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The unexpected visitor

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by IluvVaughn13, May 16, 2003.

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  1. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    chapter one-two days

    It was so hard to get myself back in order, I still couldnt believe its been over
    two years, I Thought it was two days. I dont know how I got there, when I got
    there, or who did this to me. I wake up everyday crying not knowing why this has
    happened, I pinched my self to see if I was dreaming.

    I walked into the CIA, I felt like everyone was looking at me. Then saw something
    that would ruin my whole day, Vaughn with some other agent. I wiped the tear
    from my cheek and kept on walking.

    "Syd Syd " I heard a small but familar voice
    "Marshall!" I yelled so happy to see him
    I hugged him tight and stared again to cry. I couldnt keep it in what could I do,
    I missed everyone, even though I didnt think it was that long.
    "Sydney, how are you" I turned and already knew It was ack, he held me so tight.
    "Im sorry Idont remember Dad"
    "Its ok Sydney, its ok"

    "I walked over to my desk, everything was still the same. I guess they had
    hoped that I would be back. I took a deep breathe and looked around. Iwas shocked
    to see Irina walking around, my eyes grew big. What was she doing here.
    "Dad !" I yelled
    "Sydney are you ok"
    "Why is Mom here"
    "She has been working here, she helped us steal back some rambaldi artifacts from Sloane.
    "She has really helped us"
    "Your just letting her walk around?"
    "Sydney think you need somemore rest"

    I just couldnt take this anymore. My mother, someone who my dad never trusted
    was working for the CIA, Vaughn was getting married, My father was acting really
    strange. What was going on.
    I headed for the door as fast as I could not look back. I stopped when I hit the sidewalk.
    I fell down and started to cry again, I dont know why Icouldnt keep this in. The I looked
    down at my scar, It was hurting and Ifelt a strange pain.
    "Sydney, Sydney" I heard behind me but I couldnt look back
     
  2. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    i like it post more soon
     
  3. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    Thanks the next chapter is a shocking chapter
     
  4. Ilikesloane

    Ilikesloane Rocket Ranger

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    wow that was really good. Right more you are doing a really good and great start
     
  5. feeling_like_a_spy

    feeling_like_a_spy Rocket Ranger

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    oo yay post more soon!! :P
     
  6. sbmv12

    sbmv12 Rocket Ranger

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    Ok, i'm soo not lieing here when I say this story (and all your other storys) is amazing!!

    :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

    ~Kyle~
     
  7. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    chapter two- Is it really him?


    I turned around to see Weiss runing up to me out of breath.
    "Where are you going ?"
    "I just need to go home Weiss, right now Idont feel like I should be here"
    "Sydney if you ever need too--"
    "Weiss Im fine"
    I just couldnt listen to people feeling sorry for me, I just wanted to go home.
    I reached the park before home, I sat on the grass, to watch the fish in the pond.
    My fingers made circles through the water, the fish came up to the top to see if Iwas
    going to feed them. It was so quiet at the park, no children where there, nobody
    talking long walks, know one. I felt really alone.

    When Igot home I saw will sleeping on the couch, it looked like he was going somewhere.
    He was all dressed up in a tuxedo and a tie.
    "Will?"
    "Syd, sydney, Oh my gosh your home, where have you been?"
    "I--"
    "Oh man im late, so sorry Syd have a dinner to get to" He picked up all of his stuff
    kissed my cheek and left.
    I was really bored, nothing was on tv and I didnt feel like eating.
    I decided to go on another walk, just so I could get fresh air.

    I took along walk, the stars where really bright tonight, the wind was cold as It hit my face.
    I ll I could think about was Vaughn, I really missed him.
    His smile, his wonderful words, and of course his eyes.
    I wanted to talk to him, I know his is with someone else but I need to talk to him.
    I reached is house, I had never been there before, I didnt realize how far away it was.
    I started up thr steps but then I head someone call my name.
    "Sydney is that you."
    I coulndt see his face until he came into the light.
    My hands started to shake and I couldnt breathe,Ill I could do was say.....
    "DANNY?"
     
  8. feeling_like_a_spy

    feeling_like_a_spy Rocket Ranger

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    :o can't wait to see what's next!
     
  9. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    Thanks so much!!!
     
  10. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    arrr- is danny good or evil?
    That's great. (y) And there happens so much- I'm a little confused but i think it'll clear up when you post more...
    :woot:
     
  11. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    did you split syd and vaughn up :shock:
     
  12. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    please post chapter three! ooo
     
  13. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    hahaha im glad you all are liking this Iwill post the next chapter today I promise
     
  14. Jen-Jen

    Jen-Jen Rocket Ranger

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    this is awsome how did you come up with this??? write more soon i need to know what happens and why where who how????? (y) (y) (y) :D :o :woot: :woot:
     
  15. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    Chapter three- Is it really you?

    "Danny, I--" I couldnt even speak
    "Sydney I know this is hard, I cant explian this, Ieed your help"
    "With what?" I said still in shock.
    "I need you to get a file for me on Sloane"
    "Danny i cant do that, wait how do you know about Sloane?"
    "How did you find all this out, Danny need you to tell me"
    "I cant, I need the file" He looked so serious and he wasnt acting like himself.
    "I have to go I cant do this now, you dont understand"
    "I know you have been missing"
    "your really scaring me now" I couldnt stand this anymore
    "I have to go, Im sorry" Istarted the car and started to back out.
    He tapped on my window and tried to get me to stop
    "I sorry Syd, I still love you"
    Tears were now running down my face, why did he have to say that.

    I got home and went right into my room. I cried myself to sleep that
    night, I thought about Danny, but missed Vaughn more.
    At this moment Vaughn would be holding me in his arms, telling
    me everything is going to be ok.

    Vaughn's POV

    "Hey Erica what are you doing tonight"
    "Well actually Ihave plans, sorry Vaughn" she said with a sacrastic voice
    " Oh thats ok, later then I guess"

    She left like she was late for something, She has been acting really odd latley.
    Its been like this since Sydney came back, maybe she was worried.
    I do miss Syd though, today All Icould do was stare at her. Her tears in her eyes
    just tore me apart.

    "Vaughn, have you talked to syd yet"
    "Weiss do you really think she will want to talk to me?"
    "She might, you never know man, just call her"
    "Ya I think I will"

    "Hello"
    "Sydney its Vaughn"
    "Hi--"
    "How are you, I really wanted to talked to you"
    "Im ok, just a little umm tired"
    "Whats wrong, it sound like you have been crying"
    "Vaughn I-- umm Ihave to go, but can you call me in an hour please"
    "Sure I--"
    But she hung up before Icould say anything else something was wrong.

    "Vaughn you have to see this" Weiss said with a worried tone
    "Look" He pointed to a picture that was brought back from hong kong.
    It was around the time Sydney and I were leaving.
    "Vaughn look at the people standing next to the building"
    I couldnt believe what I was seeing it couldnt be----
     
  16. feeling_like_a_spy

    feeling_like_a_spy Rocket Ranger

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    duh duh DUUUUH! (that was creepy scary music)
     
  17. Moriel

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    great chapt i love this fic post more ASAP
     
  18. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    this is great and love the cliffhangers!! i hope you post more soon!!
     
  19. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    thanks Iwill post more tommorrow
     
  20. Xtremelimits08

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    WOW this is great post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     

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