the path of darkness

sorry guys, but i've been extreamly busy lately and i promiss that i won't go that long without posting again. here's the next chapt. this part's longer than the rest of them.

chapter 3 part 2

the man pointed his gun at vaughn, he shot and missed they both got down and rolled off the couch. sydney started to giggle.

"come on this way"-vaughn wispered

the man heard vaughn talking and shot another bullet at him and missed again, the bullet hit the wall.

"hide in the bathroom"-sydney wispered in vaughn's ear

"why?"-vaughn wispered in her's

"because there are bullet-proof windows in there."-syd wispered back

"ok, but i just want to be with you."-vaughn wispered

"i'll be in the closet"-syd wispered

the man walked up behind them and shot. he missed that time too and the bullet hit the back of the chair.

vaughn and syd ran into the garage, got into vaughn's car and drove off to the CIA building leaving sark at vaughn's house.

"we've gotta go back and give him what he deserves."-syd

"i know, but we're better off going to the CIA about this rather than going after him ourselves."-vaughn

sydney agreed with vaughn and she they leaned over and kissed, short but still romantic. it was just the start of breaking protocal.

syd leaned into vaughn's chest and kissed him, all lips. vaughn kissed her back and the two of them kissed again.

vaughn realized that he wasn't paying attention to the road and quickly pulled away.

"what?"-syd

"we're not going to get anywhere if i'm not paying attention to the road.

syd giggled. a black truck got right behind vaughn's car and sark pointed his gun at the back of the car...

sorry, i didn't want to stop there, but in order for me to have a cliffhanger i have to stop there.
 
alright ppl here's the next part r/r

chapter 4 part 1

sark shot at a hole in the back of vaughn's car. they both looked back, sark shot again, hitting the windshield. sydney ducked,

"we better get there fast or he's going to blow apart the car."-sydney

"i know"-vaughn

sark shot again, this time hitting the back seat, vaughn ducked while trying to drive.

"go faster"-sydney

vaughn sped up to 80 mph and took a drive around 3 neighborhoods and finally lost him. sydney kissed vaughn, vaughn kissed her back, sydney kissed him again. finally vaughn wasn't paying attention to where he was going and crashed into a house, leaving the two of them unconcious in the up-side-down car.

two women and a man came running out of the house to see a car crashed into their living room window. the man went back into the house and called for an ambulance.

sorry but i have to stop there, everyone needs to eat dinner sometime.
 
alright ppl here's the next chapt

chapter 4 part 2

an ambulance arrived at 717 77th street along with three police cars and two firetrucks, syd and vaughn remained unconious. the two of them were removed from the up-side-down vehical and were gentally placed into the ambulance.

vaughn awoke in a hospitol room, away from syd, he was hoping she was ok. it all was his fault, and it was all because they wanted to get to the CIA faster.

in the lobby, jack sat among about a million empty chairs. he was praying that syd was ok. vaughn on the other hand, well he was hoping he was alive too.

a doctor walked over to him and handed him two folders.

"are they ok?"-jack

"if you want to see them, you can mr. bristow"-doctor

"take me to sydney, please."-jack

the doctor lead him to syd's room, room 3337, jack walked in.

"she's awake right?"

"of course she is."

syd's pov

my body ached, i wonder where vaughn is, i thought, hoping he was ok.
i looked over and saw that my leg was in a cast up to my knee and above it my thigh was bandaged from 2 days earlier, my wrist was also in a cast.
i looked up to see my dad looking over at me. if i didn't tell vaughn to speed this never would have happened.

no pov

"where's vaughn?"-syd

"he's across the hall"-doctor

"dad?"-syd

"hi sweetie, how are you feeling?"-jack

"i feel like hell and i'm so uncomfortable. i want to get out of here as soon as possible."-syd

"you have to stay for two blood tests and then you can leave."-doctor

"then on with the tests"-syd

"i need you to step out a minute mr. bristow."-doctor

jack walked out of the room and sat down on a chair in the hall. a nurse came in with the blood testers. syd gave the nuse her arm, the nurse opened the tester and grabbed an extra long needle and attached it to the tester. she stuck it through syd's belly button and it went through her back too.

