The End Is No Where Near!

This is a really good story, but just check spelling and stuff. It's funny to see "Sloane" spelled as "so lane." Is this your first fic?

~Me :angel2:
 
Hey guys here's chapter 3. I hope I fixed up any spelling problems I had last time. I coldn't believe that I spelled Sloane like that! Well please read and review! Thanks a bunch!!

Chapter 3- The Guilt

****We are back in the present, this chapter takes place 30 minutes after the building blew up****

Sydney and Weiss are now on palne back to LA. Weiss approaches Sydney.

"Syd.........are you ok?" He asks a little bit concern

She just looks at him with tears down her cheeks and doesn't respond. He moves closer to her and sits down.

"Syd.......listen I know your blaming yourself right now, but it wasn't your fault....." but fefore he could finish Syd cuts in, her voice stronger than she expected.

"It's not my fault! It's not my fault! How could you say that? I just killed the man I love, and your best friend back there and it's not my fault!"

"Sydney would you listen to yourself. You didn't kill him!" He tried pleading with her.

"I did Weiss, I killed him. I let the Man I love die in there. I just ran out of the building, and let him die in there, to give the CIA these.......these.....stupid codes. I killed him Eric, I........ I..........killed him." The sobs just took over her. She stuck her head between her knees, and let the guilt and the tears come over her.

"Listen Syd I know your upset right now, I am to, but you did not kill Mike. You did what he told you to. It's not your fault they blew up the building.(Sydeny cries harder) Mike loved you Syd, and he wouldn't want you to blame yourself for something you didn't even do." He takes a deep breath and then waits for her response.

Sydney raised her head tears still falling and her black eyeliner running down her face.

"I don't blame anybody but myself. Oh God Eric, Vaughn's gone, he's really gone.......(More tears come out) I love him........ I love him so much!" Once again the tears take over.

Weiss gently pulls her into a hug. " I know syd........Shh.... It will be ok!" He begins to cry with Syd, as he finally realizes that he lost his best friend.

**Meanwhile somewhere with Vaughn**

"So where are you taking me anyway?" Vaughn asked questionably

"you will know soon enough Mr. Vaughn. If I were you, I would get some rest."

**CIA Building**
(30 minutes later)

Weiss and sydney walk into the CIA as Jack awaits their arrival.

"Agent Weiss" Jack greets Weiss, as he eyes his broken down daughter up and down.

"Mr. Bristow. Sir, did we get any information on the codes and intel we brought back?"

He takes a deep breath. "No Marshall is still working on it, but we should have it cracked by early tommorrow mourning. He pauses and the continues, I ......heard about Agent Vaughn, I'm truly sorry Sydney!"

The mention of his name brings back more tears to her eyes. She just nods then gathers enough strength to choke out some words.

"I want to go home if you don't mind." She says it without even making eye contact.

Jack nods, " I understand, but Sydney we need to see you for debriefing before you can go home."

She looks up pleading. "Dad please not tonight, I just want to go home."

"Sydney I know you want to go home, but..........."

"Dad please! You can tell Kendel that I will have a debriefing tomorrow, but tonight I just want to go home ok. Can you at least respect that?" she let's more tears escape her eyes.

Jack takes a moment. " Ok Sydney you can come into debriefing tomorrow at 9:00am sharp. (He turns to Eric) Agent Weiss can you please take Sydney home?"

"Of course Sir!"

Jack focuses his attention back to Sydney. "Good night Sydney!" And with that he quickly walks away.

"Come on syd let's get you home!" He puts his arm around Syd, and they leave the CIA for Syd's house.

**Syd's House**
(20 minuets later)

Weiss pulls into the driveway, and turns off the car.

"Are you going to be ok? Do you need me to walk you inside?" Asking concerned

" I'll be fine Weiss, thank you!" As she goes and unlocks the car door and steps outside of the car, but before she can close it Weiss cuts in.

