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A Road Less Traveled By

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Chanel, Apr 13, 2003.

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  1. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    New Fic!!!! This one will be finished! I got a major idea while taking ashower. (thats where all my good ideas come from) So im goign to post it! its called A road less traveled by!
    OKAY lil facts!

    I DONT OWN ALIAS! BUT I WOULD LOVE TOO!

    Author me!!! so dont copy my story withot my permission!

    Chapter 1 ~ Restricted
    Liberty47 knew that she was not always part of the very thing that had ruined her life. She used to be able to remember happy times, but those memories were few. She actually couldn’t remember anything prior to her recruit. She remembered her assignment and nothing else. She had always thought that was how it was supposed to be. But Liberty47 was smart, she had always learned of ways to go around protocol. She had begun to think about other things. Restricted things. Like the outside life.
    Her handler, a Mr. Sark, had always been way too serious. He had always put the mission before anything, life, death or well just about anything else. Except Arvin Sloane. The very man she hated but lived for. He was her life, not that she wanted him to be. Not that she had a choice at the time. Her mother had recruited her. She was raised her to be a spy serving her nation.
    Even her own mother was strict. Actually Liberty47 could not even remember her own mother, not the sound of her voice or the smell of her hair. All she could remember were instructions. Things that she was programmed to do. She couldn’t even remember her own real name. Only Liberty47, nothing more nothing less.


    This first chapter is basically just a lil preview!!!!! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL CONTINUE SOON!

    ~chanel :redhair:
     
  2. Aliasfan23

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    this is good. Kind of confusing but still good.
     
  3. AliasFan4eva

    AliasFan4eva Rocket Ranger

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    Hey! This is super! You're very talented! ~Carey~
     
  4. Chanel

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    its supposed to be confusing. itll make sense soon. i ahve 4 chaps to post so... PLEZ REVIEW!!!
     
  5. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    hey I ave a question who is liberty47 is that her name
     
  6. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    Thanks carey!
     
  7. Chanel

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    yes liberty47 is her name... sorta. rember that she cant remeber her naem..
    " Things that she was programmed to do. She couldn’t even remember her own real name. Only Liberty47, nothing more nothing less."
     
  8. Chanel

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    here's cahpter 2!!!!

    Chapter 2~ Familiar Ground
    Now she was in Los Angeles, just walking down the street. For once she had forgotten totally about work. For as long as she can remember everyone had tried to keep her away from the city. She had forgotten about then and just parked her car and started walking in a park. Something about it was vaguely familiar. Like she had been there before. But she hadn’t. She was hardly ever in the States, and this was her first time in California. She was staying in Nevada for a few days, catching up on the Rambaldi Mystery.
    Then she heard someone behind her, running towards her. They were frantic. She picked up the pace and began to run. This is why her training had paid off. Then she veered around a corner. She had managed to lose him but only for a short time. He knew the city much better than she did. And his green eyes seemed to hypnotize her. She looked ahead at where she was heading.
    “S***,” she cursed. She was cornered. She had made a wrong turn and was in a narrow alley that ended a few feet in front of her. She scanned the alley for places to hide. There were none, the alley was as empty as the moon’s surface.
    The man was coming around the corner. She did the only thing she knew she could do, run.

    short but chap 3 is reallllllllyyyyy long!!
     
  9. btvaughn

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    There hasn't been a lot yet, but I'm really interested to find out what happens! I like your idea as well with the Liberty47. :D
     
  10. VaughnFan13

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    it looks good so far
     
  11. Ilikesloane

    Ilikesloane Rocket Ranger

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    ummm.... it is kinda confusing but good
     
  12. wildwildrae

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    hey i like it, you should continue... is the guy Vaughn?! ;) but, question....is this going to turn into a romance fic?
     
