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thanks you guys! im workin on chapter 8 rite now, but i havent gotten that much done. ill post it wen im done! hopefully today! thanks for ur positive responses. im gonna write a second book, comin up with good ideas for it!
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ok.........here's some of chapter 8!
Chapter 8
Sydney looked out the window as the plane flew over the ocean. She and Vaughn were on a mission to retrieve the clock that Irina was talking about.
* * * FLASHBACK * * *
"How could you EVER talk to my daughter that way?" Jack screamed at Irina Derevko.
"I don't know what you are talkin about Jack," Irina said calmly, sitting down on the hard tile in her cell.
"You are NOT her mother. if you were her mother, you wouldn't have faked your death and betrayed our family and our country."
Irina rolled her eyes. "You want the clock, don't you?"
"Yes.......but that's not the point."
"Ah......I know you want it. So, I'm going to tell you."
"Who said I wanted to know where it is?"
Irina stood up and walked to the glass that separated them. "Jack, I know you too well. You get this look on your face when you talk to me about one subject, yet you want to talk about something else too."
"You wouldn't know a single thing about me." Jack began to walk away.
"The clock is in France. At a collector's house. Pierre-Louis Lefèvre is his name. He lives in Paris. It's in his house. He was a former contact of mine," Irina explained.
Jack frowned, "How can I trust you?"
"You don't have to. It's totally up to you. That's what having the power of freedom is all about."
Jack started to walk away again. "If you want to listen to me, I'll be available to talk."
* * * END OF FLASHBACK * * *
Sydney woke up. Vaughn was shaking her shoulder. "We're here!" He called. She stood up. Many people were getting off the plane. She grabbed her bags from the store area above her seat and followed Vaughn to the terminal to retrieve the rest of their bags.
* * *
Jack, back at headquarters, turned on the screen to watch the video survalliance. He only saw the airport and turned it off. Jack leaned back in his chair.
Can I really trust Irina? I hope this plan works! Jack thought to himself. He closed his eyes and thought of all the ways that he and Sydney had suffered, losing Irina and then gaining her back again.
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn walked into the hotel lobby. They walked to the counter. "Bonjour le monsieur! Je suis Benjamin Eaton et ceci est ma femme, Adrianne. Nous serons obligé à vérifier ici dans notre salle. Merci!" Vaughn said.
Sydney looked up at him. Oh man, I love it when he speaks French! The man behind the counter handed them a key. "Votre salle est le numéro 47. C'est sur le Niveau 2. Prendre l'ascenseur là-bas en haut et dîner sera servi dans la salle à manger principale à 7 heures. Apprécier votre séjour!"
"Merci!" Sydney said as they walked away. Once they were in the elevator, she asked, "What did he say?"
"Your room is number 47. It is on Level 2. Take the elevator over there up and dinner will be served in the main dining room at 7 o'clock. Enjoy your stay!" The elevator door opened. Vaughn offered Sydney his arm. "Come on Mrs. Eaton, let's go see our room."
* * *
i gotta go, but ill post the rest later! hope you enjoy it!
<3, Kailyn
Chapter 8
Sydney looked out the window as the plane flew over the ocean. She and Vaughn were on a mission to retrieve the clock that Irina was talking about.
* * * FLASHBACK * * *
"How could you EVER talk to my daughter that way?" Jack screamed at Irina Derevko.
"I don't know what you are talkin about Jack," Irina said calmly, sitting down on the hard tile in her cell.
"You are NOT her mother. if you were her mother, you wouldn't have faked your death and betrayed our family and our country."
Irina rolled her eyes. "You want the clock, don't you?"
"Yes.......but that's not the point."
"Ah......I know you want it. So, I'm going to tell you."
"Who said I wanted to know where it is?"
Irina stood up and walked to the glass that separated them. "Jack, I know you too well. You get this look on your face when you talk to me about one subject, yet you want to talk about something else too."
"You wouldn't know a single thing about me." Jack began to walk away.
"The clock is in France. At a collector's house. Pierre-Louis Lefèvre is his name. He lives in Paris. It's in his house. He was a former contact of mine," Irina explained.
Jack frowned, "How can I trust you?"
"You don't have to. It's totally up to you. That's what having the power of freedom is all about."
Jack started to walk away again. "If you want to listen to me, I'll be available to talk."