"You will be ok Syd. If you need me, you can call me anytime, no matter what. Ok?"

The all familiar words that Vaughn once spoke to her, are playing through her mind. She's about to relase more tears, but she knows that if she just wants to go to sleep, she has to answer.

"Thank you Weiss, Good night!"

"Good night!" Syd closes the car door, and walks up to the front door. Weiss starts the car, and takes off as Sydney sticks her key in the door.
NOTE: FRANCIE IS GOOD IN MY STORY, I THOUGHT YOU WOULD LIKE TO KNOW! :D

"Oh no, Francie and Will!"

It's not that Sydney doesn't love francie and Will, she does with all her heart, but she was a mess and just lost Vauhgn. She didn't want to play 20 questions and worry them.

"Please be sleeping please!"

Sydney slowly creeped through the house 'Looks like it's clear.' She slowly made her way to her bedroom door, but before she could get inside Francie and Will turned on the lights.

"Syd is that you?" Asked Franice

She didn't turn around, just answered. "Yea, but guys I'm really tired, and I just want to go to bed. Can we just talk about it in the mourning?" She was to tired to bearly choke out those words.

"Syd are you sure you are ok?" Will asked concerned.

"Yes Will I'm fine, I just want to go to bed, please!!" She pleaded even more this time.

"Oh c'mon Syd, we don't even get any juicy details at all about your trip with lover boy Vaughn!" he said Jokenily.

That was it, that was the last straw. Syd just stood there for a moment, and then turned around. She slowly turned around only to hear both Francie and will gasp at her. Tears were pouring out of her face, and she still had dry eyeliner stuck on her face. The last thing she remebers before passing out into Will's arms, were the words she never wanted to hear.

"Vaughn's........Dead......" and the world went black for Sydney Bristow.

**Somewhere With Vaughn**

They finally arrived at their destantion, but Vaughn still didn't know where he was. All he knew, was he was in a room with 4 ugly gray walls, and both his hands strapped behing a chair he was sitting on. Suddnely the man from the shadows(Danny) entered the room, still remaning hidden. Vaughn spoke first.

"Since you know me so well, Don't I at least get to know who you are?"

"I'm afaird that has no importance to you Mr. Vaughn." Danny says back.

"Don't you think it's kind of cowardly to always be standing behind the shadows. At least show yourself, C'mon show youself!"

"Your in no means to make demands Mr. Vaughn, but why do you really want to know, mmmm. What would that do for you?"

" I would at least like to know who thinks their going to put me in my grave!" He shot back codly.

"Well in that case........(Danny steps out of the shadows) I don't believe we meet, I'm.............

"Danny Hect" Vaughn finishes his sentece for him. Still in the state of shock and angry "Wait, your suppose to be dead, What the Hell are you doing here...... and with me?"

"Nice to meet you to. Like you said Mr. Vaughn suppose to be dead. You will find out soon enough what your doing here! I always wanted to meet the man Sydney moved onto. By the way, how is my Sydney........"


Note: Sorry for the weird ending, I just thought that would be a great place to stop! ;) I hope you guys liked it. I have bad news :( , I will be going on a trip thursday to Chicago :D , and for all of you who like my story, I wont be able to post chapter 4 until monday, when I get a chance to come back on the computer! Well let me know (y) or (n) , I wouldn't want to be wasting my time, if you guys don't like it! I'll hope to hear from you soon! ;)

Love ya! :angelic:

Lauren :woot:
 
<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'>Oooooh, I like this different take...Very interesting, I think I love/hate Evil!Danny. Continue, post soon!


much luv-
JoJo
</span>
 
Good story. Some of it's confusing because of the spelling and punctuation errors. But overall, it's a good story so far. Post more soon. I like it.
 
i have been reading fanfics for a while but never gave a review..i have to say i LOVE ur work..this is almost as engaging as spywolf's work.....i just hope the person danny is talking to isn't alice....that would be too much soapopera like :angry: ...but overall..it is really good and almost like the real show..at least it feels like it..keep it coming (y)

:redhair:
 
this is so sweet. i love that told each other that they love each other. they still haven't said that to each other's face on the show yet. they've said that they love each other to everybody but each other. *sigh*. by the way i love that danny is evil. i never liked him anyway. danny is evil stories are always the best.
 
