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    Disturbed

    Great update. How long until she finds out? AND HOW WILL SHE REACT? And how will he make it up to her?
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    Disturbed

    Totally want to stay ON.
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    I'm So Sorry

    It really is coming. I really am working on it. Oh, boy.
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    I'm So Sorry

    I made it halfway through this chapter with my notes, hated it, and realized I need to give it better perspective. Self deadline: 24 hours.
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    I'm So Sorry

    Alright, so basically, I am mad at myself for not updating or finishing this story yet... especially since i have about 4 chapters worth of notes on exactly what I want to do with this story. So I need the following: -Someone to beta/run ideas by b/c I don't know how I want to finish this...
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    Disturbed

    Update again! I love this story! She has to find out soon. There's a climax waiting right here, and I'm giddy with anticipation!
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    Disturbed

    I can't wait to see what happens. Will Jack tell Vaughn to back off his quest to find and destroy Lauren? Will he follow Vaughn and find out? How will she find out? Will he just grow the balls to suck it up and tell her the truth? Or will it be at a bad moment, like she's kidnapped by...
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    Dirty Little Secret

    With two chapters left, I feel like she couldn't have killed him. And I think it'd be strange to have her torturing him... can't have the protagonist so harsh. Maybe she confronted him, he hurt her, and then he ran away...
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    Disturbed

    When does she find out? Because we KNOW she's going to. And is the Vaughn-Lauren playing nice thing going to end badly? Great update.
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    Your Number One Fan

    SO GOOD! What happens from here?
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    Your Number One Fan

    this is cute and i want to see where you go with it. can i get a pm?
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    Crossing Lines

    I was wondering what you were going to do with these last 12 chapters and what has so far been a pretty angst-free story. I can't decide if I think Michael's going to break it off out of fear, without talking to her... ...or if he'll talk to her and she'll admit she loves him and wants to be...
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    Disturbed

    OY! I want a PM! I've been trying to figure out what's going to happen with this. I mean, I don't like Lauren not being in on the evil... or the idea that he really did sleep with her out of his own free will... something has to be up... I'm really big on angst->fluff... so I cannot wait to...
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    Far Too Long

    Part of me is like "poor Rachel." Then part of me is like "stupid Vaughn" Then another part of me is like "finally!" I can't wait to see where you take this with Vaughn and Sydney.
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    Disturbed

    I think I'll only be happy if he was conditioned and then they show her the tape and then he has to break the conditioning or lose her... woah. And I want a PM with your next update.
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    All You Need is One

    I agree with derevkointraining. I feel like you're waiting on some major angst before the end... b/c there's so much to go, and it can't all be happy.
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    I'm So Sorry

    I may very well take you up on that... sorry I haven't updated and only teased you with the possibility!!! I'm back at school, and while my homework hasn't picked up yet, I'm trying to finish what I set out to finish. One thing I CAN assure you all is that I DEFINITELY have outlined all of...
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    Far Too Long

    I'm totally about angst and apologies that lead to happiness, so I'd go for option 3. Then, after he like cuts Sydney off, he tries to live his own life only to realize how he's not happy in his marriage and how much he misses her and really wants to be with her and meet his baby and see her...
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    I'm So Sorry

    Yay, replies! I posted this story on Allies and also tried to at fanfiction.net, but while I am keeping it updated on Allies, I get less feedback... and I thrive on feedback. I'm really new to this particular board, so I THINK I get how PM-ing works, so here's the current PM list, just to make...
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    I'm So Sorry

    Chapter 2: Flashes of the Past… and the Truth Author's Note: This still follows perspectives, but in third person Weiss awoke to the aroma of freshly brewed coffee. ‘I guess that must mean it’s morning,’ he thought while trying to bury himself further beneath the blankets and groaning...
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