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Chrystalline Roses

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Porter, Mar 26, 2003.

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  1. Porter

    Porter Rocket Ranger

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    Hm well I am going to try this so here I go. And I apologize if I suck.

    Sydney steped out of her jeep and into the muddy walk way.
    "O felgercarb!" Shouted sydney as she looked down at her mud covered shoes. She opened the gate of the warehouse and stomped in. Hoping to drag the mud off.

    Sydney looked up at vaughn who seemed in a wierd mood.
    "Vaughn? Are you ok?" She said with curiousty in her eyes.
    Vaughn set the file he had in his hands down and walked over to sydney.
    "Well. Sydney. I just found out some Information that you might want to sit down when I give this to you.
    Sydney looked deep in his eyes then sat down.
    Vaughn sat next to her and grabbed her hand caringly.
    "Sydney. The CIA have been watching this girl for awhile." Vaughn should her a picture of the girl. Her hair was a brownish red and in the picture she resembled sydney in a way.
    "Sydney. We have found out that this is your sister."
    Sydney dropped the picture and stared at vaughn.
    "What?" She said with shock in her tone.
    Vaughn but his bottom lip then looked away.
    "Sydney. I know. It sounds fake,but the only reason them jacka__s wanted me to tell you is because sloane and sark have found out and could be after her any minute. She is as smart as you and has intelligence from Irina that not even she knows. As much as I hate to agree with kendell and the others we do need her on our side."
    Vaughn waited for an answer from sydney. Then he put his arm around her and held her tight.
    "Sydney I'm here for you. You know that."
    Sydney looked up.
    "So tell me what I have to do."
    Vaughn opens the file and starts to fill her in.

    (In Ireland at a prestigious all girls school.)
    Jennifer walked down the long school hall in her green school skirt and top. Her socks the old fashion Knee-tall length.
    She was mireable at that school. The highlight of her life was making fun of Ms. Spencer. Her fat gym teacher who couldn't run if she had to.
    She drag her books all the way to the front door of the school. Glad that the day was over and she could go back to her dorm and hear her room mates talk about what color they are painting there nails. "O joy." Thought Jennifer sarcastically.
    Jennifer put a dollar in the soda machine and waited for her soda. The machine clicked then with a thug the soda poped out.
    She went to grab it, and before she could a man snatched it from the machine.
    Jennifer looked up with a frown on her face.
    "Excuse me! I think I payed for that!" She said with her eyes on the soda.
    "Well I thought you needed some help lifting it. You would hate to ruin that maincure." Said the man teasingly.
    Jennifer glared in defence then smiled with delight.
    "Whats your name?" She asked.
    " I am refered to as Sark."
    "Sark? What is that like a stage name or something."
    "I am sorry to cut you short,but can you follow me."
    Jennifer looked him over then opened her sode.
    "Ya know. I watch all those movies about guys that say what you just said just so they can hack some poor girl to death." She smiled then waited for a reply.
    "Well I am not intrested in hacking you. I need to ask you a favor."
    "Well." Jennifer looked at her watch then over at the school doors where she saw one of the teachers walking out.
    "Um yea lets do it away from the school building though."
    Jennifer followed Sark out of the school area and into the parking lot.
    "I have to be careful. Ya know. When you skip classes you really have to watch your back. These women can be like drill sargents."
    Sark smiled then opened the van door. Sark pointed a gun at her and motioned her to get in. Jennifer spit out the pop in her mouth and stood still.
    "Hey I would rather you shoot me then do whatever ok." Sark rolled his eyes and pushed her in
    He kept the gun at her as the person in the front seat turned around.
    "Ms. Dreveko I am glad you could come. I am Arvin Sloane. I have a proposal that you might be intrested in.



    O and guys I have a lively romantic ch next so dont worry! There us A LOT of romance in it! :) Thanks for reading this. :) I hope you like it! Please! suggestions and correction is good! :)
     
  2. aliasjgfanaticmv

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    wow, this sounds great! You just have some grammer errors, like She drag her books all the way to the front door of the school. I think you meant dragged, but w/e, I understood it. And some spelling stuff, but it doesn't make any difference to me, this story starts off really good!! I cann't wait to read more of the story! I don't wanna sound like a crictical ----- or anything, so....don't take it like that! :D

    *runs out of room like a drunken cow*
     
  3. Alias*Kelli

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    LOL I have seen a lot of cows in my life ( I live on a farm), but I have never seen a drunken one. Anyways great story! Romance with who? V/S right!?! Like I said great story and I hope you write mroe soon!~
     
  4. Sunfire_77

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    hehehehehe! I loved it porter! hehehe! Its great! :) And like jo said some errors but I am the queen of errors! LMAO hsje hehehe see! Well I think I am going to enjoy this and please write the next ch! When you told me about it I couldn't wait! SO DONT torture these poor nice people! WRITE write write ... :)
     
  5. twinzz2003

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    I really like it Porter. Great details, and not to many not to less. Really good!
     
