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Can't Believe This Is Happening

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Bondgal2007, Mar 13, 2003.

  1. Bondgal2007

    Bondgal2007 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    Title: I Can't Believe This Is Happening

    Author: Bondgal2007

    Standing in the bank, and looking at the man that has been plague in life made her sick. Now, that bastard wanted her to go with him.

    "My dear, you'll be driving me out of here," he said with a creepy smile.

    " Syd, don't do this please," Vaughn begged her.

    " I have to Michael or he'll kill them. I'll be back I promise," she said trying to reassure him.

    " Well, what is your chose Miss Bristow? Is it to come with me or to die here?"

    " Yes, I'll do it." Syd spoke up.

    " I love you Syd," he said in more casual tone.

    " I love you too," she said why'll she kissed him lightly.

    " Ok, you two lovers say goodbye, cause it's time to go," Sloane ordered them.

    As she was leaving the bank, she looked over her shoulder to see her love. Hoping it wasn't the last time that she would. Sloane slipped into the back of the car and she slid into the front. Starting the car she drove off of New Market to 100th Avenue she stop immediately when guns were firing at them.

    "Sydney. I told you not it interfere or I'd end your life." Sloane said in a panic as she raced to get away from the gunmen.

    " You son of a ----- I hate you! You have ruined my life and my family. I want you to pay for what you did to Danny and all the other innocent lives."

    Suddenly Syd felt a pinch in lower neckline and passed out. Sloane's men took over and drove to the warehouse.

    Vaughn sat in his office waiting to hear from Syd. He was so ashamed of himself for not going with her. What was Sloane going to do to her? That's when Kendell knocked on the door.

    " Agent Vaughn, can I have a word with you in my office?"

    "Have you heard anything about where Agent Bristow is?" Vaughn asked in hope of good news.

    "No, we have not and it looks like we won't be for awhile at least," he said.

    " What do you mean for a awhile? We need to find her and get Sloane and Sark! Vaughn said with his voice rising.

    " I am sorry, but we can't trace where Sloane or Agent Bristow are at this time. She is on her own for now." Kendell spoke boldly.

    " We can't just leave her out there!" Vaughn said in anger now.

    " Well, your welcome to go find her if you like."

    Sydney felt lightheaded and couldn't see straight. She looked around to see Sloane walking around and saw that she was light to a wall.

    " Goodmoring my dear, did you sleep well?" Sloane spoke.

    " Where am I? What the hell do you want with me?" Syd said tiredly

    " You see I have been working on a project liked to call Project X for the last thirty years. and there is a piece missing to it. That would be your mother. Now, I know that you know where she is and I need to know now. So how about you start talking?" Sloane told her straight forward.

    " I am not telling you one word you!" Syd said smiling at him.

    "Well, if that's how you want to play this game I guess some torture wouldn't hurt."

    "Don't you lay a finger on me you animal!" Syd was worried after she said that.

    Vaughn was trying to find Jack when he bummed into to him. And Jack stared a him in the eyes.

    "Do know what happened in Sweden? Vaughn asked politely.

    "Yes, I am. How could allow Sydney to go of with Sloane? May I remind you that agents are suppose to look over one another." Jack said in disappointment. " I am sorry that I made a mistake, but we need to find Syd."

    " Sloane isn't going to let her go and will torture her to get information. He's looking for Irina since she is the woman in the manuscript." Jack told Vaughn staring at him in belief.

    "So what do we have to do to find her and where do we start?" Vaughn spoke in worry in fear that Sloane may harm Sydney.

    " Get a hold of Marcus Dixson and than we can strategize a plan to find her. And Mr. Vaughn I hope that she is ok. You know that I would do anything to protect my daughter." Jack warning him, walked away.

    Sydney was screaming to the top of her lungs as the fire swept across her lower abdomen. Sloane was standing there watching in a speculation on what was happening. Than the man that had been torturing pulled back and left the room so that Sloane and Sydney could talk.

    " Please no more! I beg you to stop!" Syd said tearfully.

