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Should I, or Shouldn't I?

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by crazy_4_alias, Apr 1, 2003.

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  1. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    Ok, I had an idea pop into my head. Tell me if you think I should make this into an actual fic.

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    Syd & Vaughn were in Syd's living room, sitting on a couch, eating popcorn & watching a James Bond movie.

    James Bond- (on the T.V.) I'm Bond. James Bond.

    Vaughn- (leans close to Syd's ear.) I'm Vaughn. Mike Vaughn.

    Syd- (laughs, throws a piece of popcorn at him & rolls her eyes :rolleyes: ) That was corny.

    Vaughn- (catches it in his mouth & eats it) I know.

    Syd- (throws more popcorn) You are too cute.

    Vaughn- (ducks) Again, I know.

    Syd- POPCORN WAR!!!!!!!! (throws even more popcorn)

    Vaughn- HEY! No fair! You have all the ammo! (gets hit by a lot of popcorn)

    Syd- I know.

    Vaughn- (makes a face of mock anger & pushes her over.)

    Syd- (pulls him down to her) Let's get back to the movie.
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    Please tell me what you think.
     
  2. sbmv12

    sbmv12 Rocket Ranger

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    Sure I'd like to see what happens.
     
  3. aliasfreelancer

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    Ooh, very cute! I want to see this go further!! Please update soon! :)
     
  4. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Sounds like this could be really good! You have to write more SOON!~
     
  5. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    It does sound cute!! ^_^
     
  6. Aliasfan23

    Aliasfan23 Rocket Ranger

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    I think we are all in agreement. Continue...please....soon!
     
  7. FrEeLaNcEr03

    FrEeLaNcEr03 Rocket Ranger

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    It is a really good idea. It will be interesting to see what turns out from that. It is ironic and kind of funny that they are watching a spy movie. Please update soon!!
     
  8. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    LOL it's cute, continue.
     
  9. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    This is cute, a little romantic comedy. But could you not put it in script form? Sorry, it's just hard to read.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  10. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    Ok, I'll try to actually develop a plot, and I'll try to write out of script style (which will be hard because I have a non-alias fic over 50 pages in the script style). This will probably be all fluff, and it may take awhile. Ok, it's up. The fic is caled PAYBACK. Enjoy.
     
  11. kylo4

    kylo4 Rocket Ranger

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    It's good. I would like to see what happens. Since I'm an actor, the script form doesn't really bother me. But I'm not too into romance fictions but I still would like to see what happens.
     
  12. sbmv12

    sbmv12 Rocket Ranger

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    How do you put the pic on your things? Cause I want one.
     
  13. SarahBear

    SarahBear Rocket Ranger

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    very cute! continue! and pm me when u do! Sarah ps- good work!
     
  14. Moriel

    Moriel Banned

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    the fic is called PAYBACK and it's finshed
     
  15. krzykty57789

    krzykty57789 Rocket Ranger

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    yea.. i read payback
    but give me a pm just for the heck of it
     
  16. Moriel

    Moriel Banned

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    no, i refuse to, i gott leave in 15 min
     
  17. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

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    I just read payback it was great.
     
  18. Moriel

    Moriel Banned

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    i wish i could close this just out of annoyance
     

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