* * * END OF FLASHBACK * * *
Sydney woke up. Vaughn was shaking her shoulder. "We're here!" He called. She stood up. Many people were getting off the plane. She grabbed her bags from the store area above her seat and followed Vaughn to the terminal to retrieve the rest of their bags.
* * *
Jack, back at headquarters, turned on the screen to watch the video survalliance. He only saw the airport and turned it off. Jack leaned back in his chair.
Can I really trust Irina? I hope this plan works! Jack thought to himself. He closed his eyes and thought of all the ways that he and Sydney had suffered, losing Irina and then gaining her back again.
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn walked into the hotel lobby. They walked to the counter. "Bonjour le monsieur! Je suis Benjamin Eaton et ceci est ma femme, Adrianne. Nous serons obligé à vérifier ici dans notre salle. Merci!" Vaughn said.
Sydney looked up at him. Oh man, I love it when he speaks French! The man behind the counter handed them a key. "Votre salle est le numéro 47. C'est sur le Niveau 2. Prendre l'ascenseur là-bas en haut et dîner sera servi dans la salle à manger principale à 7 heures. Apprécier votre séjour!"
"Merci!" Sydney said as they walked away. Once they were in the elevator, she asked, "What did he say?"
"Your room is number 47. It is on Level 2. Take the elevator over there up and dinner will be served in the main dining room at 7 o'clock. Enjoy your stay!" The elevator door opened. Vaughn offered Sydney his arm. "Come on Mrs. Eaton, let's go see our room."
* * *
i gotta go, but ill post the rest later! hope you enjoy it!
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thank you all! i gotta go 2 school rite now, but ill post the rest wen i get home. ill work on it wen i get to school. have ideas for a sequel!
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Sydney walked into the bathroom. It was around 4 o'clock in France. She had to get ready for the mission later in the evening. She pulled out of her suitcase, a make-up bag, a wig, a dress, and a pair of shoes. She slipped into the light blue dress. It had little white flowers all over it. It had very thin straps. How is this ever going to stay on? She slipped on the matching blue shoes. She looked at herself in the mirror.
"Man, I wish I always looked like this," Sydney said. Then, she put her wig on. It was light brown with blonde highlights. It was long and curly. She made sure that all the pins would hold it on.
Meanwhile, Vaughn was getting ready in the other bathroom. He had just finished dying his hair a dark red. He got dressed in a nice green shirt and a khaki colored suit. Vaughn finished his new appearance by putting in a pair of green contact lenses.
"Vaughn! I can't figure out how to put these contacts in," He heard Sydney call from the other room. He poked his head out of the bathroom. "Wait.....never mind! I got it!"
Sydney walked out of the bathroom, all dressed in blue. Even her eyes were a dark blue. Vaughn struggled to keep himself from drooling. "Wow! You look....."
"What? Ravishing? I know! And you, you look absolutely handsome. And thanks, Ben." Sydney winked at him. Vaughn felt his cheeks redden. "Do you think that make-up is too much?"
Vaughn scanned her face. She had light blue eye shadow with dark brown mascara and eyeliner. On her lips was a light coat of pink lip gloss. “For Sydney, yes. For Adrianne, absolutely not.�
"Oh.....thank you Ben darling! Now, what are we going to do with all this extra time?" Sydney asked, plopping down on the couch.
"We can look over the tech that Andy sent for us." Vaughn pulled out a small black bag. He emptied the contents onto the table. He picked out a white flower pin.
"For me?"
"Yes, it's your camera. The little center is the lense. You activate it using this button on the bracelet." He handed her the pin and a bracelet. It was white with a small flower charm on it. She found the button in the center of the charm.
"Cool! Andy is always coming up with great gadgets." Sydney exclaimed, putting the pin on her dress and the bracelet on her wrist.
"Now here are the earpieces." Vaughn handed her a tan piece that fitted into her ear. "You just touch it to turn it off and on." Both of them carefully placed the pieces into their ears.
"Shouldn't I have something to turn off the security cameras and descramble the code to get nto the vault?"
"Yes you should." Vaughn handed her a white cell phone. "To turn off the cameras, you dial 793, or Syd, and to descramble the code, you dial 236, or Ben."
"Clever!"
"Very. Now here is your purse." Vaughn handed her a white bag with a matching wallet inside.
Sydney got up. "I'm gonna go fill my wallet with some money and add a few more things to my bag."
"Syd, you wanna go get something to eat before we go?"
