loneliness and despair

Um... okay. So Jack would just randomly in the middle of a conversation go, "I would like to ask you some questions?" That's very OOC.

~Me :angel2:
 
it was a dream... and plus its jack he can be very blunt and sorta wierd at times. its coming soon. chap 4.....hw first though!
 
okay i have a question. was sydney still dreamng in your third chapter or is it for rel? by the way, i love your story and hope that you update soon!
 
ok im really sry but im having serious writers block. I got some but soon more will come. sry!! Im trying!
 
ok you guys very very soonchap 4 will be coming out.. by tonite it should be! if u have a ny ? pm me about it!
 
ok i got the next part of the story. thanks you guys for reading the story. the action is getting better!

“So Will where did you go last night?” Sydney asked hoping that her suspicions weren’t true. Will and Syd were sitting watching television and looking over work stuff. Sydney is on the computer. As she looked over documents Sydney knew Will wouldn’t risk his job and reputation a second time.
“I don’t know… I just needed some air. Why, was I gone long? He thought about this for some time as if he didn’t remember where he had gone or even how long he was gone for.
“I was just wondering, because you were with Francie and then you just left. I mean wasn’t Francie mad when you came back?” Syd tried to think of a reasonable explanation. That was all she could think of.
“Syd, Francie fell asleep. I was like all wired so I went for a walk,” Will still looked tired. Sydney’s thoughts were immediately erased. Will was totally innocent, he just at the wrong place at the wrong time.
“Will I think that we both need a vacation!” Sydney and will both then laugh quietly. There’s awkward silence. Then Will goes back to work and Sydney stares at the computer but is still watching everything that Will is doing. She seems mesmerized by him, watching his every move.
“So”- Syd was cut off by someone barging through the door. It was the CIA. They walk up to Will and read him his rights. He starts shouting at Syd.
“Syd what do they want? Syd!!! What did I do?!! Syd!!” and with that Will was lead out of the house. And Sydney was left standing there with the CIA agents all around. Then they started to close in on her.
“Umm… Agent Bristow you have to come with us also…” the agents seemed as if they didn’t want to tell Syd this but had too.
“What??!!”
“You’re under suspicion of being an accomplice to Will Tippin, and helping him in the robbery of a Page 47 of the Prophecy.”
“Do you know what I’ve done to help the CIA to get the Prophecy? Why would I steal it!!?”
“Agent Bristow, I think you should save it for Kendall, please come with us now, or we will be forced to take you into custody.”
And without further argument Syd walked out the door.
 
Hey, keep up the great job! I hope there will be another chapter soon, your story is very intersting! I have a feeling it is going to lead up to something really great! Your doing a great job, for your first fan fic, keep it up! Please post more soon, and thanks for the update!!
 
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