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Then and Now

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Chanel, Jun 18, 2003.

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  1. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    A Young Romance now called Then and Now
    Author: Chanel
    Rating: PG 13… I guess?
    Summary: Sydney recalls her life in 7th grade.


    Chapter 1~ And No One Remembered
    The tears spread across Sydney’s face. Her every move was slowed down by the fact that her world was over. She stood in the middle of the empty hall. There were muffled sounds echoing but nothing like the sound of silent weeping.
    She had just gotten out of first period. Nothing had been wrong when she walked into the building but as she walked out of Mr. Defer’s class she felt as if she was a bug, stomped and stepped on in the once crowded hallway. She sighed, and started running toward her locker, hoping no one would meet her along the way.
    It was one of the last days of school. Being gone for a month was a vacation she needed badly. It took a lot of strength to go back. With all the grief going through her thoughts she thought her friends might be able to comfort her, but instead they deserted her.
    The weird thing coming back to school two months ago was that no one remembered her. Except for one person, his name was Michael. He was in her math class. She hadn’t remembered him, but when he ran up to her locker, her first day back and whispered in her ear, “I really missed you,” she knew that he was going to be a good friend.
    As she ran down the hallway he hoped that he would not be there. IN a strange way she felt butterflies and really wanted his support, but she didn’t want him to see her like this.
    Sydney also hoped that the “friends” she had wouldn’t be lingering in the hall like they usually do 2nd period. To her relief no one was there. She put her “junk” into the locker and ran down the stairs into the bright hallway.
    She ran right past the principal, and out the front door. She ran past the library, her favorite place to hang out, and pass her old “friends’” houses, she even ran past her own house, knowing that her father wouldn’t be there to comfort her. She ran until she could run no more. She ran all the way to Michael’s house. She sat on those steps crying until finally Michael came home and found her sitting there.


    yep its short but i wrote it in between 2 finals.. enjoy. this is antoher reason ARLTB is slow... and partly because of The Followers.. which u shoudl read.. if i havent posted in a while. ENJOY!
     
  2. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    this is cute.I hate "friends" like that
    write more soon
     
  3. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    same here evil "friends" good story
     
  4. awwww... that's so cute. I love it! more please! very very very very very very soon.
    --Mandy :angelic:
     
  5. Alias_luver33

    Alias_luver33 Rocket Ranger

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    Aaaww!! That was sooooooo cute!! I feel sorry for Syd, she has no one to comfort her.......but Michael!! This is gonna be great!! If this isn't too much to ask, can you pwweaasee PM me when you write more? Thanks. Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more! Post more!

    ~Shammi~
     
  6. vaughnobsessed

    vaughnobsessed Captain

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    He missed her that is sooooooooooo cute!
    :P
     
  7. kate_jones

    kate_jones Rocket Ranger

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    That was so cute! I'd love it if some guy whispered that to me! So she knew Michael when they were younger? Are you going to go back to the future next? Well, I'll just wait and see. Good job!
    ~kate
     
  8. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    welll are you guys ready for more?? i will mp.. buti want to know if u guys want more.. and future is coming ooon. this willl be pdated everynw and then. but sofar i got alot done so theres a lot to post. tell me!?
     
  9. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    yayay need more!!
     
  10. Aliasfan23

    Aliasfan23 Rocket Ranger

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    This is great! I love it! I want more! Can you PM me when you update!? Please!
     
  11. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

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    Can I get a PM? I like the story so far its good!
     
  12. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Can I get a PM?? I love this story so far!
     
  13. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    Awww I like this story already...it sounds really good....can I get a PM too??? pretty please...thanks..

    timmy :blink:
     
  14. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    yep dfinately everyone!!! i wanna post more but... i cant find my floppy more soon.
     
  15. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
     
  16. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    uh oh...... floppy not wroking.. well heres a llittle bi that was saeved on my comp/.... just a little spoiler...

    “Jack Bristow speaking,” Jack answered the phone. By reading the Caller ID he saw that it was Sydney’s school. Without much care he picked up the phone.
    “Ummm… Mr. Bristow, we have a situation.”


    hope u liek it.. i want to include irina soon.. ehhehe so evil :evil grin:

    ~CHANEL~ :redhair:
     
  17. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    Ohhh evil spoiler!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  18. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    uh oh...... floppy not wroking.. well heres a llittle bi that was saeved on my comp/.... just a little spoiler...

    “Jack Bristow speaking,” Jack answered the phone. By reading the Caller ID he saw that it was Sydney’s school. Without much care he picked up the phone. “Ummm… Mr. Bristow, we have a situation.”

    heheh i hope to include iina soon... hheheh :evil grin:

    ~CHANEL~ :redhair:
     
  19. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    isnt that what you just posted?????????
     
  20. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    YAYYA! foudn the loppy and it worked.. one ? how do u spell clichey? like clicky.. groupy... i wanna know then i can continue
     

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