highschool reunion

[Xtremelimits08]

ok i'll try it in the next chapter

 

[bluheart13]

ok a little confusing but i guess good.

 

[wildwildrae]

it probably a good thing that u havnt see it because u really don't want to

you didn't like The Little Mermaid? That was the movie of my generation! I know that baby like the back of my hand! ....

by the way, it's Ariel.

anyways, I think just using [" " said Vaughn. ] would be a lot easier for slow people like me to understand, so we don't have to keep referring back to the list. Oh, and make sure you use an endquote so we know when the person stops talking.

Other than that, it's beautiful!

Rachel

 

[Xtremelimits08]

thanks it not that i hate the movie its just that my niece watches it eveyday and i'm not kidding
thanks

 

[Alias lover]

no problemo, feel free 2 use it!
have fun writing the fic, i'm sure it will be a great one!
well lets hope so cause we need a new fic in the romance fiction!
l8ter

~Kim~

 

[pennstatechic]

Great start. Awesome job, poat more soon please!

Lauren

 

[goofygal]

I can't wait to see your next chapter! i think it's gunna be great! love ya babe~amber~ :surf:

 

[Ames47]

aw you hate the little mermaid!!! i love that movie!! oh well everyone has their dislikes!! ok anyways cant wait for more!!

 

[Xtremelimits08]

i didn't say i didn't like it i said i have to watch it all the time with my niece and it gets old after awhile

 

[Xtremelimits08]

Continued:
W: well last night I was REALLY tired and didn't want to drive all the way back to my house after lettin out Donavan...So I desided to crash on the couch and before I went to bed I had a lot to drink and I...I kinda wet the bed as you would call it

Long pause...

Vaughn breaks out laughing... dude the dog doesnt even pee in the house

W: haha very funny... look man i'll buy you a new couch..but you can't tell ANYONE about this and i mean know one not even syd!!!!!!!!!!!!!

V: ok man I won't tell her
Syd walks up
S: hey guys whats up
V: Weiss wet the bed
W: all thanks man so much for not tellin
V: sorry man but i had to its just to funny
W:::sniffle::: no body luvs me anymore:::sniffle:sarcasticaly)
V:aww...man i'll still luv ya u can't ever sleep over but i'll still luv ya(he says sarcasticly)
W: thanks man your to kind and he hugs him (nothing perverted is going on here there just doing this sarcasticly)

Syd looks at vaughn the at Weiss and repeats this cycle 2 more times
Vaughn and Weiss noticed this and at the same time said
~~~~Its a guy thing~~~~
she just laughs
W: hey man are you going to are reunion next saturday?
V: umm...I havnt really desided yet
Wh come on you know you want to...their be alot of people expecting you
V: like who?
W: like who! he acts like he was a nerd.All tell you who: Jake,Franky,Amy,Alexis.Hey maybe if your lucky..maybe you'll see Steven remember that nerdwe use to pick on?
V: oh ya that Wedgie guy you know after 2 years he'd stop wearing underwear or at least were bigger undies so they strech more.For a guy with a 4.0 he wasnt very smart!!!!
W: Do you think he would hold a gruge after all these years?
V: naw.. I mean we've grown up.. I'm sure he'd be mad but it's behind us now!! (so he thinks)
W: so ya going
V:a ya syd you want to go to my reunion
S: oh definatly I gotta see this Steven guy!!
Kendal walks up
Kendal: come on you kiddos lets not waste time.
V: yes baldy
Kendal: what was that Vaughn
V: Oh...I...um...said I need to stop at Aldeas you know for...food...
Kendal: Oh I didn't know they had a stores called Aldeas
V: ya neither did I
Kendal: Now come on you don't want to keep this Steven guy waiting..
Vaughn & Weiss extchange horrified looks
V: steven guy???
Kendal: ya you guys probably know him he went to your highschool!!!!

hope ya like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you'll soon find out how syd betrays vaughn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Aliasfan23]

Woah! Major twist! That was great! Can't wait for more!

 

[Ames47]

hehe that was hilarious!!! hmmm what does syd do?!

 

[Xtremelimits08]

is that easier to read????????

 

[Ames47]

yeah but i got confused at the end with kendall bu ti probably just need to reread it!! but other than that is perfectly fine!!

 

[Xtremelimits08]

Thanks for the reveiws !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Ames47]

no problem i think im the only one reading it but i love it and its really funny and everyone else needs to come check it out cause it is great!!!

 

[Sarahmañana]

that was good...and i think much easier to read!

 

[kate_jones]

Yeah, that was easier to read. Good job!

 

[supergirl14]

This is good Keep going. I'm interested, Steven is probably bad or something, right? I'd like tosee some Syd and Vauhgns old girlfriend confrontation.

 

[Mrs. Karie Vartan]

OMG!!! I love the concept of this story!! I have one similar to it in my head...but I'm not a writer...so I'm really glad you are writing yours!!
Great work!!
LMAO!! Vaughn & Weiss were bullies in high school!!! :lol:
Weiss "wet the bed"!!! OMG!!! Poor Weiss!! :lol:
-Karie-