"ow, ow,ow." and she grabbed the nurse's neck and squeazed it so hard she almost strangled her. syd wished that she squeazed harder. the doctor walked over to syd.

"are you ok?"-doctor

"ow, please get this thing out of me."-syd

the doctor got a surgon into her room, jack saw all the comotion and followed him in.

"i'm sorry we need to do emediate surgury to get a needle out of her stomach."-doctor

"what is going on? i thought she was in there to get some blood tests done."-jack

"yes, but the nurse was trying to kill her. i don't know why."-doctor

"dad" syd said in a weak voice

jack walked out of the room without hearing syd it all. he walked into vaughn's room.

"where is syd?"-vaughn

"she's alive for now, i don't know how long she will be though. i need to get some info so i'm going to have to leave you two here for a while."-jack

jack walked out of the hospitol...

two hours had gone by and the doctors hadn't made any progress on syd, but finally the surgon pulled out the needle with a pair of tweasers. the doctor went to the other side of the room and got two huge bandades and stuck one on her belly button and one over the spot on her back.

"thanks dr. what's your name?"-syd

"dr. loncus."-doctor

"thanks doctor loncus."-syd

and he wen to go get another nurse...

he came back with nurse shi-shi, he handed her two blood testers. she stuck the first one in syd's arm extreamly hard causing some blood to flow onto the floor.

doctor loncus saw what happened and grabbed nurse shi-shi.

"are you nurse calcoa?"-dr. loncus

"yes, now let me go."-nurse shi-shi

"no."-dr. loncus

the surgon took the tester out of syd's arm and put a huge bandade over it.
nurse calcoa got free and stuck the second tester in syd's upper arm. syd pulled away causing her skinto rip. she screamed in pain.

the surgon walked over and took the second tester out and quickly covered it with a huge bandade. the two doctors put nurse calcoa in a head lock.

jack back into vaughn's room,

"no info, i'm going to go check on syd ok."-jack

jack walked across the hall to syd's room...

"what is going on, that's nurse calcoa."-syd

"sir i'm sorry, hold on, can't you see we are having a problem here."-dr. loncus

"yah, and i want out."-syd

jack walked into syd's room and carried her out into the hall, he set her down on a chair out side the room and got her a wheelchair. he placed her in it and pushed her over to vaughn's room.

"hey."-vaughn

"don't ask."-syd

alright michael please come with me. jack helped him out of the bed and the two of them pushed sydney out of the hospital. they got to jack's car and they both helped syd into the backseat, vaughn sat down next to her.

jack got into the car and they drove off. syd kissed him, vaughn kissed her back and syd kissed him again.

she layed her head on vaughn's chest and put her leg on the seat. jack looked back at them he didn't even interfer, he saw that his daughter was happy and that was all that mattered.

by the time they got to jack's house syd was already asleep.

jack looked back...

"what can i say, she's so nice and kind and when she sleeps on you you can hardly feel her."-vaughn

"i promiss i will support you dating from now on, that is if you convince her to leave the CIA."-jack said as if he was on drugs

syd awoke and vaughn carried her to the front door, jack followed and opened the door. they all walked in.

"your're going to have to stay at my house, since nether of yours are safe."-jack

syd and vaughn looked over at the stairway to see what they never expected to see...

sorry guys but i had to stop so i could eat lunch
 
come on everyone please review i hate it when people read and they don't review anyway come on ppl i'm waiting and i have chapters 5-11 finished already and i won't post them till i get feed back
 
this is really good and a bit funny!! i love the part with them driving into the house that cracked me up!! but im a bit confused on the whole needle thing! maybe i need to read it again!! anyways great job!! :D (y)
 
It's good, really good! I like the way, that your keeping Sark's reason for Syd a mystery, for now. I love that you put Syd and Vaughn together. Your doing a great job, keep it up and post more soon!
 
alright, i think i'll be posting chapter 5 tomarrow but it depends if something comes up or not. if something comes up it won't be posting till monday
 
freelancer26 said:
alright ppl here's the next chapt

chapter 4 part 2

an ambulance arrived at 717 77th street along with three police cars and two firetrucks, syd and vaughn remained unconious. the two of them were removed from the up-side-down vehical and were gentally placed into the ambulance.

vaughn awoke in a hospitol room, away from syd, he was hoping she was ok. it all was his fault, and it was all because they wanted to get to the CIA faster.

in the lobby, jack sat among about a million empty chairs. he was praying that syd was ok. vaughn on the other hand, well he was hoping he was alive too.

a doctor walked over to him and handed him two folders.

"are they ok?"-jack

"if you want to see them, you can mr. bristow"-doctor

"take me to sydney, please."-jack

the doctor lead him to syd's room, room 3337, jack walked in.

"she's awake right?"

"of course she is."

syd's pov

my body ached, i wonder where vaughn is, i thought, hoping he was ok.
i looked over and saw that my leg was in a cast up to my knee and above it my thigh was bandaged from 2 days earlier, my wrist was also in a cast.
i looked up to see my dad looking over at me. if i didn't tell vaughn to speed this never would have happened.

no pov

"where's vaughn?"-syd

"he's across the hall"-doctor

"dad?"-syd

"hi sweetie, how are you feeling?"-jack

"i feel like hell and i'm so uncomfortable. i want to get out of here as soon as possible."-syd

"you have to stay for two blood tests and then you can leave."-doctor

"then on with the tests"-syd

"i need you to step out a minute mr. bristow."-doctor

jack walked out of the room and sat down on a chair in the hall. a nurse came in with the blood testers. syd gave the nuse her arm, the nurse opened the tester and grabbed an extra long needle and attached it to the tester. she stuck it through syd's belly button and it went through her back too.

"ow, ow,ow." and she grabbed the nurse's neck and squeazed it so hard she almost strangled her. syd wished that she squeazed harder. the doctor walked over to syd.

"are you ok?"-doctor

"ow, please get this thing out of me."-syd

the doctor got a surgon into her room, jack saw all the comotion and followed him in.

"i'm sorry we need to do emediate surgury to get a needle out of her stomach."-doctor

"what is going on? i thought she was in there to get some blood tests done."-jack

"yes, but the nurse was trying to kill her. i don't know why."-doctor

"dad" syd said in a weak voice

jack walked out of the room without hearing syd it all. he walked into vaughn's room.

"where is syd?"-vaughn

"she's alive for now, i don't know how long she will be though. i need to get some info so i'm going to have to leave you two here for a while."-jack

jack walked out of the hospitol...

two hours had gone by and the doctors hadn't made any progress on syd, but finally the surgon pulled out the needle with a pair of tweasers. the doctor went to the other side of the room and got two huge bandades and stuck one on her belly button and one over the spot on her back.

"thanks dr. what's your name?"-syd

"dr. loncus."-doctor

"thanks doctor loncus."-syd

and he wen to go get another nurse...

he came back with nurse shi-shi, he handed her two blood testers. she stuck the first one in syd's arm extreamly hard causing some blood to flow onto the floor.

doctor loncus saw what happened and grabbed nurse shi-shi.

"are you nurse calcoa?"-dr. loncus

"yes, now let me go."-nurse shi-shi

"no."-dr. loncus

the surgon took the tester out of syd's arm and put a huge bandade over it.
nurse calcoa got free and stuck the second tester in syd's upper arm. syd pulled away causing her skinto rip. she screamed in pain.

the surgon walked over and took the second tester out and quickly covered it with a huge bandade. the two doctors put nurse calcoa in a head lock.

jack back into vaughn's room,

"no info, i'm going to go check on syd ok."-jack

jack walked across the hall to syd's room...