:Wow! Thanks guys I am really glad you like it! I will promise that I will post as much as I can! I'm just sorry that I can't until monday, but you guys are really sweet, and you are the reason I am writing it! Thanks a bunch! Till the next post! :D

Love Ya,

Lauren :angelic:
 
Hey guys I just wanted to let you know, that I will be updating either later this week, or weekend! Sorry for the delay, I just got back from my trip!
 
Hey guys here's chapter 4 I hope you like it! :D Review and let me know what you think!

****Chapter 4- The Betrayal****

**SYD'S APPARTMENT**

"Will I'm really worried about Sydney!"

"I know Francie I am too. Hopefully when she wakes up, she will be feeling better."

"I doubt that. She just lost the man she loves Will, and for the second time. (she pauses) My God the second time! She doesn't deserve this." She finshes sadly.

"I know, I know.(he pauses) This just makes me think how lucky I am to get to spend every minute with you!" He pulls Francie into a kiss

While Francie and Will continue kissing, Sydney is still asleep in the bedroom.

"No..........Vaughn.........No! Please......... No......" Suddnely Sydney wakes up and takes in her surroundings. She looks down next to the empty space in her bed that Vaughn once filled 24 hours ago.

"Vaughn....."

She got out of bed, and goes to the bathroom. There are still black spots of eyeliner on her face from the tears she cried last night. Her hair is in one big knot, and her stomach acks for something to eat. Nothing compares to the pain of her heart in pieces. She undresses, and get in the shower. She huddles in the corner and lets the hot steemy water take her over. Once again she can't help the tears that fall from her face.

"I'm so sorry Vaughn, I'm so sorry..."

She finshes drying off and gets dressed. She wipes the tears away, and puts a brave face on for Francie and Will. She opens her bedroom door and exits. Both Francie and Will stop what their doing and run to her.

"Syd sweety, I'm so sorry. How are you feeling this mourning? Francie asked concern.

"Like Hell!" She answered back more codly then she wanted to.

"Syd I know this is hard for you (he pauses) I know how much Mike meant to you!"

"Look I really appreciate you guys trying to help, but I really don't want to talk about this right now (she pauses) Plus I'm late for work. I have to go." She trys to run out but is stopped by Will grabbing her arm.

"No Syd, your not going anywhere! You need to eat something and get some rest. Your sure as hell not going to work today!" He stated protectively

"Let go of me Will. I'm a big girl, and I can do whatever I want. Now I have to go excuse me." She shot back angry.

"Syd sweety were just trying to help, please don't push us away." Francie pleaded.

"Well do me a favor and don't. I'm fine!"

Before Francie and Will could respond she grabbed her keys and ran out the door. She got in her car and just sat there and cried. She knew they didn't deserve that, but she couldn't help it. She didn't want to here it was going to be ok. She wanted to hear Vaughn's voice, his arms around her, and his lips on hers. She summed up enough strength to turn on the car and drive to the CIA.

She pulled into the garage of the CIA building. No even seeing Vaughn's car in his parking space made her tears start up again. She dried up her tears and entered the building. It seemed that everybody stopped what they were doing to look at the helpless agnet standing before them. The first person to greet her was Weiss. He pulled her into a hug.

"Hey Syd how you feelin'? Wait don't answer that, I know the answer." Weiss breaks the hug.

"I'm trying Weiss." She just looks at him ad nods.

"Listen Syd, if you can't to the debriefing you let me know and........"

"It's ok Eric. I have to deal with my actions sooner or later." She just puts her head down, not even looking at Weiss.

