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Right, firstly it's good to hear that people like it, so I am gonna post a few chapters, and the first should be up in about 1 hour or so.
P.S I can't promise a happy ending!
P.S I can't promise a happy ending!
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Chapter 8
Vaughn and Syd were back in Los Angeles. They had called a meeting with Kendall and the board of CIA governers to explain what had happened in Paris. Sydney and Vaughn entered the room and sat on the two vacant seats opposite the long table that seemed miles away from them. On the table sat Kendall and a number of other faces of people that were unfamiliar to both of them. They sat their looking as serious as ever, but this time they had a right to be. Questions needed to be anwered, and she knew herself and Vaughn couldn't answer a single one of them. She turned her attention to Kendall, who broke the silence by asking the first question.
"Can you please explain fully to us what exactly went on in Paris, Agent Bristow!", he asked.
"I can tell you what happened, although I doubt you will be able to make any sense of it", she replied waiting for a reply.
"Let us be the judge of that, Miss Bristow".
So she did just that. She sat there and told them exactly what had occured, with Vaughn backing up everything she said. As soon as she told then everyhthing, they sat there but as usual Kendall had something to say.
"Did I just hear that right? He shot himself?"
Sydney replied,"Yes, it's like he was scared of me. from what I saw it's like he would have rather take his own life than mine or die rather than telling me what he knew. I know it has something to do with Sloane, but more to do with my mother....I mean Irina Derevko. I don't understand what's going to happen, but I know something big is coming and we better be ready for it.
At this point, Kendall and the rest of the CIA board members all look not as uptight as before, know they seem worried. Suddenly a board member speaks up, "What do you think is coming and why may I ask do you think it involves Irina Deverko?"
"The last thing thing that Mitchoff said to me before he...Anyway, the last thing he said to me, it struck a nerve and it sent a shiver down my spine. The last thing he said was,"She is the coming".
Kendall sat back in his chair as the other members sat their whispering to each other about what they had just been told. Vaughn and Sydney glanced at each other with worrying looks.
Vaughn and Syd were back in Los Angeles. They had called a meeting with Kendall and the board of CIA governers to explain what had happened in Paris. Sydney and Vaughn entered the room and sat on the two vacant seats opposite the long table that seemed miles away from them. On the table sat Kendall and a number of other faces of people that were unfamiliar to both of them. They sat their looking as serious as ever, but this time they had a right to be. Questions needed to be anwered, and she knew herself and Vaughn couldn't answer a single one of them. She turned her attention to Kendall, who broke the silence by asking the first question.
"Can you please explain fully to us what exactly went on in Paris, Agent Bristow!", he asked.
"I can tell you what happened, although I doubt you will be able to make any sense of it", she replied waiting for a reply.
"Let us be the judge of that, Miss Bristow".
So she did just that. She sat there and told them exactly what had occured, with Vaughn backing up everything she said. As soon as she told then everyhthing, they sat there but as usual Kendall had something to say.
"Did I just hear that right? He shot himself?"
Sydney replied,"Yes, it's like he was scared of me. from what I saw it's like he would have rather take his own life than mine or die rather than telling me what he knew. I know it has something to do with Sloane, but more to do with my mother....I mean Irina Derevko. I don't understand what's going to happen, but I know something big is coming and we better be ready for it.
At this point, Kendall and the rest of the CIA board members all look not as uptight as before, know they seem worried. Suddenly a board member speaks up, "What do you think is coming and why may I ask do you think it involves Irina Deverko?"
"The last thing thing that Mitchoff said to me before he...Anyway, the last thing he said to me, it struck a nerve and it sent a shiver down my spine. The last thing he said was,"She is the coming".
Kendall sat back in his chair as the other members sat their whispering to each other about what they had just been told. Vaughn and Sydney glanced at each other with worrying looks.
krisAll4Alias
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Great story! Please keep posting. I wish I had that much imagination to write a fan fiction. Keep up the good work.
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smegheadalways
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I will post more chapters as often as I can and just a quick message to krisAll4Alias, if I can write fanfic then trust me, anyone can!
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Chapter 9
Aboad a plane Irina, Sark and Sloane sit discussing their take over of the CIA head quarters.