  6. nancee

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    0o0o0o good one
     
  7. Porter

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    Jennifer looked at Sark, who was holding the gun in his hand.
    Jennifer looked back at Sloane.
    "What do you mean Proposal?" She asked curiously.
    "Well. We are friends of your mother. And she was corropertaing with us, but decided that her loyalties lied with someone else. How would you like to work for us. I. We have a plan that could. How you say, Change life as you know it. Now I know many people who can do this, but they are not being in the right spirit, and since you are the only daughter of your mother you are the only one who can do the job. So?"
    Jennifer looked at Sloane then Jumped up behind Sark. She pulled a gun from under her skirt. She held it to him.
    " I have learned many things from my mom, well that is as much as she has been around, and that has not been much. There is one thing I know though. Never trust anyone without all the facts and loyaltys. Now I am not certain who you are and why you want me, but I am no fool. I know my mother didn't work for a travel agency. So spill it." Jennifer tightened her hold on Sark, which he didn't totally hate. :shamefullyembarrased: :D :LOL: :) :)
    "Ms. Dreveko. I assure you I am not here to hurt you. And no your mother did not work for a travel agency, but you cab disguss that with her. I need to know that you will help us though."
    Jennifer loosened her grip, but only slightly. She was uncertain about them. Just then Sark swooped around and pinned Jennifer to the floor, making the gun fall to the floor.
    "I am sorry Ms. Dreveko, but I do not like being held at gun point."
    Sark let up and Jennifer sat up. She glared at Sark then looked back at Sloane.
    "Well. I dont know. I guess if I could be a help then I will do whatever I can."
    Sloane looked over at Sark then back at Jennifer.
    And with a evil grin he replied. "Good then lets get started shall we."

    (In L.A. CIA)

    "So you mean to tell me that I have had a sister all this time and the CIA haven't said anything about it." Complained Sydney as her and Vaughn entered his office.
    "Yea, and can you believe that they didn't tell me till today."
    Just as Vaughn sat down he got an idea.
    "Sydney. I know ever since your mother turned her self back in you have been unsure of her loyaltys, but she is the only one that can help you here. She is the only one that would know Jennifer."
    Sydney looked up at vaughn and shrugged.
    "Vaughn. I cant. Not yet, but I guess its my only choice."
    Sydney got up and started walking to the door.
    Vaughn started to follow her.
    "Vaughn. I can go alone. I dont want you to be forced to see her."
    "Sydney. I a-"
    Sydney didn't let Vaughn finish. She started to walk down the spiral hall. Greeting many people she hardly knew on the way.
    She greeted the gaurd and showed him her ID Then he nodded and opened the gates. A buzzing noise sounded and she started to walk through.
    She spotted Irina sitting on the corner of the bench. She looked up and saw Sydney, and almost was ashamed.
    "Sydney I-"
    " I am not her for personal reasons. I have learned about my "Sister" And lets say I have nothing to say. I just need to know about her. Supposedly Sloane is after her."
    Irina looked down then weakly lifted her head.
    "Sydney. After I faked my death I was very confused, scared even. Jack was the first true love I had ever had. Well A couple years after all of it had happened I came back to him. Only shortyly though. I told him everything and that I wanted to run away with him. Just him you and me, but he didn't want to chance us being caught, and you being hurt. So we had a one night stand and I went back on my way. Well I found out I was pregnant. I made some lame excuse to everyone that I had slept with some guy for information, and they bought it. When Jennifer was born she reminded me of you. SO when she was old enough I took her to a boarding school in Ireland. I would visit her time after time, but then I stopped. I haven't see her since she was 14. I think she is 16 now. I am sorry Sydney that I didn't tell you."
    Sydney stood there. With no facial emotion. She almost was in tears. You could see it in her face.
    "Thank you for corroperating."
    Sydney nodded profesionally then walked away.
    She walked past the gaurd and stopped for a minute so she could cry.
    Vaughn walked up.
    He knew right away what she was going through. No questions asked.
    "Sydney this is a bad time to tell you this, but they are sending you on a mission."
    "What?"
    "Yea. I know. Sydney. They have Jennifer, and know they want you to go after her."
    Sydney looked up at Vaughn.
    "Vaughn. This is a shock to me I knwo I dont know her, But I am not letting that crooked man ruin another persons life. So what do I jave to do."

