked up by Will right away, and he’ll be here any minute now.” Said Kendell. “I’m her father, I want to see her now. Vaughn was sent to see her, I should be able to go . . . now.” Jack said. “No you can’t. Vaughn was the only one available to pick her up, it could have been you but you were busy.” Kendell replied in a stiff voice. “I’m her ****ing father! She is my ****ing daughter! I want to see her NOW!” Jack said, raising his voice. “No.” Kendell answered. “Carry, you make a list of questions that need to be answered, I want EVERYTHING on there. Good night all.” He then got up and left the room. On my out of the CIA drive way I saw Will pulling in. He gave me a breif look of confusion and a slow smile, all I did was nod. I tried to focus on getting home, but my mind was a blur. I can’t imagine what it would be like for Sydney.


    ::Irina::

    “Jen! I’m back!” I yelled into the cold house. No answer, typical for Jen, a 14-year-old. I walked through the kitchen and stopped at the refridgerator, looking to see if anyone was watching. I pulled it open and turned the tiny nob inside, and the refrigderator slid sideways revealing my secret door. I went inside and locked it behind me then slowly walked down the steel steps. “Sydney? Are you hun-“ I stopped, Sydney wasn’t there. I ran up the stairs and burst through the secret door. “Jen! Where the hell is she! What did you do with her!?” I yelled running into her room. “Who, what are you talking about. Calm down mom.” Jen answered cooly, but she was hiding something, I could see it. “I know you know about her, you were watching me! This is just perfect! That’s why I can’t tell you these kind of things!” I yelled. “Mom, she’s my sister! I never knew I had a sister, and neither did she! You were going to kill her, you are using her to do something bad! I saved her! I was being a REAL sister, like you should be a real mother!” Jen exploded, running out of the house. “Jen STOP! STOP!” I yelled after her, but she wouldn’t. I jumped into my car and spend up to her, pulling my gun out and pointing it at her.

    Tell me what you think PLEASE! I'll write more soon, and tell me which of the fanfics u want me to continue with, the After The Finale one (scroll down or look at next page of General FIc to find it) or this one! Thanks!

    -Roxy
     
  2. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    i really like this!! i love the toe part!! omg thats hilarious i dont know why but it is!! i like both your stories and want you to finish both!!
     
  3. Roxy

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    The toe part lol, I had to think of something that makes them think she was blown up lol, but I didn't want her to lose an arm! The problem is, that both my stories are going the same way so I think I have to chose . . . I could do one and then do the other one after I'm done, as like a different version or something, what do ya think?

    -Roxy
     
  4. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    yeah do that!! i think they are both awesome fics and would be disappointed if you stoped one of them!!
     
  5. Roxy

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    Ok, I'll do this one first then continue with the other one afterwards, now I have to go write lol.

    -Roxy
     
  6. Alias Obsessed 47

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    that was great! do you think that you could pm me when you post more? that would be great! thanks alot!

    -muffin
     
  7. Roxy

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    ::Vaughn::

    “Hey Hon! How was work?!” The words came from the living room, Alice’s words. “Fine.” I mumbled, passing by as quick as I could. “Where do you think your going?” Alice giggled. I stopped and looked at her, her blonde tossed hair, grey eyes, aging skin, fake-pink lips. She pulled her long nails to my face and said, “How do you think this color works on me?” I always hated pink, it made me think of snobby, daddys-little-girl with a lot of money, sorority girls. Alice never used to wear pink, Sydney NEVER wore pink. “Looks nice on you, like usual Alice.” I smiled, a fake smile. “Aww! Your too nice.” Alice cooed. I didn’t love her, how could I? Sydney was back, Sydney, my love, my obsession, my dream woman. Alice was there to help me through the pain of losing her, she was my sanctuary. But now, it feels like she had just tricked me to believe that. I took a hot shower, it seemed to relax me. How was I going to tell Alice what happened? She still thought I worked for a bank, how could I make this work? I had to tell her, I had to do something about it. But what?

