A Trip to the Beach

[berry_kyoote_spy88]

in my opinion i thought this was short but very saweet its so cute their relationship

 

[Alias_Freak]

great great great great!

 

[Alias_Freak]

did I mension it was great?

 

[berry_kyoote_spy88]

oh yeah and when u have the next story up please pm i would really liked you did a good job writing this story i think that everything fit perfectly and i applaud you so dont stop writing its your talent

 

[Alias_Freak]

LOL!

 

[pennstatechic]

That was so sweet, and cute. Does it have to be "The End" I mean, it sound like it could just start. I really like it, and I hope you will continue, but if not it was very sweet and really nice. You jave an awesome talent, I can't wait to see more of your work.

Love ya,

Lauren