"Sure, I'd like that."
* * *
"Merci!" Sydney said to the waiter as he cleared the table. Sydney looked at Vaughn, "Merci to you to! The food was GREAT! I'm guessing you've been here before?"
"Yes. When Alice and I took a week vacation, we ate here." Vaughn wiped his mouth one more time.
"Alice?" Sydney asked, suspiciously.
"Alice, my girlfriend. I know I told you about her."
Sydney couldn't breath for a moment. "Yes, you told me. I'm sorry, I must have forgotten."
Vaughn could tell that Sydney was uncomfortable. No, I didn't tell her. I shouldn't have said anything. "Let's go!"
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn waited patiently as the limo driver came to open the door for them. The driver offered Sydney his hand. She willingly took it, still angry at Vaughn and stepped out onto the pavement. Vaughn got out behind her.
"Merci!" Vaughn said to the driver. He walked over to her and straightened his coat. "You ready, Adrianne?"
"Why wasn't my name Alice? I mean, it would remind of her, wouldn't it?" Sydney said angrily. She began to walk ahead of him.
"Syd.....I mean Adrianne, WAIT!" Vaughn grabbed her arm. "We broke up a year ago and then saw each other at a party. We aren't really close, it's jus she's having a hard time and all, and she needed someone right now."
"Vaughn.....I mean Ben, I don't need an explanation. Who even said I was mad?"
"Well....."
"Let's go then."
"Man, I wish I always looked like this," Sydney said. Then, she put her wig on. It was light brown with blonde highlights. It was long and curly. She made sure that all the pins would hold it on.
Meanwhile, Vaughn was getting ready in the other bathroom. He had just finished dying his hair a dark red. He got dressed in a nice green shirt and a khaki colored suit. Vaughn finished his new appearance by putting in a pair of green contact lenses.
"Vaughn! I can't figure out how to put these contacts in," He heard Sydney call from the other room. He poked his head out of the bathroom. "Wait.....never mind! I got it!"
Sydney walked out of the bathroom, all dressed in blue. Even her eyes were a dark blue. Vaughn struggled to keep himself from drooling. "Wow! You look....."
"What? Ravishing? I know! And you, you look absolutely handsome. And thanks, Ben." Sydney winked at him. Vaughn felt his cheeks redden. "Do you think that make-up is too much?"
Vaughn scanned her face. She had light blue eye shadow with dark brown mascara and eyeliner. On her lips was a light coat of pink lip gloss. “For Sydney, yes. For Adrianne, absolutely not.�
"Oh.....thank you Ben darling! Now, what are we going to do with all this extra time?" Sydney asked, plopping down on the couch.
"We can look over the tech that Andy sent for us." Vaughn pulled out a small black bag. He emptied the contents onto the table. He picked out a white flower pin.
"For me?"
"Yes, it's your camera. The little center is the lense. You activate it using this button on the bracelet." He handed her the pin and a bracelet. It was white with a small flower charm on it. She found the button in the center of the charm.
"Cool! Andy is always coming up with great gadgets." Sydney exclaimed, putting the pin on her dress and the bracelet on her wrist.
"Now here are the earpieces." Vaughn handed her a tan piece that fitted into her ear. "You just touch it to turn it off and on." Both of them carefully placed the pieces into their ears.
"Shouldn't I have something to turn off the security cameras and descramble the code to get nto the vault?"
"Yes you should." Vaughn handed her a white cell phone. "To turn off the cameras, you dial 793, or Syd, and to descramble the code, you dial 236, or Ben."
"Clever!"
"Very. Now here is your purse." Vaughn handed her a white bag with a matching wallet inside.
Sydney got up. "I'm gonna go fill my wallet with some money and add a few more things to my bag."
"Syd, you wanna go get something to eat before we go?"
"Sure, I'd like that."
* * *
"Merci!" Sydney said to the waiter as he cleared the table. Sydney looked at Vaughn, "Merci to you to! The food was GREAT! I'm guessing you've been here before?"
"Yes. When Alice and I took a week vacation, we ate here." Vaughn wiped his mouth one more time.
"Alice?" Sydney asked, suspiciously.
"Alice, my girlfriend. I know I told you about her."
Sydney couldn't breath for a moment. "Yes, you told me. I'm sorry, I must have forgotten."
Vaughn could tell that Sydney was uncomfortable. No, I didn't tell her. I shouldn't have said anything. "Let's go!"
