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“Ready, GO” Vaughn said
All four teams moved in. Alpha and Bravo covered the entrance while Charlie and Delta moved in to recover the manuscript. They came to a long hallway that split off at the end.
“Charlie you go left and we’ll go right.” Vaughn ordered
Vaughn, Sydney and the other agent moved slowly down the hallway. They headed around a corner and waiting for them was a guard, he shot the agent and almost shoot Sydney but her and Vaughn dove behind a wall. While he was reloading his gun Sydney shoot him. Vaughn ran up to the agent that was lying on the floor.
“He’s still alive.” Vaughn said out of breath
“Stay with him and I’ll get the manuscript.” Syd said
“NO, its too dangerous you can’t go by yourself.” Vaughn said
“You can’t leave him.” She said
Then Sydney ran down the corridor. Vaughn shook his head as he plugged the bullet wound in the agent’s side. Sydney came too a small room that had a safe in it. She opened the safe and took the manuscript. Just as she was about to leave she heard a thick British accent behind her.
“Very good Agent Bristow, Just as I planned.” She rolled her eyes and turned around to see Sark standing across from her.
“Don’t worry I’ll make your death quick, Sloane is getting tired of you. You’ve been causing him an awful lot of trouble lately.” Sydney gave him a hard look.
“Your mother is fine, she has been playing you from the beginning.” He laughed
“I truly believed we could have been great partners.” Just as he was about to shot Sydney a young woman Agent (About 19 years old) came in from behind Sark and shoot him in the back. Sark dropped to the floor. Sydney had no clue who it was so she just stood there.
“Come on.” The women said
Sydney was reluctant to follow her at first but then she pulled out her CIA id and showed it too Sydney.
“Let’s go they radioed in for back up a couple of minutes ago. They’ll be here any second.”
Sydney ran behind the dark haired women she was about Sydney’s height and had brown eyes. They headed out to the rendezvous point.
“Who are you?” Syd asked
“That doesn’t matter right now.” The agent said
All of the agents boarded the plane and headed home. Later Sydney sat next to Vaughn.
“Who is she?” She asked
“I don’t know but she’s been helping the CIA for quite a long time. She helped us find this place.” He said
“She saved my life, Sark was about too shot me and she came in from behind him.” Syd said
“Well then go talk to her.” Vaughn said
Sydney decided she should atleast thank her for saving her life. She walked over to the Agent and sat down across from her. The woman was sitting there reading a magazine.
“Hi.” Syd said
“Hey.” The woman said
“I just wanted too say thank you for saving my life. Sark would have shoot me.” Syd said
“No problem.” The agent said
“My name is Sydney Bristow.” Just then the woman looked up from what she had been reading. She had a shocked look on her face.
“My names Laura.” She said
“Laura?” Syd was waiting for a last name
“Well I have a last name, but I’m ashamed of it.” She said as she read her magazine.
Sydney nodded and walked away. She went and sat back down next to Vaughn.
“Her names Laura.” She said
“What’s her last name?” Vaughn asked
“She wouldn’t tell me.” Syd said shrugging
A couple hours later the plane landed back at the operations center. They all headed inside for the debrief.
“Good job in the Philippines agents.” Kendall said
“It’s nice to have you all back in one piece. We have an agent that will be joining us in the battle to take down Sloane. Everyone I would like you to meet Laura Derevko. Irena Derevko’s other daughter.” Sydney had a shocked look on her face. She just starred at Laura. “Unlike her mother Laura is a loyal patriot to this country. The only thing Irena and Laura have in common is their blood. Anyway back to business.”
“Laura has been made friends with our buddy Sloane.” Kendall said
“I’ve been working with them for almost 2 months. I got a lot of information from them but no locations.” Laura said
“It was yesterday when my cover was blown after I sent my coordinates.”
“Well you can’t go back in there or they will kill you. So well have too figure out another plan. For now you are all excused.” Kendall said
Everyone grabbed their papers and headed out the door.
Sydney held Vaughn’s hand as they headed out the door. But before they could get far Laura stopped Sydney.
“Sydney?” she said. Sydney turned around.
“Can we meet for dinner, so we can sort this out.” She asked
“I don’t know.” Syd said
“Please, I promise I’m not going to hurt you.” Laura said
Sydney looked at Vaughn and then back at Laura.
“I guess you can come over too my place.” Syd said
“Great, um how’s 7:00.” Laura asked
“That’s fine.” Syd said
“Okay.” Laura said
With that Sydney and Vaughn started too walk out again.