"There will be fifty high qualified field agents that will assist us in the take over. They will meet us in Los Angeles.", Sloane tells Irina.
"That should be more than enough, if my plan goes as follows then we will will be within the possession of the Rambaldi artifect within a matter of hours!", she informs Sloane.
Sark justs sits there listening to them discus their course of action and types on his laptop.
Sloane, "What about resistance?"
Irina, "We will take no hostages, we will do what we have to in order to gain possession of the artifect."
Sloane, "Good, and what about...
Irina, "Sydney....it's not your job to worry about her, it's mine.
Sloane,"But our agreement, you know what you have to do."
Irina, "Yes I do, thank you!"
Sloane,"What if she isn't there?"
Irina,"She will be, I can assure that!"
Sloane,"Fine, but you know that the plan needs her......well it needs her to work".
Irina,"Don't you think I know that. I know what must be done!"
A Short chapter but I am still contemplating which way to go with this, does anyone mind if it goes a bit sci-fi, not OTT I promise!
Aboad a plane Irina, Sark and Sloane sit discussing their take over of the CIA head quarters.
"There will be fifty high qualified field agents that will assist us in the take over. They will meet us in Los Angeles.", Sloane tells Irina.
"That should be more than enough, if my plan goes as follows then we will will be within the possession of the Rambaldi artifect within a matter of hours!", she informs Sloane.
Sark justs sits there listening to them discus their course of action and types on his laptop.
Sloane, "What about resistance?"
Irina, "We will take no hostages, we will do what we have to in order to gain possession of the artifect."
Sloane, "Good, and what about...
Irina, "Sydney....it's not your job to worry about her, it's mine.
Sloane,"But our agreement, you know what you have to do."
Irina, "Yes I do, thank you!"
Sloane,"What if she isn't there?"
Irina,"She will be, I can assure that!"
Sloane,"Fine, but you know that the plan needs her......well it needs her to work".
Irina,"Don't you think I know that. I know what must be done!"
A Short chapter but I am still contemplating which way to go with this, does anyone mind if it goes a bit sci-fi, not OTT I promise!
*SaMs SwEeThEaRt*
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Great story! This has always been a good story and it keeps getting better and better!
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Chapter 10
Back in Los Angeles Vaughn and Syd are playing Hockey. It's a way for them to distance themselves from what has happened within the last few days. But they know they have to talk about it, about what had happened in Paris, so Sydney decides to break the ice.
Sydney: "I know we don't want to think about it. We've been through so many things and yet we've survived, but the prophecy, or the coming whatever i've got a bad feeling".
Vaughn: "I thought you didn't believe the 'prophecy'?"
Sydney: "I don't......I mean, oh I don't know. At first my first impression when I was told about page 47, was that it was a mistake, and that there was no way it was possible. I was the one who the CIA thought the page was about, and then my mother, I knew she was alive. I guess, what has happened over the past month or so, it's made me think. Remember, the church, the people who went on fire there's no way that's right. I'm starting to think, well it could be true".
Vaughn:"You really think that the prophecy, the coming, whatever you want to call it, is true?"
Sydney: "All I know is that things have happened this past year, and it alls goes back to Rambaldi. We know his devices work, while I was at SD-6 you saw the things I recovered, the clock, the sun that pointed to an exact place at an exact time. Whoever he was he made inventions hundreds of years of ago, and they work this day, don't you think that's weird? Now Sloane, my mother and Sark are using this work and have created a bomb, that sets people alight from the inside and water that you when someone comes into contact with, kills within days".
Vaughn looks up at her taking into account what she says, and trying to come to his own conclusion.
Sydney: "Both my mother and Sloane where obsessed with his work. I think the red ball and the clock, there just the beginning and something is coming, and it involves my mother and we won't be able to stop it"!
More soon, if I'm dragging it out for too long just tell!
Back in Los Angeles Vaughn and Syd are playing Hockey. It's a way for them to distance themselves from what has happened within the last few days. But they know they have to talk about it, about what had happened in Paris, so Sydney decides to break the ice.
Sydney: "I know we don't want to think about it. We've been through so many things and yet we've survived, but the prophecy, or the coming whatever i've got a bad feeling".
