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Alice hater unite fic

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by aliaschica47, Mar 3, 2003.

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  1. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    ok this is a one parter packed with s/v and lots of alice hating (sorry but I have problems with that women, today in class i was supposed to read this thing with this person named alice in it so i thought about my two choices
    1.) read the name and start hyperventilating
    2.) just switch the name to syd
    so i chose the latter
    problem is now everybody writes alice all over my stuff God damn you juliet) anyway I just read this fic in sd-4 that gave me the idea I may steal some of the parts from it



    oh yeah PG-13 for those suicidal people who may start getting ideas
    oh yeah tip those who already have low self esteem levels *don't go back to your ex-bofriends house late at night or early in the moring


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    Vaughn felt Sydney wake up, his strong arms wrpped tighter around her, filling her with an overwhelimg sense of securness.
    "Mornin" Vaughn said kissing her head
    "Morning" Sydney said rolling over
    "Do we really have to ever get up at all?" She asked
    "AS much as I would like to stay here all day, we should get up" Vaughn said proping himself up on one arm to kis her gently before standing up.
    ""im gonna go take a shower" he said
    "WHAT and wash off all the perfectly good lipstick you have all over your face" she teased
    "well your not going with out me buddy" she added getting up and they walked towards the bathroom arm in arm

    MEANWHILE.........

    Alice (cough hack hyperventilating)

    I am on a mission, nothing is going to get in my way, nothing
    I am determined to get Back Micheal.
    I walk out the door of my apartment building into the sidewalks of L.A.
    opening the door of my car I slide into the drivers seat feeling elated to the fact tat wiin the next two hours (considering i need my trip to starbucks first) I will be back together with Micheal.


    And even further meanwhile-


    Vaughn leaned down to kiss Sydneys neck, Causing her to let out a moan half in contentment and half in surprise, moving up he kissed along her jawline until reaching her mouth where he turned her around facing him and brought her into a mezmerising kiss.

    Stepping out of the shower, they both grabbed up a towel and procceded to dry off.
    Walking back into their bedroom sydney (who was going to be moving in the next day) realized something
    "Um hey Vaughn I kinda dont have any clothes" she said
    "here" he said throwing her a pair of boxers and a t shirt
    slipping them on she waited for Vaughn to walk out of the room before she headed to her purse and pulled out a small rectangluar box covered in clear plasic (ok by the way sorry so much for inserting this but I just had this great Idea so it may end up being longer then expected)


    A. POV

    i walk up to the door, taking a few breaths I turn the knob


    No POV

    Sydney looks down at the small peice of plastic
    her eyes filled with tears of joy,


    "Micheal" Vaughn heard two people say at the same time

    "Micheal you have to hear me ou....." alice said but was cut off
    "Vaughn I'm pergnant" Sydney said running around the corner of the hall to the kitchen where Vaughn and Alice were.
    She stopped dead in her tracks when she saw alice there, looking at sydney in Vaughns Boxers the pregnancy test in hand.
    "Wha.." Alice trailed off tears in her eyes
    "Oh hi um alice?" Sydney said confused looking at Vaugn for support who just shrugged.
    "look you know what, just, you made a big mistake" Alice said and walked out the door

    "Wait what do you mean you are pregnant?" Vaughn asked walking over to sydney
    "Im really pregnant" she said showing him the test
    "No" he said smiling
    she nodded her head smiling

    ALice of course heard this all from out side the door where she was listening
    walking outside she got into her car taking a deep breath she hit the gas speeding down the highway until she hit another car, hitting her head on the dashboard and bleeding to death.



    YES YES YES ok that was THEy best fan fiction ever, maybe if you guyslike it i will do the whold syd pregnant thing, MAYBE but u guys get to decide I know that the end was cruel but hey I hate the womean so much it is sooo worth it..
     
  2. btvaughn

    btvaughn Rocket Ranger

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    lol!!! I was loving that, Syd's pregnant, Vaughn is perfect, and Alice is dead! Hurrah! :D
     
  3. Kristina

    Kristina Rocket Ranger

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    I hate her too!!!
     
  4. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Ha! (To the fic) That was great!
     
  5. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    only in an alternate univers are things so perfect
     
  6. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    Wow! So much hate in the world Not enough for Alice! Alice Grrr...... Great fic by the way!
     
  7. *twinkletoes*

    *twinkletoes* Rocket Ranger

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    Love the title. it's so funny. Anyway its a good fanfic.
     
  8. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    LOL! Great fan fic!! Alice is dead and Vaughn and Sydney live happily ever after!!
     
  9. alias101

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    hey um great job.. it was an easy read i am sry bout writin ALICE all ova ya stuff(tear) um i no it was supposed to be short and i liked the endin but it was all to simple she hits a car a dies ohh wow!! but great job ~love ya :) meeeee
     
  10. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    alice really is annoying. i'm glad she's out of the picture. she'd better not come back!
     
  11. spywolf

    spywolf Wicked Writer

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    I love it! There's just one itty bitty thing. Since Sydney is a good person, won't she feel guilty and blame herself for Alice dying? That would really stink, but it seems like something Sydney would do.
     
  12. SpyGurl001

    SpyGurl001 Rocket Ranger

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    Dern I wish Alice died more like getting hurt really bad go through pain she would never want to experience and then die. I figure Syd went through a lot of pain with her in way so she should have some back!!!

    Ok I really hate Alice if there was an Alice HAter group I would join!!

    Ok enough of that. I really like this fic!!! Please Write MOre and Syd should not feel sorry Alice deserved it even that death was to good for her!

    ~KM :angelic:
     
  13. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    What did Alice ever do to any of us?

    Oh yeah, she was born.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  14. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    hehe i know we really shouldnt hate people just because they have been plauges on our lives the last year and a half and because they caused us physical pain, you know its just not riht (yeah right like i meant any of that felgercarb)
     
  15. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    maybe i will make an alternative one where she in the hospital vaughn goes into see her and "accidentily" trips on the cord that is plugged into her life support,hmm that would be good
     
  16. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    That would be good and then she'sd be gone for good!


    Kelli
     
  17. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Oh yeah very good story I hate Alice so much!


    Kelli
     
  18. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Does nobody like my humorous wit?

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  19. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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  20. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    Alice is dead *giggles evily* Dreams really do come true!

    And Alias Elle, I like your humorous wit!
     

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