Plans

[Alias-Hippy]

(Ok i know a few people asked me about starting a new topic everytime but i like doing that and it makes it easier for me.sheesh )

Chapter 3

*Sydney's Apartment*

-"You look beautiful",Vaughn said as he watched Sydney cook.

-"Not to bad yourself.Dinner is ready"

-"Do we have to eat?"

-"I didn't really want to either"
(Imaginationis required here. )


*Sydney's apartment*(Three days later)
Francie's POV

Sydney walked out of the bathroom crying with a pregnancy test in her hands.

"Oh no Syd, your not..."

"I didn't want this to happen to me.I don't even know who the Father is"

Sydney's POV

I know Sark is not the Father.Vaugh is.I was on the pill when Sark raped but I forgot to take one the night...you know.
I know Vaughn is the Father.I need to tell him.

Ring-"Vaughn"
-"Hi it's Syd.I need to see you at the warehouse"
-"Why you can just see me at work"
-"No the warehouse"
-"Ok"

*Warehouse*

-"What's wrong?"
-"I'm pregnant.But I don't think it's Sark's.I was on the pill then.But I wasn't the other night.I need to know if your going to take care of me or run out like my mother did?"
-"I would never leave you or the baby.You know that."Then he kisses me sweetly and then leans down and kissed my stomach.
-"We need to go and tell Kendell"

So what do you think?

 

[Scarlet Crystal]

nice job! love your name lol

 

[aliaschick4mv]

Very cool. You don't have to make a new forum every time you make a new chapter.

 

[Alias Elle]

Actually, it's a new thread...

And quite honestly, I don't think the mods will appreciate it. It takes up more space on the server. You only create a new thread for your story if it is ten pages or longer.

~Me :angel2:

 

[aliaschica47]

i love it, but a word of advice coming from someone who did and still does the same thing, add a little more detail , dont make things so fast and short, like when you have the part about The Test be like- she picked up the test and tears stung her eyes, this wasnt happeneing and keep going from there just some advice but i love it

 

[Alias Elle]

hmm...

The student has finally surpassed the master, eh?

~Me :angel2:

 

[Alias-Hippy]

OK people Ok take a chill pill.But if whoever runs this site tells me not to make a new"thread" then i won't but when I read someone else's fanfic I like to see a new thread beacuse i don't have to remember if I read that page or not already.Thanks Aliasgirl000 I like my name too!Alias-Hippy

 

[kleverkitten]

When is more coming?

 

[Aliasgirl47]

i like it and thank God the baby isn't sark's that's just a disgusting thought. it should be ...interesting when they tell kendall

 

[Alias Elle]

Ha, make Kendall's bald head glisten. Sorry, I just think it's funny when that happens.

~Me :angel2:

 

[kleverkitten]

Hee, hee, hee, me too

 

[berry_kyoote_spy88]

that was good keep going okay please post thanx

 

[berry_kyoote_spy88]

i hope its not sarks it better not beeh that wouldnt be funny that would be really grose like unbelieveably and utterly grose i could not eevn imagine it seriuosly

 

[Alias Fan Gillian]

That was a good start. I can't wait till you post more.

Can you pm when you post the next bit.