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  1. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

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    Authors' Notes:Set somewhere in the future it has nothing to do with my other stories.The only two things I've taken from my other stories is that Francie is not dead and my character Bridget is in it and more fully explored.
    Oh but Francie and Will aren't together she's going out with a guy named Mark and he's going out with a girl named Charlotte.Oh and Sydney,Vaughn,
    Francie and Will all stay in one house.
    Summary:An earthquake hits LA and it causes chaos Jack and Irina are stuck downstairs together.Sydney and Bridget are stuck in a mall with a psycho who's holding people hostage while Michael and Eric are trying to get to them.What will happen now?Wait and find out.
    Couples:S/V,J/I and B/E
    Category:Romance/Action/Adventure
    Rating:PG-13
    Disclaimer:None of these wonderful characters belong to me they belong to the genius that is JJ Abrams.

    Earthquake
    by:Lili

    Chapter 1

    You see a restaurant you see Sydney,Vaughn,Eric and Bridget sitting at the table."So who are these two people that Will and Francie are bringing?"
    Bridget asks.

    "I don't know I just know Will's date is Charlotte and Francie's is Mark,"
    Sydney says.

    Vaughn laughs"yes she's been prying all week about them,"he says.

    Sydney pouts and he takes her hand and brings it up to his mouth and kisses it."But you are very cute when you're doing it,"he says.

    That brings a smile to her face and then the door opens and in comes Will and a pretty brunette on his arm.

    "She's cute,"Bridget says sarcastically.

    Sydney slaps her on the arm Bridget just smiles and Will comes over with the girl."Hi guys,"he says.

    "Hi Will,"Sydney says.

    "Everyone this is Charlotte.Charlotte this is Sydney Bristow,Michael Vaughn,
    Eric Weiss and Bridget Thompson,"Will says.

    "Nice to meet you all,"Charlotte says.

    "Like wise,"Sydney says shaking her hand.

    Then you see Francie come in with a cute black man"now he's nice,"Bridget says.

    Sydney had to nod but then she looks at Vaughn and smiles"but not as nice as you Michael,"she says.

    He smiles at her Francie makes her way over"hi everyone,"she says.

    "Hi Francie,"Bridget says she smiles at the man with her friend.

    "Guys this is Mark.Mark this is Sydney Bristow,Michael Vaughn,Eric Weiss,
    Bridget Thompson,Will Tippin and the girl I don't know,"Francie says.

    "Nice to meet you all,"Mark says.

    They all nod and they sit down"I'm Francie Calfo,"she says.

    "Charlotte,"she says.They shake hands.

    They all sit down the waiter comes over"hi I'll be your waiter my name is Ross can I get you anything to drink?"he asks.

    "A bottle of white wine the best you have please,"Vaughn says.

    "Of course sir,"Ross says.He leaves.

    They all start looking at their menus and Sydney caught Will and Francie staring at each other every so often.

    "So how was everyone's week?"Charlotte asks.

    Bridget cringes"can I hurt her please?"she asks Sydney.

    "No not yet,"Sydney says.She smiles at Charlotte.

    "Why not?"Bridget asks.

    Sydney looks at her strangely"Bridget,"she says.

    Her friend smiles at her and they go back to looking at the menu"I don't like her,"Vaughn says.

    Sydney rolls her eyes"neither do I but we have little choice,"she says.

    He nods and takes her hand and kisses it they order their food Eric and Will get two pizzas,Vaughn and Mark get steaks and the girls all get chicken or salad.

    "This place is great,"Charlotte says.

    They take away their dishes and then Ross comes"would you all like some dessert?"he asks.

    Vaughn is about to shake his head when Sydney leans against him and he smiles."All right,"he says.

    "Good,"Ross says.

    He walks away and comes back with a trolley full of deserts."Wow,"Bridget says.

    "Ya,"Sydney says.

    Vaughn leans over to whisper in her ear"are you sure you want this or we could just go home,"he says."And make our own dessert?"

    "Mm but that chocolate mousse looks so nice,"she says.

    He groans and picks it up for her she smiles at him"then we can go,"she says.

    She smiles at him and he smiles back"sounds good to me,"he says.

    She nods and she goes to her cake.

    ***

    A while later you see them outside the house in the car"I was thinking maybe we should take a vacation just the two of us,"he says.

    "That would be nice,"Sydney says."But where?"

    "Anywhere I don't care,"he says."I need time alone with you which I don't get living in this house."

    Sydney leans over and kisses him on the cheek"I know but we can move out if we want to,"she says.