  13. nancee

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    o0o0o umm kinda to short to say anything....but....it looks good
     
  14. Moriel

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    i really like this fic, but it`s really short oh and everyone check out my fic (the path of darkness)
     
  15. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    I think that this might be cool...except green eyes....green eyes are Vaughn's trait, and If she's Syd...that's just screwed up. Anyway, I'm gonna see where you go with this before I make assumptions, 'K?

    Keep it goin' ;)
     
  16. Chanel

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    ok here's chap 3!!! it supposed to be confusing and yes it is romance. and if u guys need any explaining plese post! heres chap 3!

    Chapter 3~ Coming Back
    She ran into. Probably scaring the poor guys so bad. But she didn’t care. She ran hard and fast. Too bad he had his arm out ready to catch her when she ran past him.
    He saw the look in her eyes. They fury reflected back at him. He tried to calm her, but she was kicking and screaming. His firm was hard yet gentle. There was no way he was letting go of her. She tried kicking him, but her struggle just made him smile more.
    “Why are you smiling like that?” She screamed into his ear. He didn’t answer. He just kept on smiling.
    “Stop smiling!” She kicked him in the shin. He stopped smiling and told her to shut up playfully.
    “Why are you so casual with me, you buffoon?” She asked. He was carrying her somewhere. Where, she didn’t know.
    “What are you talking about!?” he questioned, “It’s me?”
    She stared blankly at him, “What? Who are you?”
    He started running toward a building. She saw his momentum, his stride, his grace all move in one.
    “What do you mean ‘who are you?’. You don’t know who I am?”
    “Mister,” she said with attitude, “I have no clue who you are.”
    They had reached the building. They were making they’re way inside. People around them were staring at her kicking the man. Then smiles came out. They were happy to see her. Liberty wondered why. She had never seen them before. She hadn’t even ever been to L.A. She was supposed to keep a low profile since she worked for the government, now everything was crewed but. Sloane would have her skin, if he knew what was happening right now.
    The man was entering a room that looked as if it could prevent anyone from escaping. Her heart was beating so fast. She could hear his breath. He walked into the room and closed the door. She heard it lock in place.
    In the room there was a table and two other doors. Liberty was thinking where they could lead to. But then a thought even more perplexing came to mind. Who did these people work for? They couldn’t have worked for the USA, she worked for the USA and she had never even been in this building.
    They were the enemy and she was in their care. She studied the room. Which she did in every room she had ever been in since she can remember. She was trained to do that. So incase she was ever trapped in a room she could remember possible ways of getting out.
    The room had nothing. No possible ways to escape. Just a metal table nailed to the floor and a metal chair to match. A couple doors, but nothing that would help in an escape.
    The man had knocked on one of the doors. Liberty47 was still kicking in her arms only with less force. She was getting tired. It seemed as if she had been in his grasp for hours. She looked at her watch. It had been half an hour. Her muscles ached. Her thoughts were interrupted by, a man’s voice.
    “Stop trying to escape from Agent Vaughn’s hold. You will not win,” the man’s face was hard to read. Even Liberty a skilled agent could not tell what he was thinking. She was stunned. No one had ever talked to her like that.
    Agent Vaughn loosened his grip. He looked at Liberty, smiled, and then hugged her. She pulled away immediately. He looked at her; pure fear was in his eyes.
    “Why do you resist something I can tell you have been waiting for, for years?”
    His question stunned her. She had not a single clue as to what he was talking about. His green eyes held onto her face and never let go. A thought came to her. She couldn’t totally grasp it but she could see something.
    “Red!” she said it aloud. Everyone looked at her. She fell silent. She saw in her head a wig, a red wig.

    ok the last part is a little weird but trust me itll make sense. PLESAES!!!!! REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this chap it really long but the next one will be shorter.
     
  17. Aliasfan23

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    WOW!! That is awesome! I love it. I like that is that long. very interesting
     
  18. aliaschick4mv

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    WOW is right! That was interesting, I can NOT wait to see where you're going with this.
     
  19. VaughnFan13

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    good chap..is liberity syd?
     
  20. aliasluver

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    huh? what? i am so confused.
     

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