SYDNEY'S DEATH

[pasta_sauce385]

wow good ending!!!

 

[Moriel]

man, no new stuff!!! post more soon crawstinium

 

[murkywater]

yah fish, you need new stuff. and more stuff with sark pleeeease

 

[SiriCerasi]

Yeah take the idea I gave you! I forget what it was but... write!

 

[nancee]

u still dont have the story yet? im in skoool...i gotta have something to read while im working

 

[Kristina]

That was a great story, but you shouldnt stop there!!!

 

[lenafan]

Excellent. The ambiance of your presentation was excellent. I forgot to follow up on your story until just now and was glad I didn't have to wait like the others for the tiny tidbits of storyline. Loved the kicker too.l Irina is such a great character that you can really get a lot into a story. And, of course, having Jack as her husband is probably as great a romantic twosome with tragedic overtones as you could find. Oh my.

 

[aliaschick4mv]

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!! AND THAT'S NOT AN ENDING IT'S A BEGINING OF A SEQUEL!!!! YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL!

 

[lenafan]

h34r: I agree with aliaschick4mv. Could be a sequel. Think about it for the summertime. THen you won't have to do the same thing to us you did with us, namely break it up into tittlelating (Sp) tidbits. Good luck plotting.

 

[Moriel]

man, crawstinium when are you gonna post more???

 

[Crawstinium]

ahhhhhhh the pressure! well, i really hadn't intended this to have sequel, but i guess if i can think of a good idea for the next part i will write it. except that i can't think of any ideas at all!

 

[lenafan]

Oh no, no ideas? If you don't someone else might and that someone might be me. Say you'll do it or else :angry:

 

[lenafan]

Of course none of it will work unless Mom signs up for a third season.

 

[girlincognito]

This is really good!!! I smell a sequal!!! :balloons:

 

[Crawstinium]

she will! she has to!
okay, i am trying to think of idea, but i just don't feel like this story has any plot lines that have not been concluded, i don't feel like there's anything to work off of/continue.

 

[lenafan]

Am ready to post first part of my next story. But my mind is filled with lots of story lines. The titles of upcoming episodes can make ideas. Let the characters perk and let them write...for you. You can do it.

 

[Moriel]

i`m really tired of waiting for another part of this story.

 

[Ilikesloane]

yeah come on..... SUSPENSE IS INCREDIABLE

 

[Crawstinium]

umm well im kind of confused because there is no other part of the story. well there may be a sequel eventually, but right now i am too stressed about stupid stuff to have any ideas or write one. and i completely do not understand what suspense is killing you, because i thought that i had wrapped up a story. so i am starting to think that maybe i should post an explanation.

 

[Crawstinium]

here is my little explanation thingy if it wasn't clear enough:
basically, the whole thing was a plot by sloane to get rid of Irina (who is "first-in-command") but he wants to do it without looking at all suspicious himself. so he manipulates the CIA into killing Irina by having Francie put the "biological warfare agent" into the drink that Syd brings Irina, knowing that Irina will be blamed for Syd's death. However, Syd survives, Vaughn saves her and they stop Irina's execution, etc. So Sloane's plan did not work, and he realizes that Irina/the CIA will be suspicious of him/Francie now, because they want to know who put the biological weapon into the drink.
hmm i think that about sums it up.