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    Algorithm - Part one to six

    NOTE: This story is also on the Sarah Connors fan fiction archive for member: structureandfunction also: i have stated that three people are the ones who are in charge of anything to do with my writing....so after Monday 10 09 i would like this to be the case from here on Surveillance Always...
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    Mutiny

    PETITION TO BRING BACK THIS SERIES this is a Crusoe fan fic story MUTINY Chapter 1: Once again I had tried to convince Friday of how there was no mountain god developed by man’s contrivance. He objected, “This is your “Good Book” it is a good story, nothing more.” I then threw my hands in...
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    Mutiny

    Note this is a poem from an allias fan fic: ….before this time she had written: Hope is dead and has fled from the Undeserving One whose Conscience is overwhelmed by past deeds that can never be compensated for…what can I do to be forgiven: Love, will never be again… ”
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    sympathy cyborg

    Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Algorithm z3l-2011 John has begun to wonder about whether the Turk was given capability to read the other computer somehow that was in competition with it, that, in effect it was given the capability of anticipation. That, it could read both code and the part of code that...
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    split second consequences

    kontrol says good story nice detail of her lungs in the hospital try not repeating the same word unless that is for effect it will tighten up the statements make it more concise.....
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    A+

    very good so is one of the children the child of an agent?
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    Music

    Music a fringe story Chapter 1 Chapter 1: Chapter 1“Walter,” said Peter, “what are you doing “Walter,” said Peter, “what are you doing...and who is he?” ”Just someone who walked in from the street.” ”What is he listening to Bach, Beethoven?” “No, ‘Mass Dynamical’, their second live world...
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    Ghost of the Pasts

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    Ashes to Ashes

    good story so far I intend to read more.....
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    from kontrol: I like how Sloane weeps for his wife who will not be back it is a good use of...

    from kontrol: I like how Sloane weeps for his wife who will not be back it is a good use of sympathy for the character..I must admit I like sad stories a good drama...
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    ....just read your story, this past summer I had some photo's from the 1800's of family stolen...

    ....just read your story, this past summer I had some photo's from the 1800's of family stolen and brought back ....you anticipated something close to what I have experienced
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    a small invasion

    goto type in the google: sarah connor fan fiction chronicles goto'structureandfunction fan fic' in your search engine if people don't like that all i can say is that could happen to YOU if you do not want to be bullied into submission someday see the blimp like camera laden ballon the us...
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