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Where did Sydney go?

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Alias_addict, Jun 24, 2003.

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  1. Alias_addict

    Alias_addict Rocket Ranger

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    This is my first fic so any suggestions are very much welcome! tell me if u want me to write more or if i should stop! hope u like it!

    Disclaimer: i do not own anything of Alias, it belongs to JJ Abrams!
    Rating: PG
    Summary: Sydney leaves the CIA without saying anything to Vaughn ________________________________________________________________________________
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    Chapter 1

    Agent Vaughn usually loved going into the CIA, he didn’t care about the work anymore as long as he got to spend time with Sydney Bristow. After sleepless nights wondering where she could be and who had taken her, he had reluctantly moved on with his life although he still thought of Sydney every waking moment. But now he dreaded that thought of entering the doors of the government building, he was married and his true love had been found yet he couldn’t have her. He hated the fact that he wasn’t with her and facing her was the worst torture he had ever been forced to endure.
    He walked into the dull building slowly blaming himself for every thing that was going wrong right now. He pasted Sydney’s desk only to be surprised that it had been cleared out. There was nothing there just a computer and key-bored. He ran over to Weiss who knew just as much as he did. Worried he went to see Kendel (though he doubted it would help at all). In fact to his surprise Kendel told him exactly why her desk was cleared…she had resigned from the CIA. Vaughn was in total shock he could not believe his ears she was gone. He would never see her now. He went to his desk in a total daze and noticed an envelope awaiting him. He opened it holding back tears because he already knew who the letter was from. He opened carefully and read it silently:

    To Vaughn:
    I am so sorry to do this, believe me it is the last thing I want to do but it is best for me. I regret not ever telling you that I love you and I still feel that way now but obviously I can’t be with you and I don’t think I can accept seeing you every day and knowing that I want more than a relationship as friends. You will always be in my heart and I will never forget you ever!
    Love, Sydney

    With that Vaughn started sobbing and Weiss saw the letter and understood. Weiss knew it would be hard for Vaughn over the next while and he promised he would do everything he could for his best friend.
     
  2. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

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    Keep going. Pm when you post the next chapter.
     
  3. aliasgirl89

    aliasgirl89 Rocket Ranger

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    That was good, keep writting I can't wait to find out what Vaughn does!
    PM me when you write another chapter!
    ~ASH~
     
  4. alias_luver

    alias_luver Rocket Ranger

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    Great start!! I cant wait for more!!
     
  5. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    Oh, you have to keep going! (Tear) for Vaughn, that is so sad. I like it, and very interested in to see what is going to happen next! Can you pm me when you update? Awesome start, can't wait for more!

    Oh, and my only suggestion, which I think is everybody's is that Vaughn breaks up with whatever thing he is married to, and goes after his women Sydney!

    Love ya,

    Lauren :angelic:
     
  6. Alias_luver33

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    That's soo sad! I feel bad for Vaughn. I wonder what he's going do? Can you please PM me when you have the next chapter?

    ~Shammi~
     
  7. aliasgurl

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    aww poor vaughn..but whos he married to?
     
  8. dutch sydney bristow

    dutch sydney bristow Rocket Ranger

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    keep posting, this could become a great story. it has potential

    maartje
     
  9. berry_kyoote_spy88

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    wow please keep going great start keep posting :P
     
  10. ariesgirly2lovesMV

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    keep going post more soon
     
  11. krzykty57789

    krzykty57789 Rocket Ranger

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    great start..could i get a pm, too
     
  12. Moriel

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    this is really good. whta's he gonna do? did i just read that vaughn's married??
     
  13. Alias_addict

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    Chapter 2

    *** 6 months later

    The CIA had received a lead on the movements of Sloane, Sark and Irena. They were in Greece making contact with a well-known arms dealer. This man knew a lot about Ramboldi and his inventions. The dealer was to leave a disk on the desk of room number 7, floor 4 of the Greek Mythology Museum, which contained information about how to assemble the 47 pieces of the Rambaldi device.
    The CIA assembled a team that included, Weiss, Dixon, and Vaughn to enter the building and retrieve the disk before the evil trio could obtain it. Vaughn had made it his goal to capture the three people responsible for destroying Sydney’s life; he wanted to complete what she sought out to do. He promised himself he would find her and work things out with her, for he knew that he could not deny it, Sydney was his true love and he despised himself for giving up on her.
    The mission was simple and they all thought it would be a walk in the park. They made their way through the back halls of the museum and up the stairs to the level 4. They took out a few guards and proceeded to room number 7.
    It was a beautiful room decorated in deep red satin and shimmering gold. In front of a circular window stood a desk made out of cherry wood. And there among a mess of papers and folders was a disk with TO SIS written on it. They all assumed SIS stood for Sloane/Irena/Sark. They took a look at what else was on the desk just in case there was anything of importance that would help them in their search but suddenly the sounds of guns clicking made them freeze.
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    i know its kinda short but i like cliff hanger endings!!!
     
  14. Alias_Freak

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    Great fic
     
  15. Jen-Jen

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    good start keep going want to know what is going to happen next
     
  16. dutch sydney bristow

    dutch sydney bristow Rocket Ranger

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    it may have been short, but it was good! keep writing I like it.
    but Syd does come back right??
    thanks for the PM

    maartje
     
  17. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    I just caught up the story....I like it!
    Can you send me a PM when you update? that would be really nice!!
    Please post more soon ( I hate cliffhangers ;) I want to know how it goes on :D )
     
  18. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

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    Great chapter. I can't wait for you to post the enxt one.

    Thanks for the pm.
     
  19. aliasgirl89

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    Syd has to come back! Loved the chapter!
    Thanx for the PM.
    ~ASh~
     
  20. alias_luver

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    Great chapter. Thanks for the pm! Post more soon!
     

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