How can it possibly be...?

[Ms.MichaelVaughn]

This is the second poem I wrote...
I hope you guys like it
And even if you didn't like it,let me know...
I could really use some feedback.... Thank you!!!

How can it possibly be....
How can it possibly be...
That I'm walking on clouds...
Whenever you're near me....

How can it possibly be...
That I'm feeling so alive...
Whenever you look at me...

How can it possibly be...
That you...
LOVE ME?

 

[Chanel]

that si excellent.... makes me think of alex

 

[Moriel]

tis is really good!

 

[Ms.MichaelVaughn]

Thank you so much for the reviews!!!!
They really mean a lot to me

THANK YOU

 

[twinzz2003]

How sweet!! I love it!!

 

[totally4alias10]

AWW!! That was sweet!! You really are a great writer!!