    "I'm afraid they are going to kill each other if we do,"he says.

    "Sometimes we have to put our feelings before theirs,"she says.

    He nods his head"come on let's go inside so we can talk more about this,"he says.

    She nods her head and smiles.They go inside Will is sitting at the kitchen counter top while Francie is in her room.

    You see Francie she is packing a bag"I cannot live in this house anymore,"
    she says."You are so infuriating."

    "Look who's talking,"Will says.

    Francie has come out of the room and notices Syd and Vaughn."Oh hi guys,"she says.

    "Hi we're going to bed,"Sydney says.

    She grabs Vaughn's hand and leads him into the room"night,"Vaughn says.

    "Night,"Francie says.

    Sydney closes the door and shakes her head."I think your right,"she says.
    Vaughn smiles."They'd probably end up killing each other."

    "Come on lets go to bed,"he says.

    She nods.

    ***

    The next morning you see Sydney wake up and stretch"morning,"Vaughn says.

    "Morning,"Sydney says.

    She leans over and kisses him on the lips"so what do you and Bridget have planned for today?"he asks.

    "Shopping while you and Eric are at the game,"Sydney says.

    He nods and smiles"sounds good to me,"he says.

    They hear some smashing and banging and some shouting Sydney groans and just lays her head on Vaughn's chest."Are you okay?"he asks.

    She nods and lays a kiss on his chest"yes I'm fine let's get up,"she says.

    He kisses her hair and they get up she puts a pair of sweatpants on and his shirt."Definitely looks better on you than me,"Vaughn says.

    She smiles"I love you,"she says.

    He strokes her hair tenderly"I love you too,"he says.

    She smiles and they head out of the bedroom you see Francie and Will standing off."You could at least try to like him,"Francie says.

    "You could try to like her,"he says.

    "I don't want to like her she's too prissy,"Francie says.

    He moves out the kitchen and storms out of the house and Francie storms to her bedroom and slams the door.

    "Okay,"Sydney says.She just shakes her head and starts to make breakfast.

    "Shouldn't we do something?"Vaughn asks.

    "No let them work it out,"Sydney says.

    He nods.

    TBC...

    Everyone try to enjoy I know it's kinda pathetic but hey it's a start.

    Please review.
     
  2. Vaughn4ever

    Vaughn4ever Rocket Ranger

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    THIS STORY IS NOT PATHETIC AT ALL. I LIKE THE IDEAS FOR IT A LOT. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE POST MORE. THANKS FOR TELLING ME ABOUT IT!!
     
  3. Vaughn4ever

    Vaughn4ever Rocket Ranger

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    SORRY ABOUT THE PATHETIC THING EARLIER I WAS OUT OF IT AND THOUGHT AT THE BEGGINING U SAID IT WAS PATHETIC SORRY MISINTERCEPTED. :confused: LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! (y) :D
     
  4. Betha Bristow

    Betha Bristow Rocket Ranger

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    well I liked it! I'm one of the first to reply,Yay! Good start, keep going. You've got my interst! :P
     
  5. Moriel

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    this fic is not pathetic i love post more soon hehe lol!
     
  6. Xtremelimits08

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    i luv it write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. aliasgirl89

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    I liked it, a good start. Thanks for the PM. Post asap!
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  8. kate_jones

    kate_jones Rocket Ranger

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    I agree - not pathetic! It was great. A little fast-paced, but that was fine. You're a very good writer. Please continue!
    ~kate
     
  9. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    haha this is really funny!!! i like the whole will and francie thing!! its a great start cant wait to see what happens!! :D (y)
     
  10. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    That was a great start. I am very interested to see what happens, when the earthquake hits. You have my attention! (y) Please update very soon, I love it :D


    Lauren :angelic:

    P.S. Nice touch!!
     
  11. Moriel

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    post more as soon as you can hehehe lol
     
  12. Syd_Vaughn4ever

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    They hate each other??? That doesn't seem right but hey anything can happen! More soon! I LIKE!!! A LOT!
     
  13. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

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    Earthquake
    by:Lili

    Chapter 2

    You see Sydney and Bridget are in the mall they have just gotten there so have no bags.

    "I need to shop,"Bridget says.

    Sydney looks at her and shakes her head"well Bridget that's kind of the point why we are here,"she says.

    Bridget looks at her and smiles"gee I thought it was to get out of the boys hair,"she says.

    Sydney laughs"that too,"she says.

    Bridget laughs as well"what is it with men and their sports?"she asks.

    "Definitely wrong person to ask,"Sydney says.

