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Irina's Big Suprise

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Irina/Laura Bristow, Jun 23, 2003.

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  1. Irina/Laura Bristow

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    Irina sat looking out the window.She was so happy;she was getting out of her cell.After helping turn in Slone, she was pardoned by the president of the U.S. She was finally going to be able to hold her baby girl. She had been so worried when Syd had been mising. She had searched the world over looking for her. When Jack had phoned it had been all she could do to keep from droping all her hard work to capture Arvin and go pick up Sydney herself.The past few weeks had been hectic.There where people interviewing Syd left and right. Syd had stoped by a few times,telling her mother she was sorry she had ever doubted her. Irina,of course forgave her and asked for her for giveness for all the things she had done.Syd said she would try some things would come eaiser than others.Suddenley Irina heared footsteps. Long quick strides strides as if some one was coming to see her.

    so tell me what you think its my first fic. I have more but wont post unless you like it. so please post your reviews.
     
  2. Alias Fan Gillian

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    Please post more. Can you Pm when you post the next bit.
     
  3. LightTraveller

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    that's so good hope you post more soon
     
  4. MVsGirl

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    MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore
    it's really good
     
  5. Irina/Laura Bristow

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    Hi This is my first fic I hope you like.

    The very faint clicking of a heel told her it was Syd. "Hi" exclaimed Sydney her voice very up and peppy. Irina was so surprised to see her so happy sience her return that Irina ,who jumped to the conclusion that some thing was wrong,asked" Whats wrong is your father ok?""Yes"said Sydney said suddenly realizing that she almost gave her mother a heart attack."Yeah he's fine.I just came to tell you your getting let out early and for the next 3 hours you'll be in dads coustody."What"exhaled Irina as the information as she tried to prosses the information just given to her. After a few seconds,Syd asked "Aren't you happy with this?""Of cource I am sweetheart"exclaimed Irina."I was just wondering whose idea it was yours or your fathers?" Syd was a little taken aback by her mothers accusation. For what she didn't know was that Irina and Jack were having a bit of a tif.Jack had asked Irina to move in with him after she got out of Jail. She said she would but she'd keep her other houses just in case."In case of what"he yelled very sarcasticly."Jack" Irina said trying to calm his nerves" look we've both had hard lives and we've had some common goals.I know you said you forgave me but I truly believe if we try to act like our past never happened it will end up biting us in the ass!" "Well excuse me would you rather me not forgive you and go around hateing you we tried that before it didn't work to well if you'll remember I mean you talk about how you didn't want to leave Heck you get out in less than a week and I thought you might want your life back.well excuse me I guess I was wrong!"and with that Jack stormed out ."God he's hott"she thought out loud.Jack stoped in his tracks he wasn't quiet sure if he heard her right so he started walking again.As soon as Irina uttered it she smacked her self in the head.
     
  6. freelancer88

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    lol You all know jack liked that. Can't wait to read more!
     
  7. berry_kyoote_spy88

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    that was kinda funny but good start add more :P please
     
  8. LightTraveller

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    this is getting pretty funny more please
     
  9. *SaMs SwEeThEaRt*

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    I like this story a lot!!! Please update soon!! I liked the part where she smacked her head!! I do that a lot!! :rolleyes:
     
  10. aliasgurl

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    this is interesting..hahaha irina thought jack was hot?? haha funny stuff.
     
  11. She'sgood

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    OK 3 words WRITE MORE SOON!!!!
     
  12. Alias_Freak

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    Good fic so far! Please continue!


    ~*~*~Meredith~*~*~
     
  13. Irina/Laura Bristow

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    Hey sorry I didn't post yesterday It was my birthday I had to party.
    Once I get back tonight Ill post tonight by 8:00 at the latest

    AGAIN SORRY
     
  14. Irina/Laura Bristow

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    Irina was startled out of her walk down memory lane by Syd opening the doors to her cell."Mom are you ok?" Syd asked."Yes sweetheart,but you still didnt answer my question." "Well neither really"said syd "it was Vaughn!Dad just went along with the idea and talked to Kendell for us." "So your father didn't like the idea?" Irina inquired. " Well he didn't jump up and down and scream but he did have a silly little grin" Said Syd wondering why her mother cared.A silly little grin now thats something I can picture the jumping up and down I'm not so sure." replied Irina.Sydney held out her hands out to her mother.Irina ran and hugged her daughter with all her might. She even started to weep a little."What no handcuffs?"Irina said trying to lighten the mood."Only if you promise not to run away."Proclaimed Syd."Well I guess if I have to I promise."said Irina and her and Syd Started laughing such a laugh it was that it seemed that they both hadn't laughed in a long time.They stayed that way for a while just reveling in the ambeance of the moment.As they walked down the corridor to the elevator they met with Jack,who smiled at Irina with a sily little grin."Hello" he said "hello' they both answered while chuckling.Jack wondering what got them so happy asked what reveling in my beauty?"Irina's mind immeadiantly thought he had heared her the other day in her cell.Irina was jogged out of her thoughts by Jack saying he had a surprise for her.

    Sorry for the delay hope you forgive
     
  15. She'sgood

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    Oh I forgive you. Just write more please I love this story!!!!
     
  16. Alias_Freak

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    Wow! This is really good. More asap please. Oh, and I forgive you!
     
  17. LightTraveller

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    this is really good more please
     
  18. Irina/Laura Bristow

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    Im going on vacation for a week so ill post a big chapter now
     
  19. MVsGirl

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    Whoa, I love this!!!
    Keep up the GREAT work!! =)
     
  20. Irina/Laura Bristow

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    Here's the capter

    "Irina" Jack said"Someone here would like to say goodbye I thought you might want to say good bye to." All of a sudden Sark strode in and yelled "ah" as Irina ran and hugged him."well well well look at you using all your charms to get out of jail. I'm so proud." he said in a cocky Brittish Accent."well glad I could Please" was her responce. Jack feeling a little left out grunted to get attention. Sark and Irina parted,but Sark kept his hand around Irina's waist.Jack just glared at the two of them all the while giving Sark His Im gong to Kill you look.Just then Kendell came striding in and said"Sorry Jack but we need Ms Derevko help."Jack just looked at him with his death glareand said "right now cant this WAIT?." After a few minutes of argueing the group moved up stairs so that Irina could help.


    Not much of a chapter Ill post in the morning before I leave.
    Again sorry
     

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