Vaughn: "I thought you didn't believe the 'prophecy'?"
Sydney: "I don't......I mean, oh I don't know. At first my first impression when I was told about page 47, was that it was a mistake, and that there was no way it was possible. I was the one who the CIA thought the page was about, and then my mother, I knew she was alive. I guess, what has happened over the past month or so, it's made me think. Remember, the church, the people who went on fire there's no way that's right. I'm starting to think, well it could be true".
Vaughn:"You really think that the prophecy, the coming, whatever you want to call it, is true?"
Sydney: "All I know is that things have happened this past year, and it alls goes back to Rambaldi. We know his devices work, while I was at SD-6 you saw the things I recovered, the clock, the sun that pointed to an exact place at an exact time. Whoever he was he made inventions hundreds of years of ago, and they work this day, don't you think that's weird? Now Sloane, my mother and Sark are using this work and have created a bomb, that sets people alight from the inside and water that you when someone comes into contact with, kills within days".
Vaughn looks up at her taking into account what she says, and trying to come to his own conclusion.
Sydney: "Both my mother and Sloane where obsessed with his work. I think the red ball and the clock, there just the beginning and something is coming, and it involves my mother and we won't be able to stop it"!
More soon, if I'm dragging it out for too long just tell!
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Chapter 11
Irina, Sark and Sloane are in what looks like the back of a van, which is filled with equipment and weaponary.
Sloane: "You know the plan?"
Irina looks at him just like she did on the plane, with a hint of annoyance. "Of course I know. She looks at Sark who's sitting next to her. "You are aware of what you have to do?"
Sark: At first he stares at her for a second and then throws a quick glance over at Sloane, "Yes".
Irina: "Ok then".
She opens the van and they are in some sort of alley way. As she goes to step out, Sark uses a radio and signals them to move, as Irina's feet touch the floor you see her look around and as she does so you can see there are 5 more vans and the doors suddenly open.
More soon Fan Fic readers, so what do you think so far or ?
Irina, Sark and Sloane are in what looks like the back of a van, which is filled with equipment and weaponary.
Sloane: "You know the plan?"
Irina looks at him just like she did on the plane, with a hint of annoyance. "Of course I know. She looks at Sark who's sitting next to her. "You are aware of what you have to do?"
Sark: At first he stares at her for a second and then throws a quick glance over at Sloane, "Yes".
Irina: "Ok then".
She opens the van and they are in some sort of alley way. As she goes to step out, Sark uses a radio and signals them to move, as Irina's feet touch the floor you see her look around and as she does so you can see there are 5 more vans and the doors suddenly open.
More soon Fan Fic readers, so what do you think so far
or ?
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Vote, Should I have an ending 1 or 2? Which would you prefer happy or not so happy?
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Chapter 12
Out of the doors step Irina's 'help'. As she looks up and gives her infamous smirk with Sark standing next to her, we see what she's looking at, it's the CIA headquarters.
Sloane follows her stepping out of the van. Irina walks over to the field agents and gives them their instructions. She walks back over to Sloane and Sark who are waiting for her to instruct them.
Irina: "It's obvious that we will not be able to go through the front door however there's another way. When I was visited by Sydney there's was a entrance that she used. To gain entrance she follow a certain set of tasks to gain entry, this will be are way in!"
Sloane looks at her puzzled, "How do you know this?"
Irina: "Jack told me", but Sloane didn't seem convinced. "Since the down fall of SD-6 she no longer uses this entrances and acording to my sources it has been closed off, but that won't stop us."
Sloane looked at Irina. He saw the fire in her eyes, the burning for what she wanted, it was a rush for her. He smiled at her, realising what his thoughts were she turned her attention to the field agents and Sark. "Let's move!"
They return to their vehicles and follow Irina, Sloane and Sark.
As they approach the underpass, and they stop. Irina looks at Sloane and this time gives him a smile, he returns it as he knows that within a few hours they will or they hope to be in possession on the Rambladi artifect.
At this point they are waiting as a field agent tries to scramble the code for access at the telephone point. Irina grow impatient.
Irina:" The code is 234 345 647", as soon as she says this the man turns around and looks at her.
