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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Alias-Hippy, Mar 2, 2003.

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  1. Alias-Hippy

    Alias-Hippy Captain

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    (Ok i know a few people asked me about starting a new topic everytime but i like doing that and it makes it easier for me.sheesh :rolleyes: :rolleyes: )

    Chapter 3

    *Sydney's Apartment*

    -"You look beautiful",Vaughn said as he watched Sydney cook.

    -"Not to bad yourself.Dinner is ready"

    -"Do we have to eat?"

    -"I didn't really want to either"
    (Imaginationis required here. :D )


    *Sydney's apartment*(Three days later)
    Francie's POV

    Sydney walked out of the bathroom crying with a pregnancy test in her hands.

    "Oh no Syd, your not..."

    "I didn't want this to happen to me.I don't even know who the Father is"

    Sydney's POV

    I know Sark is not the Father.Vaugh is.I was on the pill when Sark raped but I forgot to take one the night...you know.
    I know Vaughn is the Father.I need to tell him.

    Ring-"Vaughn"
    -"Hi it's Syd.I need to see you at the warehouse"
    -"Why you can just see me at work"
    -"No the warehouse"
    -"Ok"

    *Warehouse*

    -"What's wrong?"
    -"I'm pregnant.But I don't think it's Sark's.I was on the pill then.But I wasn't the other night.I need to know if your going to take care of me or run out like my mother did?"
    -"I would never leave you or the baby.You know that."Then he kisses me sweetly and then leans down and kissed my stomach.
    -"We need to go and tell Kendell"

    So what do you think?
     
  2. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    nice job! love your name lol
     
  3. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Very cool. You don't have to make a new forum every time you make a new chapter.
     
  4. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Actually, it's a new thread...

    And quite honestly, I don't think the mods will appreciate it. It takes up more space on the server. You only create a new thread for your story if it is ten pages or longer.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  5. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    i love it, but a word of advice coming from someone who did and still does the same thing, add a little more detail , dont make things so fast and short, like when you have the part about The Test be like- she picked up the test and tears stung her eyes, this wasnt happeneing and keep going from there just some advice but i love it
     
  6. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    hmm...

    The student has finally surpassed the master, eh?

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  7. Alias-Hippy

    Alias-Hippy Captain

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    OK people Ok take a chill pill.But if whoever runs this site tells me not to make a new"thread" then i won't but when I read someone else's fanfic I like to see a new thread beacuse i don't have to remember if I read that page or not already.Thanks Aliasgirl000 I like my name too!Alias-Hippy
     
  8. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    When is more coming?
     
  9. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    i like it and thank God the baby isn't sark's that's just a disgusting thought. it should be ...interesting when they tell kendall
     
  10. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Ha, make Kendall's bald head glisten. Sorry, I just think it's funny when that happens.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  11. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    :P Hee, hee, hee, me too
     
  12. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

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    that was good keep going okay please post thanx :P
     
  13. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

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    i hope its not sarks it better not beeh that wouldnt be funny that would be really grose like unbelieveably and utterly grose i could not eevn imagine it seriuosly :P
     
  14. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

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    That was a good start. I can't wait till you post more.

    Can you pm when you post the next bit.
     

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