Dirty Little Secret

[fieldstation]

wow. I didn't expect that at all. :blink:
Wonder what will happen next! can't wait for tomorrow!

 

[dandan]

omg what the hell has she done
holey felgercarb
this is bad
glad sh didnt regret sleepin with vaughn

 

[sparklingrainbow]

oh no... what happened??? this is such a twist... i do hope everything's ok...

 

[Syd_Vaughn4ever]

omg.......did not see that coming! I love his reaction halfway through the letter! Can't wait for more!

 

[beachdreaming10]

“Oh felgercarb…”

Yup thats exactly what I thought. While I don't think she killed her father, I think she is giving him a taste of his own medicine.

Totally didn't see it coming though, interesting twist for sure.

 

[cookiemonster]

Syd killed him

 

[SkyGirl5]

Syd killed him

:rotflmao:

 

[blknight]

Oh felgercarb... What have you done Syd?? This can't be good Gotta love Micheals reaction though!!

 

[catfishally]

Please don't have killed him!
PLEASE!!

 

[laura_vaughn]

what did sydney do?!

 

[gtwallichs]

Love the update and just signed up because I love your stories!

 

[Syd4Vaughn]

omagosh whats gonna happen?!

 

[sydneymicheal]

Uh oh...That's not good...
Can't wait for more.

 

[Catpin]

Oh felgercarb!

 

[74Aliaschickita47]

Oh, my.

-Globes and Maps :beret: irate2:

 

[ashqua]

Like Vaughn said Oh felgercarb! :lol:
I thought for a moment that Sydney was the one missing or something like that, I didn't except it to be her father
I don't know what she has in mind but it can't be good, come on Vaughn do something and run after her! You can't let her ruin her life because of Jack

 

[bendypinkone]

With two chapters left, I feel like she couldn't have killed him. And I think it'd be strange to have her torturing him... can't have the protagonist so harsh. Maybe she confronted him, he hurt her, and then he ran away...

 

[AliasSydney502]

hahahah karma's a bitch!!

 

[farliieansds225]

omg !!
what the heck happened????
awesome update
loved it
cant wait for more!

 

[Michael_Vartan_Rocks]

ohhh no i hope she's okay!! ahhh i'm worried about her. Michael better try and find her. can't wait for more!!

and i'm glad that you're going to try and become published!! & i definitly am gonna sign up to be a member