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Vaughn

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by darrel_doomvomit, Mar 3, 2003.

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  1. darrel_doomvomit

    darrel_doomvomit Scout

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    First Alias Fic. Very Very Short. i can't write anything else. haha.



    Disclaimer: none of this belongs to me. Excepting the premise, obviously.

    Title: Vaughn

    Summary: super short super fluff. The only thing I can write. S/V


    Michael and Sydney walked in the front doors of the CIA building hand in hand. Michael stuffed his hand deep into the left pocket of his pants and turned to Sydney.
    “Well, that was the best long weekend of my entire life. ” he said grin the size of Nunavut, right as Kendall yelled their names. Michael sighed and began to drag Sydney impatiently towards the conference room. With a frown, Sydney hesitated.
    “I want to talk to my mother.”
    Michael knew Sydney really needed to talk with her mother, and was about to let her go when he caught sight of Kendall’s face. “I think Irina will have to wait, Syd. Kendall looks really worried.”
    Sydney gave in to Michael’s green eyes and followed him to the door.
    “"Aah, Agent’s Bristow and Vaughn, how nice of you to join us.”
    As Kendall turned to go into the room, Sydney was seized with a slight bought of insanity.
    “Vaughn.” She stated simply. “Pardon me, Agent Bristow?” “It’s Agent Vaughn now, sir.”

    Just then, Jack Bristow had a minor heart attack and collapsed on the floor.


    The End.
     
  2. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Not sure if I'm liking this or not. That was almost too short.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  3. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    Hmm... Poor Jack! :o
     
  4. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    hahahahahahahaha it kinda looks like my english papars (although that wasnt a compliment it wasnt an insult, it just reminda me of me) add more REALY fluff though, you should write about the weekend
     
  5. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    what happen with vaughns name she has to call hiom agent vaughn ahh confused too short need more.......
     
  6. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    That was sort of confusing! Need more info!
     
  7. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    NO THATS NOT AN ENDING!!! THATS AN EPILOGUE!!! WRITE MORE!!!
     
  8. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    i had to red it twice before i got it, but i think that sydney is telling kendall to call her agent vaughn b/c they had just got married
     
  9. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Calm down, chick. I'm sure we'll get an explain soon enough.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  10. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Geez you guys...I almost fell over laughing...maybe 'cause I read it fast. That was really funny...when you read it fast. :P
     
  11. alias_16

    alias_16 Rocket Ranger

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    im confused.....
     
  12. SpyGurl001

    SpyGurl001 Rocket Ranger

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    Wow that was so short it left my head spinning! Its good but I think you need to add more to it!


    ~KM :angelic:
     
  13. ILuvMichael

    ILuvMichael Rocket Ranger

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    confusion...need clearing up
     
  14. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    very nice! short and sweet...

    so far. :rolleyes:
     
  15. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    LOL! This was funny! I almost fell over too I was laughing so hard!
     
  16. fanfic_critic

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    too funny! :LOL:

    :ROFLMAO: :thumbup:
     
  17. SydB_JenG

    SydB_JenG Rocket Ranger

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    LOL!! omg that was hilarious!!!! haha!! Woo! I need to breathe loL!
     
  18. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    Im confused....

    -VL
     
  19. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    ...........oy?..........
     
  20. aliasgurl

    aliasgurl Rocket Ranger

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    yea! vaughn n syd got married. that was kinda confusing n i had to read it twice before i got it but i liked it. it was kinda funny how jack had a heart attack cuz he was so suprised. but u kno..i hope u dont kill him lol cuz that would be pretty mean.
     

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