"what is going on, that's nurse calcoa."-syd

"sir i'm sorry, hold on, can't you see we are having a problem here."-dr. loncus

"yah, and i want out."-syd

jack walked into syd's room and carried her out into the hall, he set her down on a chair out side the room and got her a wheelchair. he placed her in it and pushed her over to vaughn's room.

"hey."-vaughn

"don't ask."-syd

alright michael please come with me. jack helped him out of the bed and the two of them pushed sydney out of the hospital. they got to jack's car and they both helped syd into the backseat, vaughn sat down next to her.

jack got into the car and they drove off. syd kissed him, vaughn kissed her back and syd kissed him again.

she layed her head on vaughn's chest and put her leg on the seat. jack looked back at them he didn't even interfer, he saw that his daughter was happy and that was all that mattered.

by the time they got to jack's house syd was already asleep.

jack looked back...

"what can i say, she's so nice and kind and when she sleeps on you you can hardly feel her."-vaughn

"i promiss i will support you dating from now on, that is if you convince her to leave the CIA."-jack said as if he was on drugs

syd awoke and vaughn carried her to the front door, jack followed and opened the door. they all walked in.

"your're going to have to stay at my house, since nether of yours are safe."-jack

syd and vaughn looked over at the stairway to see what they never expected to see...

sorry guys but i had to stop so i could eat lunch
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"syd and vaughn looked over at the stairway to see what they never expected to see...

sorry guys but i had to stop so i could eat lunch"

Your story ist great!!! (y) !!!!But you are a kind of cruel, aren't you?! That's an evil cliffhanger :smiley:
 
Sorry- i didn't want to quote the whole thing- only the last two sentences- I'm new and you see to stupid to quote- i'm really sorry!!!!
 
it's ok i've been a member since january and i had someone make me a sig and i still don't know how to use it even with the sig instuctions.
 
ok ppl here's the next chapt

chapter 5

"mom?"-syd

"jack why didn't you tell me they were coming?"-irina

"two words: car crash."-vaughn

"oh my god."-irina

she ran over to syd and huged her.

"dad? why didn't you tell me?"-syd

"no one can tell even a soul in heaven about this, understand."-jack

"you helped her escape from FBI costody? i thought she died in kasmeir?"-vaughn

jack quickly shut the the front door and lead them to the second floor family room.

syd and vaughn sat down on the couch.

"ok everyone."-jack

irina sat down on a chair between syd and jack,

"kendall was never going to trust me and let me out of that cell so jack helped me escape in kasmier and i ended up living in this huge house never to be let out."-irina

"kendall thinks you're dead."-syd

"i did too for a while."-vaughn

"yes kendall does and it will stay that way, forever."

"we all did except for you" syd pointed at jack.

"so everyone is going to have to put up with eachother for itleast a week or so."-jack

"there's only one bed."-syd

"no their's two."-irina

sydney was confused.

"there's one on the third floor, we have a big house for a reason."-irina

"third floor?"-vaughn

"yah, the attic."-jack

"you can't be serious."-vaughn

"what's wrong?"-syd

"nothing"-vaughn

"it's furnished."-irina

"oh, good."-vaughn

"we've been wearing the same clothes for three days."-syd

"everyone except jack follow me."-irina

vaughn carried syd to the room across the hall still following irina, he put syd on the bed and sat down next to her.

"michael, is it?"-irina

"yah"-vaughn

"here."-irina and she threw a black linken park t-shirt over to him.

sydney looked extreamly confused.

"what? we can see concerts too."-irina and she threw another linken park t-shirt over to syd.

irina left the room. syd and vaughn looked over to see linken park, sum 41, simple plan, saliva, and trapt posters all over the walls.

"oh my god"-syd

"i know"-vaughn

and the two of them changed into their linken park t-shirts. vaughn started dancing on irina and jack's bed.

sorry ppl but i have to stop there
 
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