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    Seeking feedback on my baby, "THE 1K"

    Which is why after I posted it and read it, and realized I was being defensive, I deleted it and replaced it with a thank you. Deleting it was me realizing I made a hasty mistake with my knee-jerk reaction of striking back when feeling attacked.
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    Seeking feedback on my baby, "THE 1K"

    Edited down to just say 'thank you' and my references are there for a reason, so I'm not changing them. Thank you.
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    Seeking feedback on my baby, "THE 1K"

    Thanks. Some of those were typos, others I'd already fixed in the master copy that didn't get transferred over to AO3 yet, and some were things I had looked up, but was generally confused about, or didn't remember clearly from the 90's. I was a child during that time, so grant it, things are a...
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    Seeking feedback on my baby, "THE 1K"

    Oh, I'm not dissuaded. I still think I have a good story on my hands, so I'll keep writing. I do thank you for your opinion, though. I did ask for it, after all. Perhaps I should embellish more on the premise instead of leaving it vague. If you read the story, I hope you find a small amount of...
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    Seeking feedback on my baby, "THE 1K"

    Thank you. I am not attempting to create new sci fi, rather an enjoyable story that I am well aware has a heavy fantasy element on purpose. My mechanical and "tech jargon" knowledge is limited, so whenever I want to add something technical, I research it, and then talk my way around it. I love...
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    Seeking feedback on my baby, "THE 1K"

    Hey, guys. Newbie to the site, here. To be honest, I joined because I'm looking for other sci-fi fans who might enjoy an original space adventure I'm writing called "The 1K" ((working title for now. May change it later.)) It is in the first round of edits, and will undergo a few more rounds -...
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