The End Is No Where Near!

WOW!!! That was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! You're a genius, and I only say that if I'm absolutely in LOVE with a fic. And I LOVE THIS! I mean, wow, this is sooo good. I don't know any other words for amazing... Where's the thesaurus...
 
great job. i hope that you have fun on your trip (sorry- off topic, i know). i'm so glad that you've done something different! your fic really has my attention.
 
That was good. Not as good as your first three... but it was none the less good. I have one thing to say, it might help to use spell check. Sorry, but spelling mistakes annoy me. Not little ones, like spelling hello with three l's by mistake or somthing, but your put like Solane and stuff... lol that bugged me. But good chapter
 
Great job. keep it up :D
--Mandy :angelic:

p.s. a**h*** is spelled without the w. lol just a little something i noticed. :lol:
 
(y) really good i am definitely enjoying this.....as a suggestion for hect's girlfriend..maybe u could come up with a totally new character..like i said before i don't like the thought of it being alice..so a brand new villan will be good to play around with... :devil:


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Yea guys so sorry about the spelling thing! I went back over it, and I still can't believe that I am spelling sloane like that! To ease your mind, the girl that danny is talking to isn't Alice, but she isn't new! I will be posting chapter 5 tomorrow so you will find out that! Thanks for the replys! Till tomorrow!
 
Hey guys here's chapter 5 I hope you like it!

Chapter 5- The Kidnapping

****Syd's Appartment****
(quick note: just to let you guys know, after sd-6 fell Syd told Francie everything about sd-6 and the CIA, and Will moved in)

Sydney is sitting in her car with the car turned off. She took a look at her watch. It's been 40 minutes, and she's still sitting in her car. She knew she had to face Francie and Will at somepoint, but she didn't exactly know how to apologize for being so harsh to them this mourning. 'It was now or never' she thought. She stepped outside of the car, and went to the front door. She opened the door only to find Francie and Will eating dinner.

"Hi" she said

"Hi" Both Francie and Will said

Sydney walked over to the counter, and put her keys and purse down. She turned back around to Francie and Will.

"Listen, Francie...Will I'm so sorry for how I treated you this mourning. I never meant to hurt you guys in anyway. I had no excuse to treat you like that, and I hope that you can forgive me."

Francie not waiting another second jumps out of her chair, and runs to Sydney and hugs her.

"Syd honey, you have nothing to apologize for. Your going through a tough time, and we know that."

"Yea Syd, just forget about it. I mean I was waiting for you to punch me." He chuckles

She laughs "I really am sorry guys. I don't know what I would do without you two."

Francie and Will pulled Sydney into a hug. After a minute or so, they all pulled apart.

"So how was your day?" Will asked

Syd looks down as if the whole day relives itself. She begins to get teary, and turns away from them.

"Sydney sweety, what happend?" asked Francie concerned.

She turns back around "You don't want to know."

"Oh now I have to know. Spill." Demanded Will

After 5 minutes of tears, denial, and anger Sydney left both Francie and Will speechless.

"Wait a minute. You mean that you not only found out that Vaughn is still alive, but that Danny your dead fiance who isn't really dead either has been alive this whole time, and working for your mother. Then your dad threatens to take you off the missions?" Will said out of breath.

"I told you, you didn't want to know!"

"Honey that's horrible. What are you going to do?" Francie asked puzzled.

"I'm going to find them. I'm going to get Vaughn back. That's all that matters. ( she pauses and looks up at Francie and Will) I hope you guys don't mind, but I'm tired and I'm going to bed."

"Sure, goodnight sweety!" She hugs her

"Goodnight Syd!" Will hugs her too.

"Goddnight guys!"

(The Next Day)

**Some Location**

Danny's in his room still asleep. A women enters his room, and walks over to the bed and kisses him passionately.

"Mmmm!" He responds.

The unknown women pulls apart, and looks at him as he wakes up.

"Did you like that?" she smiles

"Yes I did. So tell me something?" As he is kissing her neck.

"What?" She says chuckling from his kisses.

He lookes deep in her eyes "Why did you stop?" He passionately kisses her again.

She stops the kiss a minute later.

"Hold on there Romeo. Before we can have pleasure, we must have business."

"Fine!" Danny got out of bed, and put on some pants.

"Did you get the intel?" He asked

"Of course I did. I wouldn't be here if I didn't." she states

"Good! Then all we have to do is wait, until we get word from Arvin or Irena to bring Sydney in."

"I can't wait!" She snaps back, with a devil look.

"I believe our business part is over now." He starts to move closer to her and to the bed.

She stands up from the bed, and puts her hand out.

" Not exactly. There is still one more matter to discuss." She says in a firm tone.

"And what could that be my dear?" he answers back

"I believe it's time Mr. Vaughn and I got properly acquainted." she smiles

"You will my dear! After." He moves closer

"After what?" Somewhat confused

He smiles and grabs her " After I show you how much I missed you." He pulls her into another kiss.

**CIA Building**
(9:30 am)

Jack, Weiss, and Sydney are waiting in the debriefing room for Kendel. Sydney still hasn't spoken to her father, and her father still hasn't spoken to her since the falling out. Weiss can feel the tension, and try to enlighten the mood.

"So (he pauses) how's everybody doing this mourning?" He looks at both Syd and Jack, and smiles.

Both Sydney and Jack just glare at him, making him think twice before asking another question. With that Kendel walks into the room, and takes his position.

"As I told you yestersay, I would update you as soon as we got any information. This (points to a picture that just popped up on the screen) is the Chicago Art Museum in Chicago, Illinois. We have word that Sark will be there this evening."

"For what?" she asked

"This museum seems to be hiding the next piece to the Rambaldi device. Sark will be there to retrive it. (he pauses) Jack and Sydney, you will be attending the museums tour as an adoring father and daughter. This man (points to a man that appears on the screen) Brendon Smith will take you on a personal tour. Your job is to get rid of him. Sydney will take care of surveillance, while Jack retrives the device. Weiss will be outside tracking you just in case. Once the device is in our hands, your mission is complete and return home. That's it, your........"

Wait! What about Sark, aren't we going to bring him into custody." Sydney asked

"For the time being No. He's not even going to know were suppose to be there. Now......."

"Sir, Sark knows were Agent Vaughn is, can't we just bring him in, and make him tell us." Her anger is starting to rise again.

"No Sydeny, Sark must remain untouched. He's......."

Sydney cutting in again "Why Not? Sark knows where Vaughn is. It's the perfect opportunity to save him." Pleading and yelling at him.

"Miss Bristow, we are not suppose to know about Agent Vaughn surviving, or about Sark tonight. If we bring Sark into custody, then that will cause suspicion, and also would be putting Agent Vaughn's life in danger. Now I know you want to get Agent Vaughn back like the rest of us do, but you are going to have to be patient. I will here from you both tonight. Dismissed!"

Kendel walks out of the toom, and Sydney just sinks back into her chair. Jack and Weiss just look on.

**Sark On An Airplane**

His cellphone rings, and he picks it up.

"Hello"
(cut to Sloane sitting at his desk, he responds)

"Is everything set?"
(Back to Sark)

"Yes Arvin, everything is set."
(Back to Sloane)

"Good! I will wait to hear from you then."
(Back to Sark)

Sark hangs up the phone. It shoots back to Sloane at his desk.

"We are all set for tonight." He responds

A women comes closer to his desk. "Good. On the other hand of business, Danny and his girlfriend received the intel." Irena responds

"Good. Then all we have to do, is wait for Jack." He smiled back.

(Note: Guys I am finally going to tell you were Vaughn, Sloane, and Danny are, so I can stop saying Some Location :D )

**Somewhere With Vaughn**

Vaughn awakes still strapped to the chair. He takes in his surroundings. It wasn't a dream. He was still in a room with four gray walls, and strapped to a chair with ropes cutting into his skin. He hears two faint knocks, and the door opens. A part of him pray's that it's Sydney.

"Knock, knock!" Danny comes in smiling.

It's not her. Vaughn jsut looks at him, making sure to watch his every moves.

"How are we doing today?" He asks sarcastically.

"Where am I?" Vaughn states angry

"I'm sorry, but I don't understand your answer to the question." He continues in a sarcastic tone.

" Where am I?" Shouting at him again

The door opens, and a women enters. She stays behind the shadows, and speaks.

"Why darling.........I think he's waited long enough. I think it's time we tell him."

Vaughn curiously stares at the women, trying to figure out who she is. He can't make her out while behind the shadows, so he thinks of a way to get her to come out.

"Who's your wh***?" He shot back

Danny took a couple steps forward " You little........."

"Don't Danny! Nice try Mr. Vaughn, but I'm not ready to show myself just yet."

Vaughn just stares at her. "Where am I?" Getting more and more frustrated.

"Your still in France Mr. Vaughn. You never left." She states back.

"Why am I here?"

"Mmm....Time will tell (she pauses) but maybe if your little girlfriend Sydney shows up faster, it will all be over with soon." She smiles

"What do you want with sydney, you have me!" He says defensively, messing with the ropes tied to his hands.

She starts coming closer out of the shadows. "Your right......I do have you, but that's not enough. Once I have Sydney, then I will have everything."

"You stay the hell away from her!" He shouts angry

Both Danny and the women laughs. She steps closer to the light. Vaughn can tell she's skinny, but physically built. He knows she can handle herself.

"What are you going to do, stop me. (she says sarcastically) You of all people should know, I always get what I want........" She steps all the way out of the shadows, and in perfect view for Vaughn

" Anna......"

**Chicago, Illinois**
(Later that day, at the Chicago Art Museum)

Sydeny and Jack are walking into the enterance of the building, but Sydeny keeps her space.

