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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by sugababyboo, Jun 2, 2003.

  1. sugababyboo

    sugababyboo mrs. charlie

    Dec 16, 2002
    Rated-R for language
    Description-Pretty self explanatory.

    One Real Moment
    Everyday we cross paths
    My empty eyes see
    A naïve boy
    That chooses to be blind
    I try to not to love him
    It’s easier said than done
    Cause its just impossible
    To even try that again
    I’m tired of tasting tears
    Tears of loneliness
    I’m sick of the bitter cold
    That always embraces me
    All I want from you
    Is one simple thing
    Give me one real moment
    Where I can feel alive
    Just from your gentle touch
    But don’t misunderstand
    Of what I’m asking you
    I don’t want you to
    I don’t need you to
    To restore my faith in you
    Cause that died long ago
    Just hold me now
    Keep the truth unsaid
    Comfort me with lies
    Just make me feel
    Like I matter to you
    In some kind of way
    Please, just seal your lips
    Let the silence win
    Because by sunrise
    I’ll be out of your life

    Deal With This
    The door is locked.
    And I’ve got the key.
    There’s nowhere to run.
    And you can’t hide.
    For once in your life,
    Be a real man.
    Look into my eyes.
    Tell me the truth.
    And explain to me.
    Why you’ve been hiding.
    Why you’ve ignored me.
    Why I don’t exist to you.
    I’ve done nothing wrong.
    Except give you honesty.
    So is that the reason,
    Why you cut me off?
    Cause I know my feelings.
    And you don’t know yours.
    What’s so damn confusing?
    It’s either yes or no.
    Just tell me now.
    And ignore my pain.
    After you tell me.
    It’ll begin to fade.

    Think Again
    How dare you put me through that shame?
    Acting like you don’t know my name.
    Oh, how could you hurt me so?
    What you did to me was low.
    Denying our once close association.
    Putting me into isolation.
    I can’t believe you had the audacity.
    To make me feel unworthy;
    I bet you’re happy that I’m gone.
    Don’t get comfortable, because it won’t last long.
    And don’t think that I’m bluffing.
    Cause you know how I’m not into lying.
    Oh, and don’t even underestimate.
    How I can **** with your fate.
    And just for your information.
    This is just the beginning of my cruel intentions.

    It must be hard to stand up
    Without having a damn spine
    You must enjoy getting ****ed over
    I can tell from the *****es that you date
    I see how you play that game
    Playing the victim, to get sympathy
    And to think, I used to fall for it
    Now, I just think you're pathetic
    And you call yourself a man
    Ha, you sad excuse for a boy
    I can't believe I wasted my time
    On a ****ing loser like you

    We both know what this is about.
    How you suddenly shut me out.
    Even though it took me four years.
    I’ve confronted my worst fears.
    Although it took some pain and time.
    I’ve finally made up my mind.
    What I really need is my independence.
    Instead of your cold distance.
    So, I’m leaving you behind.
    I won’t apologize, for being so unkind.
    It’s fine you didn’t want me.
    But I didn’t deserve your cruelty.
    I guess this is our unhappy ending.
    We weren’t meant to be everlasting.
    So now we’ll go, our separate ways.
    Because there is nothing left to say.
    And I walk away from this, a little stronger.
    Maybe one day, I’ll love another.
    For now, I need to be solo.
    So, I can finally let you go.
  2. angelbleu

    angelbleu Rocket Ranger

    Dec 21, 2002
    :o Suga!....that's so amazing. Very powerful and emotional! Great job. You're an excellent writer.
  3. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    Those were impressive Suga
  4. pasta_sauce385

    pasta_sauce385 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 21, 2002
    wow, that was amazing!!
  5. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    it was powerful and inspirational
  6. pasta_sauce385

    pasta_sauce385 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 21, 2002
    yeah no kidding, i can totally relate to a few of them.
  7. sugababyboo

    sugababyboo mrs. charlie

    Dec 16, 2002
    Thanks for the feedback. And to clarify, I do not hate all the guys, just the one that I wrote about :cool:
  8. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

    Dec 30, 2002
    he he... who was it? i won't tell...
  9. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

    Jan 9, 2003
    shouldn't matter to you where I live
    I know!! Me too!! Those are just... wow!
  10. emetib

    emetib Rocket Ranger

    Feb 27, 2003
    Very powerful! That was worth reading! ^_^
  11. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

    May 26, 2003
    Woooooooooooooooow....... Very emmotional, very emmotional indeed.
  12. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

    Dec 30, 2002
    i was just wonering-- do they other admins want spouses?

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