    "But you like watching hockey so what's up with it,"
    Bridget asks.

    Sydney laughs"Brid I watch it to spend time with Michael that is about it,"she says.

    "Oh,"Bridget says.

    She shakes her head"are you all right?"Sydney asks.

    "Yes I'm fine,"Bridget says.

    Sydney smiles at her"come on so where are we going first?"Sydney asks.

    "Victoria's Secrets,"she says.

    "No,"Sydney says.

    "Oh come on Syd wouldn't Vaughn like that?"Bridget asks.

    Sydney walks away"you go I'm staying right here,"she says.

    Bridget goes over to her and pouts"please,"she says.

    "No now go away,"Sydney says.

    "Please,"Bridget says.

    Sydney looks up at her and sees her friend pouting"oh all right,"Sydney says.

    Bridget smiles and they go across the mall.

    Then you see a man come in and he's walking and looking around everywhere.

    You see him walk by some more shops and his jacket flaps open and you see he has a gun at his hip.

    ***

    You then see Vaughn and Eric sitting on the bleachers watching the game.
    "So what do you think the girls are doing?"Eric asks.

    Vaughn turns his attention away from the game"probably knowing Bridget shopping till they drop,"he says.

    Eric nods"so what do you think of Bridget?"he asks.

    Vaughn looks at him suspiciously"why?"he asks.

    "I was just wondering what you thought about one of your girlfriend's best friends,"Eric says.

    "Uh huh why are you really asking Eric?"he asks.

    Eric looks down"I like her,"he says.

    Vaughn looks over at him"if you were to hurt her Syd would kill you,"he says.
    Eric looks over at him"she'd probably kill me too."

    Eric nods"so what's she like?"he asks.

    "So you want to go ahead even though Syd would kill you,"Vaughn asks.
    "And possibly me."

    "She'd never kill you,"Eric says.

    Vaughn nods and smiles"thanks,"he says."Let's get back to the game."

    They go back to watching the game.

    ***

    Then you see Jack sitting at his desk he stands up from his desk and the next time you see him is when he goes to Irina's cell.

    She's sitting on the floor meditating"hello Jack,"she says without turning.

    "Irina,"he says.

    She turns around and stands up"what do you need to know now?"she asks.
    He's staring at her"what's wrong?"

    He looks down at his shoes"I have some unfortunate news,"he says.

    She nods"my trial is going ahead,"she says.

    He nods his head"yes I tried everything to stop it,"he says.

    "Thankyou Jack,"she says.

    Jack looks at her again"I wish I could have done more,"he says.

    "You did I know you did,"she says.

    He nods his head he looks up at her and has a slight smile on his face.
    Suddenly the whole place starts shaking."What is that?"Jack asks.

    "Feels like an earthquake,"Irina says.

    The guard comes in"sir we have to get you out of here,"he says.

    Jack looks at him"I'm not leaving my wife,"he says.

    "Well I suppose we can't leave anyone,"the guard says.

    He unlocked the cell they came out and as they were about to move out another tremor shook the place some parts of the ceiling started coming down."Everyone down,"Jack says.

    They do get down.

    ***

    You see Eric and Vaughn at the stadium"this is bad,"Eric says.

    "We should get out of here,"Vaughn says.

    Eric nods.

    ***

    You see the girls in the mall they have just purchased some goods they are under a table"what now?"Bridget asks.

    "We wait it out it can't be safe at the moment,"Sydney says.

    Bridget nods.

    TBC

    Well we'll have to wait and see what happens.

    Please enjoy and review.
     
  14. Vaughn4ever

    Vaughn4ever Rocket Ranger

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    THIS STORY IS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!! (y) (y) I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!! :D PLEASE POST MORE SOON. :D P.S. THANKS FOR TELLING ME MORE CHAPTERS WERE UP. :D
     
  15. aliasgirl89

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    That was great cant wait for the next post keep writting!
    ~ASH~
     
  16. Ames47

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    exactly my thoughts!!! cant wait to see what happens!! :D
     
  17. Syd_Vaughn4ever

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    ::Sputters while looking back and forth::OMG!!!! So Jack likes Irina??? Whatever realllllllllly good I WANT MORE!!!! LOL
     
  18. Xtremelimits08

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    This is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
     
  19. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    That was a great chapter. I love the part where Jack shouts "I'm not leaving my wife!" Great, loved it. Nice job, post more soon. Can't wait!!


    Lauren
     
  20. Sophie

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    I was good ! I liked it ! Please go on asap !
     
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