Wow I'm sorry I never read this before! this was awesome!! I could have never of guessed english was your second language!!.....he he I should start saying that since my writing is lets say not the best.....
i just read your story it was great i read all 20 pages today must have more. your cliffhangers are great i was so excited i was jumping. (running out of the room like a dunnken turtle)LOL you have to write alot more storys
I just read your whole story today. It is wonderful. You are such a good writter. I think I would have gone mad with the cliffhangers at the end of your chapters.
thank you :lol: I think some ppl did go crazy with my cliffhangers :blink: :lol: but it's all good now. When you have some time. go read Like Mother Like Daughter. It's the sequal to this one, and i'm almost done with it too
--Mandy