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn waited patiently as the limo driver came to open the door for them. The driver offered Sydney his hand. She willingly took it, still angry at Vaughn and stepped out onto the pavement. Vaughn got out behind her.
"Merci!" Vaughn said to the driver. He walked over to her and straightened his coat. "You ready, Adrianne?"
"Why wasn't my name Alice? I mean, it would remind of her, wouldn't it?" Sydney said angrily. She began to walk ahead of him.
"Syd.....I mean Adrianne, WAIT!" Vaughn grabbed her arm. "We broke up a year ago and then saw each other at a party. We aren't really close, it's jus she's having a hard time and all, and she needed someone right now."
"Vaughn.....I mean Ben, I don't need an explanation. Who even said I was mad?"
"Well....."
"Let's go then."
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ill work on chapter 9 tomorrow and hopefully have it posted by tomorrow! sorry, i was at horseback riding and didnt have time to post it until now. hope you like it!
<3, Kailyn
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what do you guys think? should i make a series or not? i think the plot for my next book is gonna be where vaughn and syd get married and have a child. then when the baby is like 6 or 7, she gets kidnapped and syd and vaughn hafta rescue her. i think either im gonna habe alice or will be the bad guy and work for like sark or sloane or something. what do you think? what hould i call it? any more ideas for it? id love the feedback!
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i made a few changes to chapter 8. here is the revised version of it. similar, but a few things chaged.
Chapter 8
Sydney gazed over the ocean. Vaughn and Sydney were on a mission to France to retrieve the Rambaldi clock. Sydney propped her head up against the pillow, and fell asleep.
* * *
"Syd…..Syd, we’re here!" Sydney woke up. Vaughn was standing over her, shaking her.
"Oh, sorry!" Sydney grabbed her bags and followed Vaughn out to the terminal.
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn got into their car. "Sydney, we first have to stop and change into Mr. and Mrs. Eaton."
"Ok." Sydney said as they pulled into a gas station. They went into separate bathrooms and came out looking completely different.
Sydney came out with long, curly, light brown hair and blue contacts. Vaughn came out with red hair and green contacts. "Mr. Eaton!"
"Shall we go, Adrianne?"
"Yes we shall, Benjamin." Sydney let Vaughn escort her into the car and they drove away to the hotel that they were staying in.
* * *
Sydney walked into the bathroom. It was around 4 o'clock in France. She had to get ready for the mission later in the evening. She pulled out of her suitcase, a make-up bag, a wig, a dress, and a pair of shoes. She slipped into the light blue dress. It had little white flowers all over it. It had very thin straps. How is this ever going to stay on? She slipped on the matching blue shoes. She looked at herself in the mirror.
"Man, I wish I always looked like this," Sydney said. Then, she put her wig on. It was light brown with blonde highlights. It was long and curly. She made sure that all the pins would hold it on.
Meanwhile, Vaughn was getting ready in the other bathroom. He had just finished dying his hair a dark red. He got dressed in a nice green shirt and a khaki colored suit. Vaughn finished his new appearance by putting in a pair of green contact lenses.
"Vaughn! I can’t figure out how to put these contacts in," He heard Sydney call from the other room. He poked his head out of the bathroom. "Wait….never mind! I got it!"
Sydney walked out of the bathroom, all dressed in blue. Even her eyes were a dark blue. Vaughn struggled to keep himself from drooling. "Wow! You look….."
"What? Ravishing? I know! And you, you look absolutely handsome. And thanks, Ben." Sydney winked at him. Vaughn felt his cheeks redden. "Do you think that make-up is too much?"
Vaughn scanned her face. She had light blue eye shadow with dark brown mascara and eyeliner. On her lips was a light coat of pink lip gloss. "For Sydney, yes. For Adrianne, absolutely not."
"Oh…..thank you Ben darling! Now, what are we going to do with all this extra time?" Sydney asked, plopping down on the couch.
"We can look over the tech that Andy sent for us.� Vaughn pulled out a small black bag. He emptied the contents onto the table. He picked out a white flower pin.
"For me?"
"Yes, it's your camera. The little center is the lense. You activate it using this button on the bracelet." He handed her the pin and a bracelet. It was white with a small flower charm on it. She found the button in the center of the charm.
"Cool! Andy is always coming up with great gadgets." Sydney exclaimed, putting the pin on her dress and the bracelet on her wrist.