Sloane: "How do you know that?"
Irina: "Just try it?", with this the agent types in the code and the door opens. There are security cameras at each check point, however within a matter of minutes that won't be a problem. Sloane knows what is going to happen. The look in the van and watch the survelliance they have from outside CIA headquarters, there's a moment of silence and then they see an explosion on the monitor. We see explosion after explosion.
Irina: "Phase one done, all security survelliance is out but only for 3 minutes and all check points are vacant as she looks at the screen and sees the agents run to see what is going on. ,
Irina: "OK need to move now"!
A number of agents walk through the door checking that all is clear. Irina follows them with her gun in her hand, yet she seems as confident as ever she was.
Sark looks at Sloane, "After you Sir". Sloane then follows her and we see Sa for the first time Sark smile to himself before he follows and then shuts the door behind him.
Hope you like it!
Out of the doors step Irina's 'help'. As she looks up and gives her infamous smirk with Sark standing next to her, we see what she's looking at, it's the CIA headquarters.
Sloane follows her stepping out of the van. Irina walks over to the field agents and gives them their instructions. She walks back over to Sloane and Sark who are waiting for her to instruct them.
Irina: "It's obvious that we will not be able to go through the front door however there's another way. When I was visited by Sydney there's was a entrance that she used. To gain entrance she follow a certain set of tasks to gain entry, this will be are way in!"
Sloane looks at her puzzled, "How do you know this?"
Irina: "Jack told me", but Sloane didn't seem convinced. "Since the down fall of SD-6 she no longer uses this entrances and acording to my sources it has been closed off, but that won't stop us."
Sloane looked at Irina. He saw the fire in her eyes, the burning for what she wanted, it was a rush for her. He smiled at her, realising what his thoughts were she turned her attention to the field agents and Sark. "Let's move!"
They return to their vehicles and follow Irina, Sloane and Sark.
As they approach the underpass, and they stop. Irina looks at Sloane and this time gives him a smile, he returns it as he knows that within a few hours they will or they hope to be in possession on the Rambladi artifect.
At this point they are waiting as a field agent tries to scramble the code for access at the telephone point. Irina grow impatient.
Irina:" The code is 234 345 647", as soon as she says this the man turns around and looks at her.
Sloane: "How do you know that?"
Irina: "Just try it?", with this the agent types in the code and the door opens. There are security cameras at each check point, however within a matter of minutes that won't be a problem. Sloane knows what is going to happen. The look in the van and watch the survelliance they have from outside CIA headquarters, there's a moment of silence and then they see an explosion on the monitor. We see explosion after explosion.
Irina: "Phase one done, all security survelliance is out but only for 3 minutes and all check points are vacant as she looks at the screen and sees the agents run to see what is going on. ,
Irina: "OK need to move now"!
A number of agents walk through the door checking that all is clear. Irina follows them with her gun in her hand, yet she seems as confident as ever she was.
Sark looks at Sloane, "After you Sir". Sloane then follows her and we see Sa for the first time Sark smile to himself before he follows and then shuts the door behind him.
Hope you like it!
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I write more, but Iwant replies. I don't know why exactly, it sort of gives me a boost. It's sad I know!
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Just a note to all dna fic readers, after I finsh this storyt I wanna know hat you esnt to read. Give me some ideas of what you want for storeies, P.S if mny spelling is a bit bad tell us cos I'm a bit drunk!
Bondgal2007
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I LOVE it!!!!!!~!
bluheart13
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yeah i like it too.
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:angry: :eekhair: 
:lame: :madfire: I wrote like 2 chapters which where sooooooooooo long and they have gone, I'm devestated. They took me hours, I don't know if I can right more!
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Just to let whoever reads this know, I have slightly recovered from my trauma of losing all my two chapters which to be honest I was quite pleased of, so if I get quite a few replies then I will bring myself to write it again! But only if I get enough replies cos there's no point writing it then, anyway see ya soon!
And it seems that my summary of my fan-fic is gone, what the hell has happened, have I been blocked or something, I'm kinda lost! :blink:
And it seems that my summary of my fan-fic is gone, what the hell has happened, have I been blocked or something, I'm kinda lost! :blink: