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The Betreyal

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by SydneyBristow201717, Apr 19, 2003.

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  1. SydneyBristow201717

    SydneyBristow201717 Rocket Ranger

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    Title: The Betreyal
    Summmary: All I'm saying is that Syd sorta, well cheats on Vaughn with an unlikely charater.
    Rating: PG, most likey
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    "Syd, i just wanted to tell you that, I, I love you. And that I hope you feel the same. I know I sound like a a kid in junior high, but that's how I feel." "Weiss, I don't know what to say. maybe it's just my nerves from being stuck here in a bunker under italy because of my mother botching our mision, but I think that maybe I feel the same way. Maybe the only reason why, I was with Vaughn was because I wanted you but did know because Vaughn was the closest thing to you. Eric Weiss's heart became warmed. He had never ever thought of reveling his feelings for Syd, but against her better jugdement he did. There's only some much a man's heart can take without breaking. Sydney bent over and kissed him. She though to herself, "If I ever get out of here alive i might reget this but this might be the last man I ever love".
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    Ok, so this story right know is a little vague, but I write more. I WANT POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE REVIEWS!
     
  2. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    uhhhh :blink: that was really weird cuz....i dont htink htat she would do that.....:blink: and its a good start....i wanna see where ur gonna go with this..post more.......
     
  3. JoeysHero

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    It sounds like a very intresting storyline and from the first part of the fic which was written well i'll definatly be wanting to read more. Post more soon. :)
     
  4. SydneyBristow201717

    SydneyBristow201717 Rocket Ranger

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    You see, i always though that they're might be a really werid twist in the stroy like that (it'll prolly never ever but in my head it does). I love romance stories but i better at writhing them in poem form. If you haven't already, check out my poems Wanting You and Mine.
     
  5. Dark Wiccan

    Dark Wiccan Banned

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    Really cool start, I don't like Weiss, he annoys me, but still really cool start and great storyline
     
  6. Flames24

    Flames24 Rocket Ranger

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    That was really good, SB201717. :)
     
  7. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    um ok this is alittle werid but funny!! yeah weiss finally gets some action!! :D
     
  8. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    :blink: Okay.....yeah.


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  9. SydneyBristow201717

    SydneyBristow201717 Rocket Ranger

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    I'll write more later.
     
  10. :blink: uhhhhhhh.... :blink:
    --mandy :angelic:
     
  11. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    LMAO who said this on my fic?? Em and Kate. LMAO She said it would be interesting, and that's what this is. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Of course, I need a backstory :hint hint:
     
  12. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    nice start! ooo write more.
     
  13. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    hmm, this is interesting, I'd like to know what happened between her and Vaughn...veeeeerrrrrrrrry interesting... ^_^
     

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