"Sydney...."

"My name is Bridget!" In a firm tone.

"Well Bridget, you better start acting like my lovely daughter, before you ruin this." He states back in his own firm tone.

"You worry about you, and I will worry about myself."

At that point in time Brendon Smith comes walking up to them.

"Mr. Johnson I presume.(Jack nods) Might I say, you have a lovely daughter. Very beautiful!"

"Why thank you Mr. Smith."

"My name is Bridget Johnson, and I can't thank you enough for giving us the tour." in a sweetly voice

"Well, when your dad said you were very interested in Chicago's Fine Art, it was pretty much impossible to say no."

"Well that's my daddy for you!" She kisses her father on the cheeck, and rests her head on his shoulder.

The man just smiles "Shall we continue the tour then?" he asks

"Yes Please!" says sweetly, followed by a smile

Once the man takes Sydney and Jack behind the door, Sydney knocks him out. She locate's the surveillance room after knocking out a couple of guards. Jack ties the man up. Sydney begins disabling the camera's, while Jack get's the Rambaldi device.

"I'll meet you at the extraction point." Jack runs out of the room in search for the display with the device.

"Bootcamp this is Mountaineer, I have successfuly taken out the surveillane camera's." says through her eat piece.

"This is bootcamp, good job Mountaineer! Stay in position until I recieve word." Weiss responds back to Sydney in her ear piece.

"Copy that!"

Meanwhile, Jack finds the display, and notices a lock on the door to the display. He blows the lock, and takes it off. He opens the door, and goes to the display. Another lock keeps it from opening. He blows the other lock, but before he can get inside, he is attacked by guards. He successfuly takes them out, and continues on to the display. He opens the display only to find that it is empty with a singal note inside. He takes the note and reads it.

'Congratulations, You've Just Been Caught'

"Bootcamp this is Ranger, pull out it's a tra.........p......" A man pulls the ear piece out of Jack's ear, and cocks a gun to his head.

"Nice to see you again Jack." The man says sarcastically.

"Sark" Jack says angry.

"Bingo! Let's go!" Sark nudges Jack with his gun, and two guard take him away.

Meanwhile, Weiss confronts Sydney.

"Mountaineer this is Bootcamp, get out of there now. Ranger has been made, it's a trap. I repeat, get out now!"

"No, I have to go back and get Ranger first." She yelled back

"Damit, get out of there now, there's no time. That's and order!" He yelled back

"I'm sorry, I can't leave without him!"

"Damit Sydney it's a trap! Sydeny......"

The earipiece went dead on Weiss's end. Sydney and Jack were now on their own.

Sydney ran down the halls as fast as she could, trying to find the display. She followed the track of knocked out guards her father must have taken out. More guards attack her, but her sense of adrenalin kicks in, and knocks them all out. As she rounds a corner she noticed the display, and drew her gun. She walked passed the blown lock, and into the room.

"Dad........Dad!" She keeps yelling louder

Sydney looked around the room, and noticed the note. She read the note, and tears started to form in her eyes as she sank against the the wall. She turned on her earpiece, and spoke to Weiss.

"Bootcamp"

"Sydney..... Sydney is that you!" Weiss said panicked

"Bootcamp this is mountaineer, Ranger's been kidnapped. I'm on my way out!"

"Copy that mountaineer, I'll see you when you get here."

**France**
(Later that night)

Jack awakes and finds himslef strapped to a chair in a room similar to a room Vaughn is being held in. He blinks a couple of times, as the gash on his head that Sark must have caused pains him. He straightens when he hears the door open.

"Hello Jack" says the person

"Irena" he says cold, and bitter

"Nice to see you haven't forgotten about me!" She says sarcastically, as she moves closer to her prey.

"I wish I could, but you a constant pain in my ass!" He shouts back coldly.

Irena doesn't respond, she just stares at him.

"Cut the games, What do you want with me?" He asks

"Everything............and............Nothing!" She states back

"I should have killed you when I had the chance. A mistake I wont make again." He fires back

She smiles "You should of! Maybe you would have prevented the pain Sydney's about to endure."

"So help me God if you touch her, I will kill you!" He shouts back angry

"Well Jack, that's kind of hard if your dead!"

Irena pulls out a gun and points it at Jack.

"There's nothing left for us Jack. It endend twenty years ago, when Laura died."

BANG! The sound of a gun shot rang throught the four gray walls!


Note: Hey guys I hope you liked chapter 5! Let me know what you think!

Lauren :angelic:
 
THAT WAS SOOO GREAT!! ONce again, amazing. I luve this fic.

"I wish I could, but you a constant pain in my ass!" He shouts back coldly.

LMAO, a funny Jack, I never thought I'd see the day. Luve ya,
Danielle/Dani
 
Wow!! Those last couple of chapters were amazing!! This fic is truly incredible!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
 
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