    ::Will::

    Sydney was found, alive. What now? What the hell now? I was overcomed by joy at first, my best friend! My crush was back! But then the sinking feeling hit me, what would life be like now? Working with Sark, how could I hide that from Sydney? I never thought that this would happen, if I did I would never had agreed to anything. “Will!” Sydney gasped when I entered the CIA. She ran up and hugged me, like I had never been hugged before. As though she was clinging onto me for dear life. “Will oh, Will its so good to see you.” She sobbed into my shoulder. “It’s good to see you here too. It’s amazing.” I whispered.

    The car ride was silent. “My mom kidnapped me.” Sydney said, right out of the blue. I stopped the car. “What?” “ I had a dream while I was sleeping, it was like a flashback. My mom was there, driving me somewhere. A tooth was gone out of my mouth, and a toe was recently cut off and bandaged up. If she didn’t kidnap me then someone got me from her, maybe Sloane or Sark or something.” I stared at her in disbelief. “Are you sure?” I asked. “Positive.” She said quietly. We continued to drive on.

    Sydney stumbled through the door of my new house. “You’ll have to stay in the guest bedroom. We can decorate it soon if you want. She nodded. “Too bad Francie isn’t here to help us decorate anymore.” She whispered looking around at the crème walls, and boring furniture. I gave a odd laugh, “Yeah.” Tears all of a sudden welled up in my eyes, I don’t know why, probably all of the things put together. Sydney’s already tearful eyes dribbled tears faster. She came to me and hugged me. We just stood there hugging. “I love you Syd, I missed you.” I choked. “I love you too.” She cried. She fell asleep on the couch later than night.

    *Will’s Dream*

    Francie stabbed me, the hard, cold knife shot through my stomach, then was pulled out fast. I slumped to the floor. Francie was crying, “Will, no Will. No, I won’t let you die. I won’t” She said grabbing a towel from the nearby bathroom. She wrapped it around my wound. “Will, come on Will, you can make it, hold that there.” She sobbed. I grasped the towel as it absorbed the blood. I felt dizy, I was read to black out. “Will, I’m going to give you these pain killers, a sleeping pill, and put you in the bathtub. When you wake up you will have to choose whether to die or to work with us. I don’t want you to die Will, because I love you, so I’m giving you this chance.” She whispered. I just moaned. I ate the pills and blacked out.

    I sat up hard, my body was drenched in sweat, my eyes were bloodshot. I had betrayed my best friend.

    ::Jen::

    “I’ll shoot Jen! You know I will! Your lucky your alive even now!” she shouted at me. My mind whirled. My mother was pointing a gun at me, I just found out I had a sister. My mom was doing something in that secret room, something bad. There had been earthquakes, monsooms, even tornatoes in Hong Kong ever since my mom had captured Sydney. I stopped, my eyes narrowed to the gone pointed at me.
    “Don’t shoot mom. Please mom.” I whispered. “I wanted to do something right for a change, I’m tired of being the bad people. I’m sorry I disobeyed you mom, I really am! Forgive me! Don’t shoot! I’ll do anything!” I screamed.
    “Anything?” My mother said, her eyes showing that mischievious glint.
    “Anything.” I confirmed. My mother lowered her gun, and opened the door for me to get into the car. I did. What was I in for now? What had I just gotten myself into? Oh god Oh god.

    Hope everyone likes it. Tell me, is it too confusing? Someone said to start a new paragraph each time or something, how was this one? If it's too confusing then tell me. More to come soon!

    -Roxy
     
  8. Sarah Vartan

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    WOw! very good :) I can't wait 2 see what happens...wow Will working for Sark, Syd having a sister..i like it a lot! plz continue! :)
     
  9. Ames47

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    that was really good! i dont think its confusing just alittle different!! but i still like it!!
     
  10. Alias Obsessed 47

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    that was really good. i like it. thanks for the pm. i would have never known to look in this thread if you haddnt pmed me. thank you again.
     