"Now here are the earpieces." Vaughn handed her a tan piece that fitted into her ear. "You just touch it to turn it off and on." Both of them carefully placed the pieces into their ears.
"Shouldn't I have something to turn off the security cameras and descramble the code to get into the vault?"
"Yes you should." Vaughn handed her a white cell phone. "To turn off the cameras, you dial 793, or Syd, and to descramble the code, you dial 236, or Ben."
"Clever!"
"Very. Now here is your purse." Vaughn handed her a white bag with a matching wallet inside.
Sydney got up. "I'm gonna go fill my wallet with some money and add a few more things to my bag."
"Syd, you wanna go get something to eat before we go?"
"Sure, I'd like that."
* * *
"Merci!" Sydney said to the waiter as he cleared the table. Sydney looked at Vaughn, "Merci to you to! The food was GREAT! I'm guessing you've been here before?"
"Yes. When Alice and I took a week vacation, we ate here." Vaughn wiped his mouth one more time.
"Alice?" Sydney asked, suspiciously.
"Alice, my girlfriend. I know I told you about her."
Sydney couldn't breath for a moment. "Yes, you told me. I'm sorry, I must have forgotten."
Vaughn could tell that Sydney was uncomfortable. No, I didn't tell her. I shouldn't have said anything. "Let's go!"
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn waited patiently as the limo driver came to open the door for them. The driver offered Sydney his hand. She willingly took it, still angry at Vaughn and stepped out onto the pavement. Vaughn got out behind her.
"Merci!" Vaughn said to the driver. He walked over to her and straightened his coat. "You ready, Adrianne?"
"Why wasn't my name Alice? I mean, it would remind of her, wouldn't it?" Sydney said angrily. She began to walk ahead of him.
"Syd.....I mean Adrianne, WAIT!" Vaughn grabbed her arm. "We broke up a year ago and then saw each other at a party. We aren't really close, it's just she's having a hard time and all, and she needed someone right now."
"Vaughn.....I mean Ben, I don't need an explanation. Who even said I was mad?"
"Well....."
"Let's go then."
Chapter 8
Sydney gazed over the ocean. Vaughn and Sydney were on a mission to France to retrieve the Rambaldi clock. Sydney propped her head up against the pillow, and fell asleep.
* * *
"Syd…..Syd, we’re here!" Sydney woke up. Vaughn was standing over her, shaking her.
"Oh, sorry!" Sydney grabbed her bags and followed Vaughn out to the terminal.
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn got into their car. "Sydney, we first have to stop and change into Mr. and Mrs. Eaton."
"Ok." Sydney said as they pulled into a gas station. They went into separate bathrooms and came out looking completely different.
Sydney came out with long, curly, light brown hair and blue contacts. Vaughn came out with red hair and green contacts. "Mr. Eaton!"
"Shall we go, Adrianne?"
"Yes we shall, Benjamin." Sydney let Vaughn escort her into the car and they drove away to the hotel that they were staying in.
* * *
Sydney walked into the bathroom. It was around 4 o'clock in France. She had to get ready for the mission later in the evening. She pulled out of her suitcase, a make-up bag, a wig, a dress, and a pair of shoes. She slipped into the light blue dress. It had little white flowers all over it. It had very thin straps. How is this ever going to stay on? She slipped on the matching blue shoes. She looked at herself in the mirror.
"Man, I wish I always looked like this," Sydney said. Then, she put her wig on. It was light brown with blonde highlights. It was long and curly. She made sure that all the pins would hold it on.
Meanwhile, Vaughn was getting ready in the other bathroom. He had just finished dying his hair a dark red. He got dressed in a nice green shirt and a khaki colored suit. Vaughn finished his new appearance by putting in a pair of green contact lenses.
"Vaughn! I can’t figure out how to put these contacts in," He heard Sydney call from the other room. He poked his head out of the bathroom. "Wait….never mind! I got it!"
Sydney walked out of the bathroom, all dressed in blue. Even her eyes were a dark blue. Vaughn struggled to keep himself from drooling. "Wow! You look….."
"What? Ravishing? I know! And you, you look absolutely handsome. And thanks, Ben." Sydney winked at him. Vaughn felt his cheeks redden. "Do you think that make-up is too much?"
Vaughn scanned her face. She had light blue eye shadow with dark brown mascara and eyeliner. On her lips was a light coat of pink lip gloss. "For Sydney, yes. For Adrianne, absolutely not."