    " Well, are you ready to talk or would you like to have a little more fun?" Sloane smiled down at her.

    She was pinned to the fall still and if she could move she'd kill that bastard right than and there. Instead her skin was burned from the flames of fire and she was bleeding a lot.

    " No, I will stop torturing you but we can torture what's inside of you." Sloane's eyes wondered down to her abdomen.

    " What are you talking about? Syd asked in worry.

    " Sydney do you think I am stupid? I know about your little secret. That you are about a one-month pregnant with Michael Vaughn's child."

    "How did you know that I'm pregnant?"

    " I have sources in Los Angeles and I have connections to your medical visits. So believe me I know more about you than you do yourself." Sloane said in pride.

    "Don't you do anything to my baby! If you harm it what so ever I'll kill you!"

    "I guess than it's to late to say that I already have! You baby has been injected with a toxin and will die if you don't tell me what I wanna know. So make a chose to tell me or to save your baby's life?" Sloane said.

    A/N: Please review! I can take good or bad! I'd like constructive criticism though. Oh, nexted chapter will see what Vaughn will do to save his love and if their baby will be safe.
  2. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

    Jan 9, 2003
    shouldn't matter to you where I live
    Finally put it back up!! I was wondering if you forgot about it or something! I'd say something, but I know what happens next, so....STILL GOOD!!

    *runs out of room like a drunken goose*
  3. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

    Dec 30, 2002
    nice start. sort of freaky.
  4. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    from da hood
    oOoOo kool...and she calls him michael?
  5. Bondgal2007

    Bondgal2007 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    Do you guys want morecause I have the nexy 3 chapters?
  6. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

    Jan 8, 2003
    South Africa
    yes please,please continue
  7. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    from da hood
    um...do u really think though that syd would beg for mercy...i mean tell him to stop....if its syd wouldnt she just take the pain?.....juss sayin...post more
  8. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

    Jan 26, 2003
    Florida (Now PA for college)
    Very Interesting! Keep it going! I hope Syd's baby is ok, and God hope that Vaughn finds her now!!
  9. SarahBear

    SarahBear Rocket Ranger

    Jun 18, 2003
    wow! i hope the baby is ok! does vaughn know? well, can u pm me when u update please? thankyu! sarah
  10. Sophie

    Sophie in love

    Mar 5, 2003
    Asha, you should post the other chapters here too. :P
  11. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

    Jun 21, 2003
    You should post more. When you do can you pm me.
  12. vaughn=delicious

    vaughn=delicious Rocket Ranger

    Jul 13, 2003

    This story is great, I really like it.
    I cant wait to see where your going with this.
    Can I get a PM when you update?

  13. Bondgal2007

    Bondgal2007 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    kk I'll post more...latr.
  14. sv4ever07

    sv4ever07 Rocket Ranger

    Aug 3, 2003
    New York
    Asha it's Nicole, I just found this and I love it!

    Today's my first day at AA and I didn't know you were here too!!

    This is so good!

    Please update soon and can you PM me when you do?


  15. Kimmers

    Kimmers Rocket Ranger

    Jan 22, 2003
    I really love this and so would love to see more of it.
    This is a really intresting fic and can see it developing into something even better
    from Kim
  16. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

    Jun 19, 2003
    WHOA!!! i hope the baby is okay because that would be VERY VERY EVIL!!! SERIOUSLY!!
  17. AlexBristow03

    AlexBristow03 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 28, 2004
    this is really good, can i get a pm when u update?
  18. Sydney Bristow 2300844

    Sydney Bristow 2300844 Rocket Ranger

    Nov 23, 2003
    I hope Sloane doesn't hurt the baby. Can I get a pm when you update? thanks.
  19. AliasChica316

    AliasChica316 Rocket Ranger

    Mar 14, 2004
    can i get a pm please?
  20. aliasdancer007

    aliasdancer007 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 22, 2003
    vaughn better find syd soon! can i get a pm when u update please? thanks

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