The Story Begins..

Thanks guys!! I'll try hard to get it up, I have to read through everyone's great writing before I type it up or else i'll never get it done.
 
Hey everyone!! Thanks for all the birthday wishes! I had a great birthday! Guess what! less than 10 hours 'til the finale!! YAY! Okay here is the new scene, sorry it's taken me so long to put it up, I've had writer's block, and yes it is short but I have another one, which is also short, but Iwill post it if I get enough reviews.....hint hint! Okay. Here it is!
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Scene: Plane heading home. Sydney and Kaylan are there, talking.
Sydney- When we get back to Los Angeles, we will go to the Op center, and you will be debriefed by an agent. Answer them as best you can, including every detail.
Kaylan- Where am I staying.
Sydney- I’m not sure, you could be staying with someone or at a safehouse.
Kaylan- How do I fit in to all of this?
Sydney- Well, you undoubtedly overheard Sark and the others have conversations, exchanging of intel. The CIA needs the intel to find Sloane, Derevko-
Kaylan- Who are they again?
Sydney- Let’s just say they are two people who don’t need to be free.
Kaylan- Oh. I heard someone say something about someone named Vaughn and that I’m related to them-
(Vaughn enters)
Sydney- Don’t you have perfect timing.
Vaughn- Talking about me?
Sydney- Actually, yes. (to Kaylan) Kaylan, this is the Vaughn you heard someone talking about. You are distant cousins.
Vaughn- Nice to meet you (Shakes her hand)
Kaylan- You too.
Sydney- Come sit, You have a lot to catch up on.
 
Hey- I'm reading it and I must say that you're doing a really really really really really really really really really good job (y) . I could never write something like this... :angelic: It's great. (y) I just read the whole story from the beginning again and now I think I get... ;) I had some problems before but i wasn't concentrated enough (Sorry!) :rolleyes: So please just continue- I'd like to read more :D (y) :woot:
 
hey!! Sorry I haven't posted in like 3 days, I've been really busy with school. Tell me this, Why do teachers give you more work now than in the middle of the year? OK well Here's the scene, it will be a while before the next one because I have to bring up a grade in like 2 weeks....... :angry: so I won't be able to write...... :( But I'll try! And yes I know it's short....I have writers block, and with no help from the finale, I have to totally rethink my entire storyline so that it goes with the show.....AAHH!
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Scene: Sydney’s house. Sydney and Vaughn are there.
Vaughn- Did anyone say what they were doing with Kaylan?
Sydney- No, she’s probably at a safehouse with an agent. (Walks toward bedroom, Vaughn follows)
Vaughn-Okay, then I’ll try to find out tomorrow.
Sydney- Let’s go dancing tomorrow night.
Vaughn- huh?
Sydney- I mean, there are a bunch of clubs in La. Assuming we don’t get sent somewhere halfway around the world, lets go dancing. (Sydney and Vaughn get into bed and turn off lights.)
 
I don't think I will, I have no idea where to go with this.... Thanks for the support. If anyone wants to do the story, they are welcome to it! PM me if you decide to though. Sorry!
 
That's sad............ really sad.............................................................................
.................................. :stretcher: :sorry: I also don't know how to continue but it's really sad(not continuing it) and even if i would know what to write (maybe I've got ideas when I'll take some time an think about it) u won't have much fun to read it 'cause i'm a bad writer : :confused: :confused: :thinking: :thinking:
 
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