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Syd's Betrayal

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  1. Dark Wiccan

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    Disclaimer: I did not create Alias or do not have anything to do with the creation or have any contact with the creators of Alias.
    Author:Dark Wiccan
    Type: Angst/Action

    Syd's betrayal
    Sydney stood out in the rain, lost in her thoughts. Wasn't sure of what to do or when to do it. She feels the cold rain pouring down her face, thinking, "How cold the rain is resembles how I feel on the inside" said Syd. She stood there, looking into the shadows of puddles, thinking back to that day 2 years ago.......

    Sydney ran down the hallway along with her partner Michael Vaughn, trying to escape from the guards that followed. Sydney spun around with her pistol in the air firing bullets at the guards, while Vaughn backed her up. Syd hit a guard in the center of his chest, she watched how he slowly went limp on the ground. She stared at his lifeless corpse, a million images going through her thoughts.

    "SYD!!! LET'S GO!!!" yelled Vaughn, he quickly grabbed Syd by the arm and continued to dash down the hallway, more guards followed and Syd still in her thoughts, Vaughn ran into a near by room with Syd still at arm, he baracated the door. He stood there staring at Sydney "Syd, what's wrong??" she looked up and stared into his eyes. Then a sudden bang at the door "They're coming" Syd shouted, Syd and Vaughn looking around for an escape, the guards broke through the door and surround Vaughn and Syd.

    Through the crowd a woman emerged, she lifted the hood that was covering her face, "Thank you Syd, my daughter" said Irina with a glare in her eyes. Syd looked at Vaughn, and Vaughn returned the stare, he looked deep into her eyes "Why Syd? why? why did you do this?" the guards grabbed Vaughn, but Vaughn struggled to get free, a guard pistol whipped Vaughn to knock him out. Syd looked at the unconcious Vaughn, "Sydney, you have made me very proud" Syd looked at her mother, then she looked back at Vaughn while the guards carried him off she watched as her eyes started to fill with warm tears "What have I done?"
     
  2. aliasjgfanaticmv

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    Hmmm, like I said last time, not confusing at all! LMAO!! Post up the next chapters! I wanna read 'em again! LMAO!
     
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    Part 2

    Irina stared at Syd, thinking of what to do now, now that she has Vaughn, what is Syd feeling, she just betrayed the one she loved most, Irina looked over at the guard next to her "Leave", the guard looked at her and said"But Ms Derevko" "LEAVE!" yelled Irina, she used her icy stare and glared at the guard, the guard looked back and slowly moved out the door.

    Irina started to walk over, she put her hand on Syd's shoulder but then Syd quickly moved the gun to the side of Irina's head, Irina could tell, she could feel the cold steel up against her head. "Sydney, what are you doing?" Irina asked, Syd stood there, with the gun in her hand up against the temple of Irina's forehead, she glared at her, Sydney slowly dropped the gun from her hand, it hit the floor with a bang, Syd stood there, looking into the eyes of her distant mother, Syd turned around and walked out the door. Irina looked on "The effects of Betrayal can cause many problems, many emotions, many regrets. They can be lethal if not handled properly" said Irina.

    I hope you enjoyed that, the next part is going to be a shocker, I warn you now
     
  4. Dark Wiccan

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    Part 3, enjoy

    Syd's walking down the hallway, staring at the floor, completely lost in her thoughts, "What have I done, why did I do this??" she said, she just kept walking, she felt like she couldn't stop, she had to run, run from her thoughts, run from her emotions, run from her regrets. Syd kept walking and walking, "Good job Syd" said a voice behind her. Syd looked behind her, she stared into the eyes of Sark, Sark stood there, with a grin on his face staring at Sydney. "Very nicely done, you should be proud" said Sark, Syd looked at him, stared into his eyes, she felt like he had no soul, just there to taunt her. Syd looked down at the floor, then she looked back at Sark, she just glared at him, the grin slowly went away on Sark's face, Sydney stuck her hand in her jacket, Sark looked on.

    Sydney swiftly pulled the gun out and shot a bullet straight into the center of Sark's chest, he fell slowly, grabbing his chest, he stared into the eyes of Sydney, he looked at his hands, they were soaked with his own blood. He glared at Sydney. Sydney watched Sark, as she slowly watched his life disappear, Sark glared back until everything went black, Sydney watched him collapse, she stared at the lifeless body that used to be Sark, she turned around, and looked at the gun. She looked back at the corpse "Everything ends sooner or later, you just don't know when" Syd dropped the gun, she continued walking down the hallway, as Sark laid on the floor blood flowing all over the floor.

    ~Irina at this time~

    "She has never felt betrayal before, I hope she can handle it" said Irina staring at the doorway, "She will, she'll be fine, she's a smart and brave girl, she can take, but now she's apart of our plan, she will make a good asset" said a voice, he slowly came from the shadows "Yes, she will, she'll make me proud, and I hope she will make you proud as well Michael Vaughn" said Irina
    "She already has" said Vaughn.
     
  5. aliasjgfanaticmv

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    Enjoyed ^_^ but gaH! I must go ponder even more!! That's 3 stories to ponder!
     
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    hey wikky u ever gonna post more beyond this dude? its good
     
  7. Dark Wiccan

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    I will soon, but I have some stuff in the process
     
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    yeah this is very interesting and good!! write more soon!!
     
  9. Ames47

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    yeah this is very interesting and good!! write more soon!!
     
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    interesting...
     
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    Part 4

    Syd kept walking faster and faster until she was dashing, she needed to get outta here, but what about Vaughn she thought, she stopped, and looked down the hall in which she just came from, she couldn't think of what she could, or what were her options. She just stood there with her looking down the hall.

    ~Irina and Vaughn~

    BANG! Irina looked over at Vaughn and said "What was that??", Vaughn and Irina dashed out to find Sark laying on the floor, Vaughn bent down to check for a pulse, Vaughn looked back at Irina "He's dead, Sydney must have done this" Irina stared at Vaughn in shock "But we needed Sark to complete the plan" Vaughn looked at Irina the down the hall "Miss me?" asked the voice, Irina looked around, there stood Sark, not a scratch on him, Irina looked at the body and gazed in amazement at Sark "But how?" she asked. Sark stood there, he walked over to the corpse that laid on the floor and put his hand near it's neck, he peeled away the skin to prove it was a mask, he ripped the mask off, there laid Will, the best friend of Sydney's. Sark looked at Irina and Vaughn and said "I knew she was going to do this, that's why I forced Will to dress up as me" Vaughn looked at Sark and said "How'd you get him to do it?" Irina stared at Sark "Oh I see, how you did it, you kidnapped her other little friend and are holding her hostage, Francie I believe" Sark looked at Irina and grinned "You are correct Ms. Derevko, she's being held in 6B" said Sark. "Perfect, the plan is almost complete" said Irina, "But we have one last thing to deal with..............Sydney Bristow"

    I hope you enjoyed that
     
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    :D More, please!
     
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    uh oh !
     
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    aww u killed will? thats not rite! oh well good one
     
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    aww poor will he always gets dragged into everything!! anyways keep goin? i wanna see what syd is up to! :D
     
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    More..................pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee! :D
     
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    This is good, write more! :D
     
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    awesome write more please i want to see what happens!!!
     
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    Still waiting!!!!!! :D
     
  20. Aliasmaster47

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    I want more. But wait. I need somethings explained. Who did Syd betray. Vaugh. Herself. Irina. Who.
     

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