    (Back in Ireland at the parking lot of some fancy plant.)

    "Jennifer. I need you to go in that building and tell the men at the front desk that there is a man outside threating to shoot himself. Kind of like a diversion. I will let Sark fill you in." Sloane smiled at Jennifer with one of his Fake smiles then got out and walked over to the other van that just pulled up.
    "You will be wired with a listening device so I will direct you through all of it. and-"
    "You dont look much like a push over." Intrupted Jennifer.
    "Excuse me?"
    "Well You seem to be acting like Arvins little puppet, and I dont see you as one."
    "We have an equal partnership." Said Sark as he looked up from the laptop on his lap.
    "OK. You can believe that."
    "Listen. I am not going to take advice from some 16 year old who only diffuculties is trying to find an outfit in the morning.
    "Ok Ok. I was just saying."
    Sark grabbed the wire from in back of the van.
    "here you have to wire this under your clothes so I can hear you." Sark handed her the wire.
    She looked at it mindlessly then held it up.
    "Ok You think I know how to hook this in."
    Sark rolled his eyes then grabbed the wire.
    "Your going to feel a pinch."
    He cliped it on the made sure it was secure.
    "Is that your real accent?" She asked
    "Why do you ask so many questions, and yes its real."
    Jennifer bent in close to him. Not even two inches away.
    "I like to know the answers to things I am curious about."
    Sark felt his arms tense. Jennifer then out of no where bentin and kissed him.
    Sark dropped his laptop.
    Jennifer pulled away :shamefullyembarrased: "Um how old are you?" She asked sheepishly.
    "22."
    "Ok good enough for me." Jennifer started to kiss him again.
    Just then Sloane opened the door.
    :mad: :rolleyes: "I am sorry to bother anything that was happening, but we have a job to do.
    So jennifer suited up and started to head for the entrance door.
    She walked in with a panick look on her face. She ran to one of the man at the desk.
    "O o o You have got to help me!" She cried.
    "Theres a man with a gun outside. He is threathing to shoot hhimself.
    The man ran outside.
    "Ok jennifer to your right there will be a door enter that."
    As jennifer opened the door she was ambushed by none the other, but Sydney and Vaughn.
     
  8. btvaughn

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    Very interesting....It definitely seems like it could go somewhere. I think it's probably just the beginning that's confusing me. (Not anything that has to be explained, but there is just a lot going on right now). Good job with your first fic!
     
  9. aliasjgfanaticmv

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    yay, another chapter!! I really need to work on my homework....LMAO!! OOO, I wonder what'll happen next!!

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! AH! AH! AH! SHE KISSED SARK!!! EWIE!! LMAO!!! :LOL:
     
  10. vaughnscaligurl47

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    VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY WONDERFUL!

    <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>don't 2 get 2 :read: my story called GETTING OUT!</span>

    lauren vartan
     
  11. Alias Elle

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    Ooh, I like this so far. And gross! Kissing Sark! Sorry, :offtopic: But I do like this!

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  12. kylo4

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    Once again, another great story.
    Nuff said.
     
  13. Sunfire_77

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    hehehe ewwwww I agree! :) And great story porter! :)
     
  14. kleverkitten

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    Hee hee hee.... :P
     
  15. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    So is there gonna be more any time soon?
     
  16. *Agent Legolas*

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    Wow this is really great!! :D Please write more soon!!
     
  17. Alias Elle

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    More please! I really like this story!

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  18. aliasjgfanaticmv

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    eHlo? Anymore? Pleeeeeease?
     
  19. aliaschick4mv

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    LOL Lauren, sweetie, you keep typing that, just put it in your sig!

    And I totally agree, kissing Sark is disturbing... GROSS VISUAL PLACE!!!
     
  20. *Agent Legolas*

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    Is there going to be anymore soon?
     

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