"Oh…..thank you Ben darling! Now, what are we going to do with all this extra time?" Sydney asked, plopping down on the couch.
"We can look over the tech that Andy sent for us.� Vaughn pulled out a small black bag. He emptied the contents onto the table. He picked out a white flower pin.
"For me?"
"Yes, it's your camera. The little center is the lense. You activate it using this button on the bracelet." He handed her the pin and a bracelet. It was white with a small flower charm on it. She found the button in the center of the charm.
"Cool! Andy is always coming up with great gadgets." Sydney exclaimed, putting the pin on her dress and the bracelet on her wrist.
"Now here are the earpieces." Vaughn handed her a tan piece that fitted into her ear. "You just touch it to turn it off and on." Both of them carefully placed the pieces into their ears.
"Shouldn't I have something to turn off the security cameras and descramble the code to get into the vault?"
"Yes you should." Vaughn handed her a white cell phone. "To turn off the cameras, you dial 793, or Syd, and to descramble the code, you dial 236, or Ben."
"Clever!"
"Very. Now here is your purse." Vaughn handed her a white bag with a matching wallet inside.
Sydney got up. "I'm gonna go fill my wallet with some money and add a few more things to my bag."
"Syd, you wanna go get something to eat before we go?"
"Sure, I'd like that."
* * *
"Merci!" Sydney said to the waiter as he cleared the table. Sydney looked at Vaughn, "Merci to you to! The food was GREAT! I'm guessing you've been here before?"
"Yes. When Alice and I took a week vacation, we ate here." Vaughn wiped his mouth one more time.
"Alice?" Sydney asked, suspiciously.
"Alice, my girlfriend. I know I told you about her."
Sydney couldn't breath for a moment. "Yes, you told me. I'm sorry, I must have forgotten."
Vaughn could tell that Sydney was uncomfortable. No, I didn't tell her. I shouldn't have said anything. "Let's go!"
* * *
Sydney and Vaughn waited patiently as the limo driver came to open the door for them. The driver offered Sydney his hand. She willingly took it, still angry at Vaughn and stepped out onto the pavement. Vaughn got out behind her.
"Merci!" Vaughn said to the driver. He walked over to her and straightened his coat. "You ready, Adrianne?"
"Why wasn't my name Alice? I mean, it would remind of her, wouldn't it?" Sydney said angrily. She began to walk ahead of him.
"Syd.....I mean Adrianne, WAIT!" Vaughn grabbed her arm. "We broke up a year ago and then saw each other at a party. We aren't really close, it's just she's having a hard time and all, and she needed someone right now."
"Vaughn.....I mean Ben, I don't need an explanation. Who even said I was mad?"
"Well....."
"Let's go then."
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im sorry. :'( i have horseback riding to go to in like 10 minutes, and im not done with chapter 9 yet. ill work on it on the way to the stables and then post it tomorrow. I PROMISE! ne one got ne ideas 4 my next book? like a plot or a title? ill work on the plot today too and post it tomorrow too.
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anybody have any ideas for my next book? i have a rough start, but i need more more more ideas! i would love to hear from u. if u can think of anything, doesnt have to be a plot, anything, i would totally LOVE it. thanks for all ur responses to my story.
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ok, since i have everyone chanting MORE MORE MORE! well, i have granted your wish. here is some of chapter 9. im still working on it, and hopefully itll be done by today.
Chapter 9
Sydney and Vaughn walked up to the mansion. Sydney rang the doorbell. A few moments later, a big man in a suit opened the door.
"Hello! We are the Eatons, I’m Ben and this is my wife Adrianne." The man checked his list and nodded.
"Come on in!" He opened the door wider for them. Sydney smiled at the man. Once they got inside the house, Sydney wrinkled her nose. There was a small band playing classical type music. There were about 20 couples on the dance floor. There were several butlers in tuxedos taking drink orders. One of them walked up to Sydney and Vaughn.
"Would you like something to drink?"
"Yes, I’ll have a champagne and my husband will have….."
"A red wine please."
"Be back in moment, but while you’re waiting, you can sit down at a table and enjoy some of the snacks." He pointed a small table for two. There was an arrangement of snacks.
"Merci!" Vaughn said. Sydney reluctantly slipped her arm into his and followed him to a table.