Weiss just lowers his head and thinks to himself ' Vauhgn was right when he said she was stubborn.'

Jack apporaches both of them.

"Agent Weiss (looks at Syd) Sydney. They need to see us all in debriefing right away. Let's go!" He exits as quickly as he enterned.

"Geezz not even a good mourning, or a how are you?" Weiss adds in

"Mmm, Let's go!" She hides the hint of a smile that Weiss brought on. It was all down to business now, to bring Vaughn's killers to justice.

** Somewhere With Vaughn**

"So how's my Sydney?" Danny asked again.

"You Bastard! Sydney loved you, and you betrayed her. You didn't deserve her." Vaughn shouted angry.

"I'd watch what you say Mr. Vaughn. it just might get you killed. (takes a moment, then continues with a smile) So tell me something, How long did it take for Sydney to move on to you?"

Vaughn didn't anwser, he just watched Danny move back in forth in front of him.

"Well if you don't want to answer.......(Danny just looked Vaughn straight in the face) but she's Dam good in bed isn't she?" He smirked at Vaughn and began to laugh.

"You Asswhole!" He headbutted Danny in the head causing a huge gash to open. Danny stumbled a bit, but then regained his composure. He took out his gun, and butted Vaughn in the face with the end of the gun.

"You are on my last nerve, and trust me next time I wont be so nice!" Danny just starred at Vaughn and then left.

"Syd!" Was all that he could think about. All he wanted to do was hold her and tell her how much he loved her. He promised himself that when he get's out of here he would do just that.

**Back At The CIA**

Everybody takes a seat, and Kendel once again takes his position.

"I have some bad news. (he pauses while Sydney looks up) The codes that Agents Vaughn and Bristow obtained were decieving. They were codes to a closed bank account, but......."

Sydney stands up and looks Kendel striaght in the eye. If looks could kill.)

"Wait a minute. Do you mean to tell me that you sent Agent Vaughn and I on a misson to get codes to a closed bank account." Very angry.

"Miss Bristow that's enough...... I..."

"You mean to tell me that you put my life, and Agent Vaughn's life in danger for bank codes (she pauses) Your telling me that Agent Vaughn lost his life for nothing!" Even more angry.

Miss Bristow I am losing my patience, now take a seat!" Kendel shouted again trying to get her attention.

"You mean I lost the man I love because you didn't have the right intel, you bastard!" Now in tears shouting behond reason.

" TAKE A SEAT NOW MISS BRISTOW!" The whole room went silent, and Sydney sunk into her seat. He stares at her and then speaks.

"As much out of line you were miss Bristow, I am going to forgive your outburst as a sign of your grieving. It will not happen again. EVER! Am I making myself clear?"

Sydney just nods. As she regains her composure Kendel went on.

"Now as I was saying, Yes the codes were decieving, but yesterday night we recieved intel that could lead us to Deverko and Solane, and hope for an agent's life. (Sydney looks up) Jack......"

"Yesterday night we recieved this video tape from the surveillance camera outside of Mr. Blanc's home."

Jack pressed play on the video tape. On the video tape is showed Sark waiting in a car with another women besides him, her idenity unknown. It then showed two guards carring a man out with his hands tied. Vaughn. One minute later Danny Hect appears on the screen, looks around and get's in the car. Jack pauses the video and continues.

"His name is Danieal Hect. (A picture of Danny appears on the screen) A year ago Solane supposedly killed Mr. Hect, because Sydney reviled information on who she was, and what she did for a living. Well that's not the case. We don't have information yet on how he survived, and what he was doing there with Sark. We do believe that Agent Vaughn is with him and still alive. (Sydney looks up with a singal tear escape from her eye.) As of this moment we lost contact on where they might be." As Jack takes a seat he keeps a careful eye on his daughter.

Kendel regains his spot and continues.

"That's all for now, your dismissed."

Kendel was the first to leave followed by weiss after patting Syd on the shoulder. Sydney still sat in her chair not even moving. Jack got up and went to her.

