everyday new
Cadet
as a first time sarkney-er i'd like some feedback... so if you have any views on my opener, let me know! there is more, just not ready yet.
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The room was dark. Almost too dark to see – but not quite. Sydney could just about make out a lithe silhouette some feet ahead of her. She remained crouched behind one of the many large shipping boxes in the dingy apartment. As she was here for the sole purpose of entrapping one of her most deadly rivals, someone who had eluded the CIA, MI5 and K-directorate, a man whose knowledge of the inner working of organised crime was unsurpassed. In other words, Julius Sark.
:redhair:
The room was dark. Almost too dark to see – but not quite. Sydney could just about make out a lithe silhouette some feet ahead of her. She remained crouched behind one of the many large shipping boxes in the dingy apartment. As she was here for the sole purpose of entrapping one of her most deadly rivals, someone who had eluded the CIA, MI5 and K-directorate, a man whose knowledge of the inner working of organised crime was unsurpassed. In other words, Julius Sark.