"I still don’t see why you’re still mad at me," Vaughn said, concentrating on picking a few brightly colored cream puffs.
"Whoever gave you the idea that I was mad at you?" Sydney asked, toying with her crab cake on her plate.
Vaughn shrugged his shoulders. "Well, if I had just met you, I would have known something was wrong."
"Alright. I surrender. You caught me. So what, I’m a little upset that you didn’t tell me you were seeing her again."
"Well excuse me for keeping my personal life hidden from you."
"Well I just thought that since we work together and are so close, you just would have told me, that’s all."
Vaughn gave her a look of sympathy, "Look, can we just get over it and go dance?"
Sydney was about to shoot a rude remark back, but figured that it was no use and it would go on forever, "Alright, if you insist."
Sydney walked out onto the dance floor. She placed one hand on his shoulder and the other in his hand. He placed his free hand on her back. Vaughn gulped. "Ben, your hands are sweating. Are you ok?’
"I am fine, Adrianne, I just do not dance much," Vaughn said. His heart raced when she laid her head on his shoulder. He pulled her closer to him as they swept across the dance floor.
They seemed to be floating across the floor in their own little world, forgetting the fight that they had earlier. It all stopped when the band stopped playing. Sydney and Vaughn broke apart, and began clapping with everyone else. Then, a small man walked up onto the stage.
"Thank you everyone for joining me tonight for my party!" Sydney and Vaughn guessed that it was
Chapter 9
Sydney and Vaughn walked up to the mansion. Sydney rang the doorbell. A few moments later, a big man in a suit opened the door.
"Hello! We are the Eatons, I’m Ben and this is my wife Adrianne." The man checked his list and nodded.
"Come on in!" He opened the door wider for them. Sydney smiled at the man. Once they got inside the house, Sydney wrinkled her nose. There was a small band playing classical type music. There were about 20 couples on the dance floor. There were several butlers in tuxedos taking drink orders. One of them walked up to Sydney and Vaughn.
"Would you like something to drink?"
"Yes, I’ll have a champagne and my husband will have….."
"A red wine please."
"Be back in moment, but while you’re waiting, you can sit down at a table and enjoy some of the snacks." He pointed a small table for two. There was an arrangement of snacks.
"Merci!" Vaughn said. Sydney reluctantly slipped her arm into his and followed him to a table.
"I still don’t see why you’re still mad at me," Vaughn said, concentrating on picking a few brightly colored cream puffs.
"Whoever gave you the idea that I was mad at you?" Sydney asked, toying with her crab cake on her plate.
Vaughn shrugged his shoulders. "Well, if I had just met you, I would have known something was wrong."
"Alright. I surrender. You caught me. So what, I’m a little upset that you didn’t tell me you were seeing her again."
"Well excuse me for keeping my personal life hidden from you."
"Well I just thought that since we work together and are so close, you just would have told me, that’s all."
Vaughn gave her a look of sympathy, "Look, can we just get over it and go dance?"
Sydney was about to shoot a rude remark back, but figured that it was no use and it would go on forever, "Alright, if you insist."
Sydney walked out onto the dance floor. She placed one hand on his shoulder and the other in his hand. He placed his free hand on her back. Vaughn gulped. "Ben, your hands are sweating. Are you ok?’
"I am fine, Adrianne, I just do not dance much," Vaughn said. His heart raced when she laid her head on his shoulder. He pulled her closer to him as they swept across the dance floor.
They seemed to be floating across the floor in their own little world, forgetting the fight that they had earlier. It all stopped when the band stopped playing. Sydney and Vaughn broke apart, and began clapping with everyone else. Then, a small man walked up onto the stage.
"Thank you everyone for joining me tonight for my party!" Sydney and Vaughn guessed that it was
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sorry, i just cut off the story, mid-sentence. here's more of chapter 9.
Pierre-Louis Lefèvre. Everyone clapped for him as he walked off the stage, right to Sydney and Vaughn.
"Well, I wouldn’t be much of a host if I didn’t greet all my guests!" Pierre-Louis Lefèvre exclaimed.
"We’re the Eatons. I’m Ben and this is my wife, Adrianne." Vaughn said, shaking the man’s hand.
"It’s my pleasure to have you here!" He took Sydney’s right hand and kissed it. "Thank you for coming!"
"No, thank you!" Sydney said, smiling politely. Then, he walked away.
"You ready?" Vaughn asked.
