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Sydney's book of Love and espionage

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Sunfire_77, Mar 1, 2003.

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  1. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Note: I had this story before the crash. I am not starting fromt he beginning but instead where I left off. So if you are confused I would be more then happy to fill you in! :)
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    ALIAS
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    Sydney's book of love and Espionage
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    I in No way own anything with alias :)

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    Sydney layed there on the cold wet grass for what seemed like forever. She layed there staring into the glowing night sky. The train finally passed by and the loud sound calmed.
    She then closed her eyes and fell into a sleep.

    Sydney's POV

    I layed there forever and Couldn't get the fact out of my mind that Vaughn could be hurt or even killed.
    The sky was so beautiful. How could the sky be so beautiful when I am lying beside a rail road track. My car now apart of the train.
    The pain in my arm was killing me. "Why is will taking so long." Is what was often going through my mind.
    Then everything went black.
    As I came to I saw Will getting out of his car and running toward me.
    No one POV
    "god Syd. Are you ok?"
    Will ran toward sydney and bent next to her. He took his coat off and put it around her. He grabbed her up in his arms and carried her back to the car.
    Sydney was nearly awake.
    Will sat her in the passengers seat and went into reverse. He backout of the tiny street and headed for the hospital.
    "Syd please stay with me." She requested to her every other second.
    He kept his eyes on the road but mostly at Sydney.
    They came up to a red light.
    "O felgercarb!" Protested Will as he slammed on his brakes.
    "Come on come on." Said will un patiently.

    Sydney's POV
    The street lights were a glare to me. I remember Will piking me up and putting me in his car. What would I do without such a friend.
    The lights mushed together as he flew down the city streets. He came to a holting stop at the light.
    I remember everything getting dizzy again.
    Then everything went black.

    No POV

    Will pulled up in front of the emergency gates.
    The car came to a holting stop and Will jumped out.

    "I need some help its my friend. Shes hurt." Said Will panicly as he ran up to a nurse that was on her breakoutside.
    The nurse motioned the doctors inside to come out with a strecher.
    They grabbed sydney out of the car and onto the strecher. Will watched as the ran her inside.

    Sydney's POV

    I remember hearing the car door open. I was then grabbed out and onto something cold.
    I tried with all my strenght to open my eyes.
    When I finally did The bright lights of the hospital glared past me as the strecher I was on flew through the hall way.
    Nurses and doctors were speaking yet I couldn't here their voices. I didn't see will anywhere. Where was will?
    Then the light got over berang and everything went blank
    No POV

    Will waited in the waiting room along with Francie.
    The doctor came out and They both stood up.
    "Is she ok." Asked francie.
    "She is awke now. and shows no symtoms of amnesia. All we could find was her right arm was broken and some brusies where the seat belt was."
    Will and francie let out a sigh of relief.
    "When can we see her?" Asked Will unpaitenly
    "You can go in now and see her."
    The doctor led Them into her room.
    Sydney was sitting up talking to the nurse.
    "Hey you." Said Francie as she walked over to sydneys bed with her hands out ready for a hug.
    "You scared us." replied Will as he walked in.
    "I am sooo glad you guys are here. Thank you. And look They even gave me a blue cast." Said Sydney Jokingly.
    Francie smiled and Grabbed a pen from the bedside stand.
    After she signed her name will walked over and signed it.
    "So how long till you will be able to get out of here?"
    "Well the nurse said that it would probally be in a few hours."
    "Well i am not leaving your side."
    "We should let you rest syd." Said Will as he took ahold of Francie's arm.
    She looked at him with the "You must be crazy to think I am leaving her" Look. She then gave in.
    "Syd. if you need anything you will tell me right."
    "I will tell you."
    After they let sydney hoped and prayed the diary was in the right hands , but knew better.
    She layed her head back and sighed.
    "Where is vaughn."
    She whispered under her breath.
     
  2. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    Yeah were is Vaughn? I love the new addition! :D
     
  3. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    love it but where IS Vaughn if you hurt him, I will hurt you, actually no but I have funt hreatning people (actually no but anway i am going on and you prorably dont care)
     
  4. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    Hmmm...... Makes more sense to me know! I mean the review you gave me about my fanfic.
     
  5. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    This is better than of the stoires writen, which isn't many and none of them were very good, but yours are like 100 times better than mine. Write more soon and lets see some Vaughn!

    Kelli
     
  6. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    I second that notion Alias Kelli!
     
  7. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    To answer the question about vaughn Its a mystery I guess but I'll have you no anyine in thier right mind wouldn't hurt vaughn. :) so I will tell al; during the next ch. :)
     
  8. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    No I want more now write now!

    Kelli
     
  9. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    You should see how bad my stories are, but people seam to like them go read them one is Over-hearing and the other is What If, Ok I just wont people to read my stories, But you have a really good story!!! A lot better than mine.

    Kelli
     
  10. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    On second thought don't go read my stories because after you have read this one it'll make mine look even worse than it really is.


    Kelli
     
  11. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    Yeah I agree! (Just Joking) I loved What If, but haven't read the other one yet. I'll make it my next project.
     
  12. Alias-Hippy

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    Keep Going!!!!
    Alias-Hippy
     
  13. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    I am going to write more in a bit I just need to get all my stuff together :)
     
  14. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    I don't quite remember what happened before the stuff got erased, but where is Vaughn? I mean, does he know Syd is in the hospital? Is he captured?
     
  15. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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  16. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Ok well it started when sydney was writing in her diary and she said "if anyone found this. I would be killed." Because she let out her feelings in that book. well the next day her house was robbed and the diary was missing. she told francie and will to leave and she headed for the CIA. On the way she was talking to vaughn then she was listening closely and could here someone in the background say "tell her to come to the Warehouse." And then she herd Vaughn say. I am not going to indanger her." And sydney started to cry when she herd that. Vaughn got back on and sydney said not to say anything because she knew he wasn't alone and then the phone went dead. Well just then someone in a black van tailed her off the road and into a train track. She climbed out of the car before she could get hit. AND TADA!! Thats where were at! :)
     
  17. pasta_sauce385

    pasta_sauce385 Rocket Ranger

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    i'm glad you started writing this again after the site crashed
     
  18. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    this is very well done! keep up the good work! :)
     
  19. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Well, since I lost my story, Til There Was You, I guess there are no worries about the two stories being the same...

    And I'm also very glad you decided to restart this.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  20. SiriCerasi

    SiriCerasi Rocket Ranger

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    I'm sooooooooo happy you are dong more! And that syd is ok!
     

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