"Sydney (he pauses) I know this is a lot for you to take in."

Sydney looks at her father straight in the eye.

"It was Danny? Danny did this?" Barely above a whisper.

He nods "Yes!"

"How? Why? For a year I thought Danny was dead. For a year I cried because I missed him, and for a year I put my life on the line so I could bring his killer to justice. Now, now I found out he betrayed me (she pauses) he betrayed me the whole time! How could I be so stupid?" she puts her head down and covers her face with her hands.

"Sydney (he pauses) I am going to request that you be taken off this case. I don't think you are in the right mind, or the right emotion to deal with this. I think it's for the best."

She looks up, and gives him a death stare.

"Excuse me. What did you say? You have no right what to tell me what I can and can't do, and you have no right to decide on how capable I am to complete a case. This is my case. Danny betrayed me, and now he has taken the man I love, which I still don't even know if he is alive at the moment, and you don't think I should be apart of it!" At this moment nothing but anger is filling Syndey's voice.

"Sydney, you are not stable enough to handle this. You need to just let Weiss and I handle this. I think you need some time off. I am doing this to help you."

"Your trying to help me? Since when?" No I am going to make this perfectly clear for you dad. I am stable enough to handle this, no matter what your thought is. I am going to be on this case, and so help me God if you somehow get me pulled off (she pauses) I will still go after Danny with or without the CIA. I am going to get Danny, and i am going to get Vaguhn back. As far as you trying to help me, don't! I don't need your help. I never had, and I don't want it now. Just stay the hell out of my way! Excuse me."

Sydney glances at her speechless father one more time and walks out of the conference room, letting the door slam behind her.

**Some Location**

Danny is in a room getting dressed and looking at himeself in the mirror. He hears a knock at his door.

"Come in!"

" I should have known you would lose your temper." an unknown women's voice fills the room.

"What do you want?" He snaps back

"I came to check on you. I saw your little argument with Mr. Vaughn. I thought I made myself perfectly clear, that you weren't suppose to harm him until we got Sydney." she finshes in a serious tone.

He steps away from the mirror and faces the women "Look (he pauses) I know what your insrtuctions are, but he asked for it back there. I am doing this my way. I have waited a year to get my hands on him, and not even you will tell me what I can and can't do!" looks her dead in the eye

" I helped arranged your death once, but if you double cross me (she moves closer and looks him in the eye smiling) I can arrange for your real one this time. you will wait until your girlfriend requires the information we need, and until we get Sydney. Is that clear Mr. Hect?" Still looking deep in his eyes.

" Yes Irena (he pauses) whatever you say."

She takes one last look at him, and then heads for the door. she opens the door, but speaks before she leaves

"You will have your fun Mr. Hect, but for now just make sure you keep your temper in check, and you keep Mr. Vaughn's face easy for Sydney to identify." She smiles back at him and then closes the door.

*outside the hall Irena picks up her cell phone*

"Yes, I had a little conversation with our friend, it wont happen again. (It shoots to a man sitting in a chair at his desk with a phone to his ear)

The man speaks " It's time we move on to the next step."

(back to Irena)

" I must agree with you. Call me when the next step is complete!"

(back to the man)

"As usual your the first to know. Goodbye!" He hangs up the phone and turns his chair around to face a man standing before him.

"Mr. Sark ( he pauses) it's time we move on to the next step. Bring Jack Bristow to me."

"As you wish Mr. Solane!"

Sark exits the room, leaving Solane smiling to himself.


Note: Hey guys I hope you like it :D Let me know what you think! (y) (n) I am hoping to post chapter 5 this weekend, but that's if you guys want me to continue! so let me know!

Love ya,

Lauren :angelic:
 
Wow! That was awesome! Really great story. I hope Vaughn and Syd get to see each other soon. The suspense is killing me!! Ahh!! :woot:
 
Back
Top