"As ready as I’ll ever be!" Sydney pretended to play with the charm on her bracelet, but instead, she was really turning on the camera. She touched the earpiece in her ear, and watched Vaughn do the same.
Vaughn walked over to Pierre-Louis Lefèvre and began talking to him. He was supposed to distract him while Sydney went to find the clock.
Sydney heard the men laughing. She rolled her eyes and headed towards the stairs. She glanced around to see if anyone was following her. No one was so she ran up. She heard Vaughn and Lefèvre laughing and talking through her earpiece. She ran through the hallway, trying to locate the room where the clock was in. She pulled out her cell phone and dialed 793. That turned off all the security cameras. She found the room and carefully picked the lock and let herself in.
She looked around for a painting of a garden. When she found it, she slid it to the side and found the safe. Sydney pulled out the cell phone again and dialed 236. The lock began spinning around and finally it opened. She heard a door slam outside in the hallway. She quickly located the clock and stuffed it into her purse. Then, she locked the safe up and ran out the door.
"Boyscout, I’m brining the pot to the kitchen." Sydney said into her earpiece. That was their code phrase to let Vaughn know that she had the clock.
"Copy that Mountaineer. I’ll meet you at the limo."
Sydney ran through the hallway. All of a sudden, a guard popped out of a room. "Freeze!" He called.
"You’re not supposed to be up here."
Sydney smiled. "Oh, I’m not? I’m sorry, I got lost trying to find the bathroom and I can’t find my way back to the party. Will you help me get back to the party?" Sydney said in her sweetest voice possible.
"Yes, ofcourse."
"What a dear!"
Sydney began walking next to him when suddenly, she was knocked off her feet. Another guard had come up behind them and knocked her down. "So, who are you working for?"
"I don’t know what you are talking about!"
"Right," The first guard brought his hand down on her head. Sydney was knocked out.
"What?" Sydney gasped. Shoot, I've been made!
Pierre-Louis Lefèvre. Everyone clapped for him as he walked off the stage, right to Sydney and Vaughn.
"Well, I wouldn’t be much of a host if I didn’t greet all my guests!" Pierre-Louis Lefèvre exclaimed.
"We’re the Eatons. I’m Ben and this is my wife, Adrianne." Vaughn said, shaking the man’s hand.
"It’s my pleasure to have you here!" He took Sydney’s right hand and kissed it. "Thank you for coming!"
"No, thank you!" Sydney said, smiling politely. Then, he walked away.
"You ready?" Vaughn asked.
"As ready as I’ll ever be!" Sydney pretended to play with the charm on her bracelet, but instead, she was really turning on the camera. She touched the earpiece in her ear, and watched Vaughn do the same.
Vaughn walked over to Pierre-Louis Lefèvre and began talking to him. He was supposed to distract him while Sydney went to find the clock.
Sydney heard the men laughing. She rolled her eyes and headed towards the stairs. She glanced around to see if anyone was following her. No one was so she ran up. She heard Vaughn and Lefèvre laughing and talking through her earpiece. She ran through the hallway, trying to locate the room where the clock was in. She pulled out her cell phone and dialed 793. That turned off all the security cameras. She found the room and carefully picked the lock and let herself in.
She looked around for a painting of a garden. When she found it, she slid it to the side and found the safe. Sydney pulled out the cell phone again and dialed 236. The lock began spinning around and finally it opened. She heard a door slam outside in the hallway. She quickly located the clock and stuffed it into her purse. Then, she locked the safe up and ran out the door.
"Boyscout, I’m brining the pot to the kitchen." Sydney said into her earpiece. That was their code phrase to let Vaughn know that she had the clock.
"Copy that Mountaineer. I’ll meet you at the limo."
Sydney ran through the hallway. All of a sudden, a guard popped out of a room. "Freeze!" He called.
"You’re not supposed to be up here."
Sydney smiled. "Oh, I’m not? I’m sorry, I got lost trying to find the bathroom and I can’t find my way back to the party. Will you help me get back to the party?" Sydney said in her sweetest voice possible.
"Yes, ofcourse."
"What a dear!"
Sydney began walking next to him when suddenly, she was knocked off her feet. Another guard had come up behind them and knocked her down. "So, who are you working for?"
"I don’t know what you are talking about!"
"Right," The first guard brought his hand down on her head. Sydney was knocked out.
"What?" Sydney gasped. Shoot, I've been made!
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