  11. Roxy

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    NP! I'm almost done with next bit, I'll have it ready by tonight, I'll PM u then too if you like :D

    -Roxy
     
  12. Roxy

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    This may be the last bit of today, but more to come tommorrow! ENJOY!

    ::Sydney::

    A few days after my return I was back at the CIA, being tested. They asked me questions about anything I could remember, they searched me. They asked me questions about the scar on my stomach, about my toe and tooth. I was sent to hipnosis therapy after that. The counseler began her usual speech, “You know that this can cause serious nightmares, falshbacks-“ It hit me then, I forgot to tell them about my flash back. “I’ve had a flashback, I forgot to tell everyone.” I said, interrupting her immediately. “Oh? Can you explain it to me?” she asked surprised. “I saw red, flashes of red, then just red. Then I saw my mother’s face, looking over me, then more red. The next thing I knew I was in a car, laying down. My shoe and toe was gone, and a mollar had been newly pulled out. My mother was at the wheel, she said that she would take care of me and to get some rest. That’s it.” I said blankly. “Was the car driving?” she asked. “Yes.” “Thankyou Sydney, we won’t need to do any hypnosis on you today. I’m calling to give Kendell this news, you should report to the briefing room right away. Good job.”

    I walked to the briefing room. Only Marshal had arrived. “Sydney! I came early because, you know I just thought, you might be here early. How are you doing? I’m mean I’m sure your not doing good or anything, with the resent events-“ he stumbled. “It’s good to see you too Marshal.” I smiled. Kendell, and Carry entered soon too. Then Vaughn, who I didn’t even look at, then my father. “Daddy!” I rushed to him. “Sydney, I’m so glad your ok, I’m so so glad. I missed you, I love you.” He said hugging me. “Ok, moments over. Have a seat you two.” Growled Kendell. As we were all seated Carry began reading allowed from her list:

    “With Sydney’s return we have these unanswered questions:
    Who kidnapped her
    Who set off the bomb in her house
    How was she saved
    Sloane’s Whereabouts
    Irina’s Whereabouts
    Sark’s Whereabouts
    Why was Sydney saved
    If saved on purpose, why was Will saved
    What happened during the years Sydney was missing
    What is with that scar
    Why was her toe cut off
    Why was her tooth pulled

    Now, I’ve heard of Sydney’s flashback and came up with these answers:
    Who kidnapped her: Irina, or if she didn’t Irina would know who.
    How was she saved/ who set off the bomb: Irina saved her so she could have set off the bomb too.
    Why was her toe and tooth cut/pulled out: Irina could have used them to make it look like Sydney had been blown up.

    What do you think?”

    I don’t know why, but something about this made a tear fall from my face. Carry gave me caring smile, and I gave a pathetic smile back. I don’t know how I’m handling this so well, I feel as though I’m not really in me, it’s like my mind is wandering but I still manage to get around with only half the concentration. I finished my day with a numb feeling, the bed as it hit my face felt so reassuring.

    *Flash Back*

    Brrring! Brring! A cellphone’s tune woke me up. “Yes?” My mother said nonchalantly. “Hello Sloane, no, no, I found your cellphone, I’m returning it to you right now. Oh? Ok where else can we meet? Oh, good idea. No, no calls. No, I haven’t seen Sark, he hasn’t called you either. Right, hows 5 minutes? See you there.” As my mom dropped the cellphone under the speed pedal and crushed it, speeding up, she s******ed. My mind was too hurt, to blank to realize I was being taken to Sloane. Shortly we arrived in a desterted park, I heard the muffled voices of my mother and Sloane. “Do you have it?” “What, your phone?” “Yes.” “No” “What do you mean?” “I don’t have it.” “Why not?” “You won’t need it anyway.” “What do you mean?” “This is what I mean.” I heard finger nails ring against metal, I saw the glint of a gun. Then came the blow, Sloane fell to the ground, dead. My mother walked into the car and slammed the door. Red.

