Hey VH, I just read this story for the first time today. I have to admit it is the first fan fic I have opened. And it has left me deeply suspicious! <_<
You wrote so well, so in character, and with the exact voice of Jack, Sloane et al.
Are you sure you don't write for the show???
Anyway, as usual your words are a treat to read. And I share the sentiment of someone above who mentioned how pleased they were that you wrote them here! I have to tell you that my response to one of your columns was the first posting I have ever done on any website, ever, and your columns were my first introduction to a fan website. And aren't I glad I found them!