“Are you going too be okay.” He asked
“I don’t know, I can’t judge her by our mother.”
“You should give her a chance. Besides don’t you want a little sister.” He said
Sydney cringed at that word. (Sister)
“Right well if you need anything call me and I’ll be right over.” He said as he kissed her good-bye
“Okay.” She said as she got in her car. Sydney headed home and cleaned the house quickly before Laura came over. Then she took a quick shower and put on some nice pants and a shirt. Ding-Dong. Oh god Sydney thought to herself. She paused a minute then opened the door.
“Hi” Laura said
“Hey” Sydney said with a smile “Come on in.”
“Thanks.”
Sydney and Laura sat down at the dinning room table and started too eat a little before Sydney started to ask questions.
“So did you live with Irena your whole life?” Sydney asked
“Yeah pretty much. She went on a lot of operations. Most of the time my father would watch me.” Laura answered
“Who was your father? I’m sorry, I’m just not used to the fact I have a sister.” Syd said
“It’s okay, My father was a good man unlike Irena. She set him up.” Luara said
“Let me guess, to get information.” Syd asked
“No, to have me. She stole something from your father called project Christmas.”
“To train kids to be spies.” They both said at the same time. They both giggled.
“When my dad wasn’t home she would train me with guns, explosives, strategic planning, anything she could think of. By the time I was 6 I could shoot a can 15 meters away. Everytime she was done with me she would reset my memory. She home schooled me so I didn’t have any friends. She always told me she was doing good by killing bad people. I actually believed her until I was about 10. We had this prison cell in our basement were she would torture agents of the CIA.” Sydney gave her a weird look. “Everytime she left I would bring them food and water. She always wondered how they lasted so long. I wanted to let them go but she would have killed me. She’s so deceiving.”
“So enough about me, what’s your life story.” Laura said
“Well the short version is when I was in college I was recruited by SD-6. I’m sure you know who they are.” Laura shook her head. “Well I thought they were part of the CIA but when Sloane killed my fiancé I knew he was lying. So I joined the CIA and I’ve been trying to get back at Sloane for a long time and until I kill him I’m not going to give up looking for him.” Syd said
“And I thought my life was bad.” Laura said as she laughed
“Hey who’s that Agent you were with today? The one you were holding hands with.” Laura asked
“Agent Michael Vaughn” Syd said. Laura gave her a confused look.
“What’s wrong?” Syd asked
“Was his father an agent?” Laura asked
“Yes, Irena killed him when Vaughn was 8.”Syd said
“Irena didn’t kill him.” Laura said
“What?” Syd asked looking confused
“Irena, she wasn’t the one who pulled the trigger.” Laura said starring at the table.
“Then who did?” Syd asked
“It was an ordinary day, Irena was coming home from a mission and she had a man, anyway she took him downstairs and tortured him. I tried to sleep but he kept screaming. So I snuck down too see what she was doing too him. She saw me and she pulled me out and put the gun in my hand. She put my finger on the trigger I tried too pull away but it went off. I stood there crying, as he struggled to say something.”
Sydney was crying. “How do you know it was him?”
“The last thing he said was Michael. Later when we were burying him I saw the name Vaughn on his chest patch.” They both sat there, tears rolling down their eyes.
“I should go.” Laura said
“Yeah, I’ll see you tomorrow.” Syd said
“No, I’m requesting they move me back to Langley.” Laura said
“You cant.” Syd said, “You just got here.”
“How am I supposed to even look at him when were in the same room.” Laura said
“It wasn’t your fault.” Syd said “Besides I need someone to talk too, I want you to stay, after all you’re my sister.” Sydney cringed again at that word, not believing she actually had a sister.
“I cant tell him.” Laura said
“Then I will, if I explain it the way you did too me he’ll understand it wasn’t your fault.” Syd said
“I don’t know Sydney.”
“Look I’ve lost so many people in my life I’m not going to lose my own sister.” Syd said
Laura turned around to face Sydney
“After what I just told you, you still accept me as your sister.” Laura said
“We’ve both been used before, you had no control of what happened.” Syd said
Laura started crying she walked toward Sydney and hugged her. At first Sydney didn’t know what to do but then she put her hands around her. She actually felt like a big sister.
“I’m going to be proud too call you my sister.” Laura said
That made Sydney fell so special. For once someone needed her just to be there.
After this chapter I'm going to take more time on the story from now on so it will be better.