    I woke up sweating, heaving, screaming.

    ::Irina::

    “Do you have everything? Remember what to do? Remember what will happen if you don’t do what your supposed to?” I asked Jen. “Yes mom, yes, yes.” She mumbled. I leaned down and planted a kiss on her cheek, just acting for looks, and whispered, “Don’t screw things up.” She smiled and left the airport, onto the plane, the plane to Burbank, California.


    Hope you liked it!

    -Roxy
     
  13. Alias Obsessed 47

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    that was great! thanks for the pm.
     
  14. Ames47

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    wow great chap!!! ok i love the toe and mollar part i dont know why but i think its hilarious!! anyways thanks for the pm and cant wait to see what happens next!!
     
  15. Roxy

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    ::Bows:: THank you THank you THank you very much!

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    this is really good
     
  17. Roxy

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    Thanks mom! :D

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  18. Alias Obsessed 47

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    post more! post more! ::chants while jumping up and down:: can you please pm me when you post more? thanks!
     
  19. Roxy

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    Ok, this is short because I was busy making my new sig but here ya go:

    ::Vaughn::

    Sydney wouldn’t look at me, she wouldn’t talk to me for the past week. I decided to give it another shot. ‘Hello this is Will, leave a message.’ The answering machine said coldly, “Hi, this is Vaughn, umm I would like to talk to Sydney, when she has the chance, have her call me back-“ The phone clashed against it’s case as Sydney picked it up, “Hi.”
    “Hi, Syd?”
    “Don’t call me Syd.”
    “Sorry, Sydney.”
    “What do you need?”
    “To talk to you.”
    “Well get on with it.”
    “Right, uhh, I wanted to know how you are doing.”
    “I’m doing dandy, and yourself?”
    “Good. I’m going to call off the wedding, or at least postpone it, until things are patched up.”
    “You do that.”
    PAUSE
    “Syd, I’m sorry.”
    “Yeah.”
    “I still love you.”
    “Too bad then huh.”
    “I guess, but I just wanted you to know. I’m still here for you.”
    “Yeah, good to know.”
    PAUSE
    “I love you too.”
    “You do?”
    “Well, I can’t really help it.”
    “Same here.”
    “Vaughn, I gotta go. I’m going . . . to do something”
    “Okay, call me if you need anything.”
    “I’ll try.”
    “Bye”
    “Bye”
    As the phone clicked I sighed in relief, I knew Syd would be hard to talk to, I knew she wouldn’t want to here from me. That went well though, better than imagined at least. “Brrrring.” The phone rang once before I jumped to pick it up. “Vaughn?” Sydney’s weak voice asked. “Yeah? Are you ok?” “No, I’m not. So much is happening, I’m being scanned today, to see what that scar is for, tomorrow I’m being hypnotized, my mother might have kidnapped me, Sloane is dead, I keep having flash backs, I’m scared, I’m really scared.” She sobbed. “I’m coming over ok?” “K.”

    ::Sydney::

    “Ok Syd, tell me about your newest flashback.” Vaughn said slowly. “I . . . I was still in the car with my mother. She began talking on a cellphone to Sloane, Sloane’s cellphone. They decided to meet at a park so my mom could return his cellphone. And . . . . at the park, she . . . she shot him. He was dead, I’m sure of it.” I stuttered. “Well that explains why we haven’t had any information about or from Sloane the past 2 years . . .” he said, lost in thought. “Vaughn, I . . . I’m lost. Lost without you.” I blurted out. Damn, why did I have to be so stupid all the time. He held me while I cried on his shoulder, for what seemed like eternity until his phone rang. He fumbled to pick it up. “Hello?” “Hon, it’s Alice, where the hell are you!” I heard a high pitch voice from the phone.


    Sorry it's so short, I'll have more tommorrow I promise!

    -Roxy
     
  20. Ames47

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    this is so good!! im so in it to now!! :D ok you better have more tomorrow!!
     

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